ArShi FF: Sex between Hearts #14 - Thread 15 Link on Pg 151 | Nov 29 - Page 47

The way u have written her dream ...uff it gave goosebumps...just imagining his tears salting her heart...her tear dropped and she felt water reaching her knees...and when she felt tears coming out of her eyes she wanted to clear them but instead found her face dry like leaf...ufff ufff ufff kiya likh deya hay yaaar...his bleeding heart in her hands...and it is hurting khushi...just one dialogue in whole dream and that one line matching the intensity of havoc ,disaster ,tsunami ...breath taking dream...its like when she came out of it ...its after effects were not only disturbing her but i felt equal pain at heart due to its intensity.

her getting ready fast thinking he must be coming soon , at the same time worried back end thinking about dream and facing that bleeding heart ...beautiful

He on phone yet noticing her fresh form,his eyes following her and watching her looking towards his shirt...awesome...khushi confused state is beautifully written ...

his gesture in making her eat dahi...knowing her too well...wt she wants and wt not...arnav has given new meaning to unconditional love here..:)

him feeding her but at the same time his retreating hand...and she noticing it too...my my...how u kept the balance on both sides baby...if he is doing one thing here...she is noticing exact on other end...simple wow

shuki and karan seems cool fun people...loved the friendship with family shared with raizadas...uff her test was so difficult ,u wrote it so real ...live from pastry kitchen...thats was awesome...good to see karan acknowledging her innate talent...very cool decision to have her for one month probation period...

loved arnav support throughout in this all...from understanding her nervous state...to her restless state on knowing the name karan...to his questions requiring sticking to past ...everything superb...loved the way khushi understanding his words...correcting herself,at least trying to ...

it was beautiful the way from seeing sweet he remembered khushi love for it :)...his bought for her...all so cool gestures of him..

hearing karan words on khushi...the way arnav felt proud...and his total understanding in karan's stance...all so feral and brilliant..

again his encouraging words towards khushi...cake from india story ..lol...and then the mind blowing last scene...wow and wow

This girl always amaze me...if heart is out there in prasie of arnav here...same i wanted to do for khushi...they both true sense equal halves...its not like she total gone case in her own pain and hurts...she noticing arnav changes, in-between her own life changed totally,it is not easy for any other girl..but still she managed to notice and then also voicing out her confusion...thats simply brilliant

i am soo sooo sooo happy that its in a way first time...arnav expressed his true heart feelings in front of khushi...wt he is today is all because of her...he wanted to everything acc to her...ufff itna pyaar...i guess now khushi is pretty much clear about the man in front...earlier he just told her fall in love with me khushi...that time circumstances and situations were such that everything else went back step and only khushi misery came front line...but this time him true sense placing his heart in open in front of her...its amazing...his words,u called for it...and then the way he controlled himself again only for her...and her state where she is nothing but bundle of so many emotions...outstanding writing...and his parting words...wow...dare u leave...ufff how much authority those words r having...possessiveness or we say apnaiyat ,apna pun...he said it, loved it...its amazing to see how much u mean to someone :)...that feel is so amazing...i hope khushi take wise decision and instead of running try to face it this time...loved it loved it

The last scene was the bomb! It could have been made so over the top with melodramatic dialogs but that's what I like about your writing. It's so precise, to the point and feels relatable. He said whatever he wanted to say without rambling too much or beating around the bush. At the same time, he also made sure she knows that anything she does or happens between them, he will always be around. Khushi has been warned fair and square (not to sprint). 😆

Now coming to the storyline, I understand that you have a plot, pace in mind and I absolutely love the way everything is progressing coz that's only expected from a woman (Khushi )who's shattered in every which way.. BUT.. how long will our Dr. R suffer in silence? 😭 It just hurts me seeing him in so much pain and giving everything he's got to offer without getting anything in return. Please make him happy, somehow. It doesn't have to be her 'yes', just anything. .

Have a wonderful break. Will eagerly wait for next update.

The dream was so beautifully written. Her heart understood the turmoil the other heart is facing, her heart cried for the other heart's sorrow and the dream was a tribute to the title "Sex between hearts".

Today seeing how tough Khushi is finding to find a job made me confirm more and more that how important it is to get a girl educated. Who knows what circumstances would make them stand at a point in their lives when being independent is the only option left in their lives and at this point they find themselves most incompetent to face the world.

Now Khushi knows how much his heart is hurting. Khushi understood how he is burying his feelings to maintain the distance in their relationship. Waiting to see where this realisation will take her and him their joint journey.

Karan and Sukhi seem to be nice people.

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I'm speechless after this update deepthi👏 This is one of the most beautiful and emotional update of this story especially the 3rd part ⭐️

how many more firsts for both of them??? he never believed in the ritual what his parents followed from ages when they were doing for him, but today he did the same for her for the first time and this is the first time a man is feeding her👏 this scene was very emotional deepthi.. he is slowly becoming her only family😊 that was so nice of kushi to think of taking blessings from raizada couple before heading out on important work.. why is she not realizing that these three have become the world to her..

So, bhavi's guess was right.. you are trying to prove that no two men with the same name are same😆 or you want to make her strong that nothing about her past can effect her present and future, not even the bitterness she has with karan's name.. loved your idea deepthi👏 Arnav's words to motivate her are wonderful⭐️

haha kushi didn't imagine Arnav's reaction before confronting him about the endearments... but, that was a lovely confession of his feelings one more time.. don't know how many times I read that last part and no idea how many more times i'm going to read that👏👏👏 and I think this was needed for kushi to understand the depth of his feelings and I hope things will change for good from now on after that nightmare and this confession... she needs to think about him, forgetting everything, as he is there to take care of other things..

thank you so much for this amazing update and plzzz give us an update before your vacation.. otherwise we all will loose our sanity for sure😆😆

Khushi's dream gave me goosebump.