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Hi guys...this is the first time i am writing a piece of fiction not just on the forum...but for the first time in life too...so i dont know what it will turn out to be like...sorry if its not good
Abeer Malhotra was sitting on his bed ,his fists clenched at his side.He had been sitting in this same place for the last 6 hours in this same place...in utter darkness...but he wasnt least aware of his surroundings.his body was here but his heart n mind were somewhere far away.To the rest of the world abeer malhotra was a happy cheerful prince of his father's empire who would have been kept away from the worries of the world...the charming rockstar living in a world of music...but this was remotely true...he had hias own share of pain in life.He had gone through a lot of pain in the last 8 years-the pain caused by tge guilt of abandoning his love out of foolishness, pain caused by the misunderstanding that she had chosen money over him,pain of hatred when she walked back into his life after 8 years n greeted him casually...as if there was nthng between them...,pain when he thought he was losing her to death , pain of realisation of his love n his mistakes and in the past few days pain triggered bybthe rear of losing her to someone else...
But all that was nothing compared to the wound inflicted on him today...the overwhelming pain didnt just hurt him mentally but seemed to physically weaken him somehow...as if he was shattered to pieces liike a piece of glass.She had broken him today...not just she but her family too...the family he had loved as his own even after breaking of all ties with her...her mom whom he loved as much as his own mom...her brother whom he pampered like his own n even her angry vua whom he had always thought of an honest woman...they had all made a fool of him...for 8 years...keeping from him something he had a right to know about or rather someone who belonged to him.
the events if that evening still felt like a dream...as if he would wake up the next minute to know it was alll a lie...no it want a nightmare but a beautiful dream...but it still bled his heart.His brain was still processing those 4 simple words she said , one sentencewhich changed his world forever..."ishaan tumhara beta hai".it was a language he knew but he was still trying to interpret it .
How could she not telll him...she had cheated him...he was sorry for leaving her..
For his harsh words...but that didnt give ger the right to keep the truth from him...ishaan was his too...n she had lied to him...no he wouldnt forgive her...never...
he got up to pour himself a drink to numb the pain as he had soothed his every pain of the past 8 years...but it didnt work today...smthng pulled him in the opposute direction...n he himself didnt realise when he grabbef his car keys and ran out of his house to where his heart or whayvwas left of it led him...
guys plz give reviews...
criticism is welcome
Abeer Malhotra was sitting on his bed ,his fists clenched at his side.He had been sitting in this same place for the last 6 hours in this same place...in utter darkness...but he wasnt least aware of his surroundings.his body was here but his heart n mind were somewhere far away.To the rest of the world abeer malhotra was a happy cheerful prince of his father's empire who would have been kept away from the worries of the world...the charming rockstar living in a world of music...but this was remotely true...he had hias own share of pain in life.He had gone through a lot of pain in the last 8 years-the pain caused by tge guilt of abandoning his love out of foolishness, pain caused by the misunderstanding that she had chosen money over him,pain of hatred when she walked back into his life after 8 years n greeted him casually...as if there was nthng between them...,pain when he thought he was losing her to death , pain of realisation of his love n his mistakes and in the past few days pain triggered bybthe rear of losing her to someone else...
But all that was nothing compared to the wound inflicted on him today...the overwhelming pain didnt just hurt him mentally but seemed to physically weaken him somehow...as if he was shattered to pieces liike a piece of glass.She had broken him today...not just she but her family too...the family he had loved as his own even after breaking of all ties with her...her mom whom he loved as much as his own mom...her brother whom he pampered like his own n even her angry vua whom he had always thought of an honest woman...they had all made a fool of him...for 8 years...keeping from him something he had a right to know about or rather someone who belonged to him.
the events if that evening still felt like a dream...as if he would wake up the next minute to know it was alll a lie...no it want a nightmare but a beautiful dream...but it still bled his heart.His brain was still processing those 4 simple words she said , one sentencewhich changed his world forever..."ishaan tumhara beta hai".it was a language he knew but he was still trying to interpret it .
How could she not telll him...she had cheated him...he was sorry for leaving her..
For his harsh words...but that didnt give ger the right to keep the truth from him...ishaan was his too...n she had lied to him...no he wouldnt forgive her...never...
he got up to pour himself a drink to numb the pain as he had soothed his every pain of the past 8 years...but it didnt work today...smthng pulled him in the opposute direction...n he himself didnt realise when he grabbef his car keys and ran out of his house to where his heart or whayvwas left of it led him...
guys plz give reviews...
criticism is welcome
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