~Musical OS Challenge~ |Updated Page 1 (Black_Maniac)|

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Greetings Everyone!
I hope you are not very busy. Actually I noticed that the forum members have been very busy lately in updating their own stories. We have got great talents, haven't we. I won't name you guys cause everyone is doing an amazing job. You write One Shots, Two Shots, Three Shots, Short Stories or Fanfictions according to what you want. I don't think you were ever challenged, were you? So that is what I have brought. Right now you write according to what you think you can. What if you write on a song outside your comfort zone? Maybe you will come to know what else you can write.
See I won't force anyone.
This isn't a competition. I thought about it. We could enjoy a lot. But I will need your support throughout. It is going to be simple. All participants writing an OS with a song in it. The only twist will be regarding the song. You will have to write it on one of the songs you are offered. I hope the basic idea is clear.
So go ahead!
Post a name of a song on which you think we can write an OS (related to NAUC)
If you comment you are considered as a participant 😉
Also, comment usernames of your friends whom you want to participate.
We can nudge them a little😉

I hope you all liked my idea. Comment below if yes.
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Participants
: itznimi003 (Nimi)
: sam_premc (Annie)
: mansi_as18 (Mansi)
: ...Shibu... (Shibani)
: Niya_789 (Niya)
: naucfan (Anushka)
: crazyvaishu (Vaishnavi)
: Angel_Arya (Anjali) [After 12th December]
: mishrialways (Ritika)

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Choices Of Songs For Challengers
: Bam Bam from Kis Kisko Pyaar Karu
: Raabta from Agent Vinod
: Tum Mile from Tum Mile
: Manali Trance from The Shaukeens
: Ae Mere Humsafar from All Is Well
: Senti Wali Mental from Shandaar
: Sun Raha Hai Na Tu from Aashiqui 2
: Tum Se Hi from Jab We Met
: Tadap Tadap Ke from Hum Dil De Chuke Sanam

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NiBir OS - Man Mast Magan

Kabir sat in his car waiting for Nisha to come out of the house. They had to go to Gangwal House for Karva Chauth functions. He got busy with his phone when he heard the unlocking and locking of the gates. He looked up to find Nisha in a beautiful pink anarkali carrying two big paper bags with her. She wore a look of annoyance. Kabir grinned at her expressions.

Ishq ki dhooni roz jalaaye
Uthta dhuaan to kaise chhupaaye


When Nisha saw him grinning at her, she glared at him. Kabir was still smiling. She walked faster towards the car. She quickly opened the door and sat ignoring him and his gaze. Kabir tapped her on her shoulder. She turned with a scowl when he placed a quick peck on her lips. Nisha was taken in by surprise. Before she could say anything, he placed his hand on her mouth and nodded in a no. Nisha decided to keep quite.

Ankhiyaan kare jee hazoori
Maange hain teri manzoori
Kajra siyaahi, din rang jaaye
Teri kastoori rain jagaaye


The drive was a silent one. When they reached Nisha was about to leave, when Kabir caught her hand and made her sit back. Nisha was shocked. She looked at him while he pointed at his cheek. Nisha flushed crimson.

Man mast magan, man mast magan
Bas tera naam dohraaye
Chaahe bhi to bhool na paaye


She nodded a no and Kabir's grip tightened on her wrist. Nisha gave in to his wish and kissed him on the cheek and quickly left. Kabir grinned stupidly behind her.

Man mast magan, man mast magan
Bas tera naam dohraaye


Kabir was at the shop physically but mentally he was with Nisha. He was remembering the morning incidents when his phone beeped. It was Nisha's message. He quickly read it -

Come here by 8. Also I want a gift in return of the gift I gave you in the morning. Hmph!

Kabir smiled at this. Umesh found him smiling when he came to call him for lunch. He snapped his fingers in front of Kabir and Kabir popped out from his trance. Umesh asked him for lunch but Kabir denied.

Jogiya jog lagaa ke
Makhna rog lagaa ke


Nisha sat on the terrace along with the other ladies. It was seven already. She felt proud of herself that she had kept a successful fast for her husband. She looked at her mehendi which was very dark. It showed how much Kabir loved her. She was thinking about Kabir when Dolly nudged her and Kirti and Jwala dragged her to get her ready. She smiled and obeyed. She wanted to look beautiful for Kabir, her Kabir.

Ishq ki dhooni roz jalaaye
Uthta dhuaan to kaise chhupaaye
Man mast magan, man mast magan
Bas tera naam dohraaye


All men came home, freshened up and went to the terrace. All others went to their wives but Nisha was nowhere to be found. Kabir was searching for her in the whole house when he saw Dolly, Kirti and Jwala giggling. He went to them and arched his eyebrows in question. They giggled some more and then pushed him into a nearby room and locked it from outside. Kabir tapped it a little but the voices died. They had left him there. He heard giggling once again but this time it was Nisha's voice. He turned to find her sitting in the balcony and smiling at him. She wore a beautiful red saree, with golden embroidery borders and shades of pink. Kabir was stunned and started walking towards her. Nisha got up and gulped. Her heart did a little tap dance as Kabir continued coming closer. Nisha closed her eyes as Kabir tucked a few strands of her hair behind her ear. Kabir came even nearer and placed a peck on her lips. He then whispered in her ear - "Jaisa gift waisa return gift"

Chahe bhi to bhool na paaye
Man mast magan, man mast magan
Bas tera naam doharaye
Man mast magan, man mast magan
Tera naam.. bas tera naam doharaaye


Nisha flushed and called Dolly to open the room. Dolly followed what Nisha said grumpily and led them to the terrace. Everyone was waiting for them. When Laxmi saw Nisha and Kabir, she walked to them with tears in her eyes. Kabir and Nisha bent to take her blessings. Bothe of them, then took everyone else's blessings.
That is when Kirti came and excitedly informed everyone that the moon was out. Everyone hurried towards the aarti thaalis that were laid. Nisha took the pallu on her head and took the channani. She saw the moon and the Kabir's face from it. Kabir made her have water and then the sweet. Nisha took the sweet in her hand and turned it towards his mouth.

Odh ke dhaani preet ki chaadar
Aaya tere shehar mein Raanjha tera
Duniya zamaana, jhootha fasaana
Jeene marne ka vaada saancha mera


Kabir was confused like everyone else but then he grinned sheepishly and had it. Nisha also made him have water. Kabir took the plate, placed it aside and pulled Nisha into a tight hug. He pulled apart and placed a kiss on her forehead and hugged her back. The cousins started coughing and Nisha broke apart with embarrassment. Everyone went down to the dining table where many delicacies were laid. They sat down. Kabir and Nisha sat beside each other. Kabir took a piece and made Nisha eat it. She did the same while everyone else admired them.

Sheesh-mahal na mujh ko suhaaye
Tujh sang sookhi roti bhaaye
Man mast magan, man mast magan
Bas tera naam dohraaye

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See I know the OS isn't nice but I wanted to start with the challenge. People were really excited 😆 Still do tell me what I could do to improve myself😳
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Challenge to - mansi_as18
(I am so sorry... Everyone else was busy 😆)
Songs -
Either
Raabta from Agent Vinod
Or
Tadap Tadap Ke from Hum Dil De Chuke Sanam

Edited by Black_Maniac - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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song ...mmm soch k btati hu😉

ya aisa nhi kr sakte kya OS me ek bigadofied song compulsary ho????
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Heyya, good idea ..!!
But I am a little confused, we have to select our own songs or we would be given a song..??
P.S. please don't count me as a participant right now as I don't know if I would be able to write or not, I have exams.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: itznimi003

song ...mmm soch k btati hu😉

ya aisa nhi kr sakte kya OS me ek bigadofied song compulsary ho????


Well Nimi it is going to be a bit different... You won't select the song yourself... You won't get the song you name... When we get ample players we get the same number of songs... Each participant will have any song except the one they had... It would also be like passing the parcel... Suppose I write an OS... I will give your name and an option - Song A and Song B (Both of them will be from the list)... You can select the song you prefer and write on it... Then you name any other participant and give them options Somg 1 or Song 2... They select what they like and post an OS... It goes on till everyone is done 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sam_premc

Heyya, good idea ..!!

But I am a little confused, we have to select our own songs or we would be given a song..??
P.S. please don't count me as a participant right now as I don't know if I would be able to write or not, I have exams.


Suppose I write an OS... I will give your name and an option - Song A and Song B (Both of them will be from the list)... You can select the song you prefer... It will be turn wise... And don't worry... You can be counted as a participant right now... According to the availability your name will be coloured green or red (in my list of participants).. So the one giving you the challenge cannot do so if you are not available... And I'll try my best to get many participants 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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m in... my writings are never without a song and sometimes I write on a song only... 🤣 ok then coming to the song... bam bam from kis kis ko pyaar karon... I so wanted to write on it but couldn't include it anywhere so lets see who can write it for me... 🤣
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Originally posted by: mansi_as18

m in... my writings are never without a song and sometimes I write on a song only... 🤣 ok then coming to the song... bam bam from kis kis ko pyaar karon... I so wanted to write on it but couldn't include it anywhere so lets see who can write it for me... 🤣


You sure itna kathin challenge dena hai? 😕 🤣 Bechare part lene waale bhaag jayenge 🤣 Just kidding... Aakhir challenge yahi toh hai 😆

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