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Posted: 9 years ago
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Waiting for next. ... abeer meher chemistry
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hey guys...thanks for commenting...back with the next part...this one is Ishbeer too...hope u like it..
CHAPTER 5
The signal was about to turn green in seconds but all the drivers were looking at something going on in one of the cars parked at the signal.
Mere Nishaan...Mere Nishaan
The song was being sung by the one driving one of the cars...someone everyone knew- Rockstar Abeer Malhotra. And someone was singing with him. A little boy whose voice sounded as sweet as the voice of the man beside him was charming. This one would be a good singer when he grows up...they thought.At that moment the signal turned green and the car drove off.
In the car Abeer couldn't help smiling. He was proud to hear Ishu sing.
Ab: " Ishu dekha na...teri gaana sab sun rahe the"
Ish: "Nahin...who log toh aap ko dekh rahe the...ab celebrity jo ho"
Ab: "Mere saath rahega toh tu bhi celebrity hi banega na"
Ish: "Par aap best ho"
Ab: "Tu mujhse se bhi accha banega...aur to toh all rounder hai"
He smiled indulgently at his son...he was already a proud doting father.
Ish: "Where r we going?? This is not the way to Groove. Are u not taking me to mom"
Ab: "Yes genius, we r not going to Groove coz ur mom isn't at office. Your mom is busy with her wedding plans. So I can drop u home when I wish to "
Ish: "That's awesome...So what r we gonna do today? "
Ab: "we are going to meet 2 people u will love to be with...don't ask any more questions...u ask so many questions like ur mom...surprise crasher"
He liked to see Meher in Ishaan...but hated it as much. These days he was just avoiding her. He even referred to her as Ishaan's mom as far as possible or as boss. Saying her name...the name of his one loved...made his heart ache and at the same time a mirth. So he stuck to referring to her as his son's mom. that's all she will be to him in a few days.
Soon he parked his car in front of Malhotra Mansion. As they got out Ishaan started with his queries.
ISh: "this place is beautiful...is it ur home?"
Ab: "oh genius...would I park my car at anyone else's home..u r supposed to be a genius...like ur mom"
Ish: "Do u know mom that well?"
The question shocked him. He decided to stop talking about her to Ishaan.
Ab: "Of course...she was my friend...n plz no more questions...chalo. You r gonna meet my parents and u call them daadu dadi"
Ish: "ok...but isn't that what u call u dad's parents..."
Abeer flashed an indulgent smile at his son. The guy was so like his parents..
Ab: "well...true...but its ok...wat else will u call them?"
With these words he dragged Ishaan into the house. He remembered the day when he had told his parents about Ishaan. It was hilarious.
the morning after he had become friends with Ishaan he had come home rather happily and sat at the table with his parents for breakfast only to see them smiling in surprise.
Ma: "You r ok na beta...tum itni jaldi uth gaye..bahar gaye..aur waapas aa gaye.."
Ab: "yes mom...just thought of being a gud son"
Ku: "You seem very happy"
Ab: "haan...aur mein aap logon ke liye ek khushkhabri laaya hoon...sunke aap bhi khush ho jaayenge...mom plz koi sweet la deejiye"
His mom had brought out some swweets immediately. He fed both of them.
Ma: "Abh toh bata Abeer...kya hua?"
Ab: "toh suniye...aap log dada dadi ban gaye ho"
His parents looked at him in shock n disbelief.They had formed quite other ideas. He couldn't help laugh at their expressions.
Ku: "Yeh kya bol raha hai tu...kya kar diya tune"
Ma: "Beta...ladki kaun hai"
Ab: "Ladki nahin ladka...oh..u mean the mother...Mom seriously u have a doubt?? Mein patnivrata hoon...its ur bahu's child I am talking about"
This left them further confused. Deciding not to play anymore he told them the whole thing.
Ma :"Icant believe meher did this n even sumanji??:
Ab: "Mom its her fault...mummyji was under pressure from her"
Ku: "We will get ur son from her...I will call the lawyer"
Ab: "No dad...don't do anything...Ishaan is her son as well...I don't wanna snatch anything more from her...I only want to have Ishu in my life...I will handle this"
He had said this sternly n hid dad had for one complied.
And today Ishaan washer e to meet them.
Madhvi came running to them n hugged Ishaan and welcomed him while Kuber lifted him and started playing with him. After all this was his scion.the day passed on beautifully and Ishaan returned home with lot of gifts after clicking a snap with the Malhotras. As he dropped Ishaan home Abeer looked at the pic...a perfect family snap...but there was one person missing...his wife...Ishaan's mom...Meher.
And now that place would remain vacant forever he thought.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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as always amezing update..

loved it!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Pls update and pm me
Very nice write up!
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Hi guys...thanks for encouraging me to update...i have tests n stuff cmng up...so i am not updating daily

CHAPTER 6

Being the CEO of a company Meher Purohit was always busy but she liked it. Working kept her mind off from more difficult issues...her personal life which was a complete mess at the moment and who was responsible for it she wasnt sure anymore. Her work was an excuse these days to keep away from her own matriage plans. She wasnt the least excited about it. She had been 8 years ago but that was different. Meher Purohit then was a young girl who like every other bride had dreams of a happy future with her true love her soulmate. But today Meher Purohit was a woman...a mother...who was getting married to a man she would never love in order to get rid of the man whom she still loved so that she could keep their son away from him.This what the reason she had given herself when she said yes to Akshat. But she wadnt sure about it now. Abeer was already in Ishaan's life and they were quite happy together. Over the past few days her heart told her that she was marrying Akshat not for Ishaan but as a mere escape route for herself. To stop her heart from leading her back to her Abeer. Her Abeer...that was what he was n will always be...but she wouldnt be his in another 2 days. Tomorrow she would belong to Akshat. She would be his wife...caring responsible friendly but never loving...coz her heart was still with Abeer...loving him..n pleading with her to go back to him. Couldnt she just call offf the marriage??
Ya n run back to Abeer and let him break her again andthis time Ishaan too would be affected.No.She would get married tomorrow as planned.

Her thoughts turned to Abeer n Ishaan. Their relatiionship was blooming n their bond growing strong. That worried her. Her mom had been right. Abeer had made his place in Ishaan's life. A very special place. Over the past few days she had seen her son change from the her quiet son to a little rockstar...his true self. Now except for yhe chashmish part and hus report card ge had nothing in commom with his mamma. He really was Ishaan Abeer Malhotra. She couldnt say she didnt like it. It was after all the Abeer in Ishaan that kept her going. Ishaan had always been good with Akshat but with Abeer he was happy...just like her.Abeer loved him to the core. Ishaan like Abeet wanted to ve the centre of attention always. She had eefused him that but Abeer gave him all the attention he wanted and he loved it. They were so alike that they could perfectly be just themselves around each other and still seem perfect to eaxh other...and her. Everytime she saw them enjoying each other's company her heart hoped for a happy future together...only to be chided by her dimaag that she shouldnt trust abeer. He had loved her as much at a time but in a minute he himself broke her heart. What if he did it again??

But there were two other aspects of this bond that was bothering her even more. One was the fact that Abeer still hadnt tild Ishaan the truth. And that presented an array of questions...most frightening of which was how she was going to explain herself to Ishaan.

Another problem was the effect this new found relation had on other relationships around Ishaan. He had always enjoyed Akshat's company. They were even friends. But now Ishaan spent so much time with Abeer that he didnt even talk properly to Akshat. Akshat's bobd with him would never be able to compete with Abeer's. While Akshat was a friend and family member Abeer was his pqrtner in crime...his idol...and afterall his own blood. But this was not good. They were sion going to be a family n Ishaan had to learn to behave with Akshat as before. She knew Akshat was worried about this too. She had to do something. She didnt want ti be anymore unfair to him. And then there was bua. While her mom n tunnu were more than happy to see Abeer around Ishaan Bua was pissed. The guitar and singing had been the final stroke. She had shouted at Ishaan n her ziddi son qas now irritating her evenmore now..like his dad the guy did exactly what people stopped him from doing.

These thoughts clouding her mind Meher had been staring at the blank laptop screen for more than an hour when someone patted her on the shoulder jerking her back to reality. It was Bua n Akshat. They sat down near her. She put down the laptop and looked at them enquiringly. They probably wanted to ducuss about the wedding and she would hav to pretend to listen again.

Ak: "Meher we hav to discuss something very important...about Ishaan. Where is he??"

Meh: "what is it?? He went ti school with Abeer"

Bua: "so he is with Abeer again. Meher , what is wrong with you?? You want Abeer to bond with Ishaan?? Ishaan already has enough of his dad's traits. Abeer's influence is making him a mini Abeer...artogant and stubborn...and he runs aroubd with that guitar alm
l day n sings that song just to torture me. Do something Meher. Stop Abeer from meeting Ishaan."

Meh:"Bua i remember everything but Ishaan is a kid and i cant force him too mich.It will only make him more ziddi. And Abeer ...iI cannot stop him...everything is going smooth now bua n I dont know how to stop him. The truth has been kept from him so long and i think thats unfair."

Bua started to say something but Akshat signed her not to. He took the conversation into his hands.

Ak: "Meher I am worried about my son. I am gonna lose him to Abeer if this goes on. Isnt that unfair to me?? I have alwaysbeen there for the both of u when you needed help. I know u cant keep Abeer away so I want you to do something. "

He handed her a set of papers. She looked at it and was shocked.

Meh: "what is this Akshat?? You want Ishaan's custody??"

Ak: " Yes. Meher u know i have to leave for my next prohect in Hong Kong 3 days after our marriage. Our original plan was that I will leave u two behind but now Bua n I feel that we shouldnt be seperated so soon after our wefding. So u 2 will come with me. A month later we will leave for London where I will be for a year or two. So i have to get ur Visas n stuff. I will hav to postpone my trip too. And Iwant Ishaan's partial custody so that Abeer cannot take him away from me. Plz Meher"

Meg: " But Abeer n Ishaan...what do i tell them...they wont like this..."

Bua cut her off.

Bua: "Meher dont behave like ur mom. This is the best way. Ishaan will forget Abeer once he is with his mom and dad. Kids r like that. And Abeer deserves it. Do it Meher or you will end up making Ishaan the next Abeer. "

Meh: "bua...I hav hurt Abeer enough...i dont think he will take ut anymore."

Bua: "Meher...plz...i know wgats best for you...you r being so selfish...Do u still love that guy"

Meher took one deep breath.

Meh: "Ok...I will do this...I will giv u Ishaan's partial custody"

Then it happened. She heard a voice behind her.

" And who are you to decide that?" The voice said.

She turned back and saw the face she dreaded. There stood Abeer Malhotra. He walked towards her and grabbed her by the shoulders.He pulled her close to him.

" Ishaan is my son. You just cant let this guy adopt him. He is mine. And i will kill u if u think about doing this" he whispered into her ears. He was fuming. His eyes were bloodshot n brimming with tears. His hold hurt her a lot. But she didnt stop him. If this was his way of making her feel his pain she was ready to take it...to share it. Seeing him like this was torture.

But she had to do this. Push him away at any rate.

" I will...akshat is my fiance..."

" I know...but he is not Ishaan's father. I am. And I have no intention of letting my son go. " he replied.

He held her closer and said

" You r the most selfish woman i ever met. You care only about yourself. First u hid my son from me...thej lied he is someone else' s son...n know when i know everything u wanna take him away?? Have u thought about how I feel when he calls this guy papa n still i didnt tell him the truth. Why?? For you. I wanted you to be happy. But you dont deserve any goodness. I thought I should begave like an adult...so i was patient with you...but I am done. The old Abeer Malhotra is back baby...back with a bang...and u know what he does to his enemies. I thought we could share him..that we wouldnt do any drama. But watch out. I will take get my son back Meher - by hook or crook."

She was shocked. What had she done??? He looked at her with disgust in his eyes. It hurt her.

Akshat said " abeer let go of her. She is my fiance."

He let go n pushed her away.

He smiled at Akshat n said " Tu bhi na kabootar...all u claim to be yours is mine...I didnt want your fiance...but now i will make sure you dont get either of them'

With one cold stare at her Abeer was gone. As she watched him storm out of her house she realised what she had just done. She had ecited a dormant volcano and now she will burn in its wrath.

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Hope u guys like it...its a tad bit long

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Guys sorry for not pm ing u guys...i am using my phone n am.not able to get inbox properly
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We have officially found the new CV of the show... Its you...!!!
You are brilliant n I'm loving this story...!!! ❤️
Ishaan n abeer... The bond is magical and thanks to you we get to read it... I toh imagine it... So that's super great...!!! 👏
Bua n akshat... Well I hate bua more... And meher is also in the category... 😳
But my abeera is back... That's the best part... ⭐️
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Amazing Update 👏
You are going Great Yaar.👍🏼
I am loving it.
Keep writing
Waiting for Next Part. ..
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can't wait for the next one... do tell us soon what Abeer does :(
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Hi guys...so i am gonna update the next chapter...this one is the effect of watching too many ekta shows...dont kill me... 😉

CHAPTER 7

The mirror in the hall showed a breathtaking image of the bride who stood before it. She looked as if she had just walked out from a fairytales book. She was dressed in a heavy red n dark blue velvet lehenga. She was arrayed with jewelry of all sorts from head to toe. The colors made a lethal combnation with her fair skin.Her face was smooth and glowing. Her cheeks were rose due to the makeup and her beautiful eyes lined with kajal n mascara. She was so beautiful that her husband would have a hard time looking away from her today. But there was something missing. There was no smile on her face let alone the shy smile of a bride.confusion was etched in her features. Her eyes were focused on the mirror loo king at something intently.

Meher was looking at her own reflection in the mirror but her eyes were not appreciating her own beauty. Her eyes were focussed on two things only- the black beads of her mangalsutra and the bright red sindoor in her parting. She didnt know what was so shocking about them but she couldnt take her eyes off them. They were not new to her. But then it was 8 years since she had seem herself like this. And then times had changed n so had she. She wasnt the dreaming girl from then ...she wws a disillusioned woman. That must be it she thought. No a voice within her told her. She still had dreams and chances. Another voice told her not to listen to the first. This was just a compromise nothing more. She shut out bith the voices.

Her heart n her brain. Would they ever say the same thing?? The battle between them was killing her. This battle had been raging for years now. Till he had come into her life she had never listened to heart or even heard it. It was just her brain she depended on. Then he came and he taught her to listen to it n then she had given her heart fulll control. Then he left and her hear was busy weeping and trying to nurse itself. Her brain took control. Once more she became her practical self drowning her heart's voice within herself. And tgen when he returned her heart started this battle it once lost again. It was always at war with her brain. She had adhered to her brain but her heart was making her weak. Now she was done with this. Today too one of tgem was leaping in joy while the other moaned in defeat.

Her life was becoming more and more a mess. She looked away from the mirror breaking away from her thoughts. This place was filiar to her and yet she was a bit restless. Thankfully no one was around. They were decorating the room. Thankfully she didnt have to go into the room till her husband was back and he wasnt back yet. It was more than three hours her husband and son had left. She had no idea where they were. She looked at her phone. Not a single call. She sat down on the couch to wait.once again her thoughts were disturbing her. She closed her eyes and tried to clear her head.

"Mom" she heard Ishaan call her enyering the house happily.

She looked at them and smiled at Ishaan and asked him "where on earth were you two??"

"We went to get you a wedding gift. Here it is . Papa said it is very special. We waited for them to make it"her son said sounding excited.

"Wow...give it to me. And thanks to the both of you." She said looking at them.

They smiled at each other as she opened the gift.

Inside it was a gold bracelet with stones...but what was special was the word on it...
the name she loved the most...Mehbeer.

She looked up at him. Abeer was looking at Ishaan , smiling and winking. He picked Ishaan up and told her with a goofy smile
"Thats my gift for our wedding Mrs Meher Abeer Malhotra".

Her heart leaped with joy while her brain moaned in defeat as he reminded her that she was now officially his wife.

"I love u both " ishaan said as Abeer let him down and went to get his daadi to show her the gift.

As he left his parents gave each other one cold glare and turned away from each other.

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I know this is too dramatic...bear with me...i will be updating on monday probably...thanks for reading.

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