ArShi FF: Sex between Hearts #14 - Thread 15 Link on Pg 151 | Nov 29 - Page 14

Deepthi you are the master at confusing people heheh sometimes with your teasers some times with your note about update or teaser 😆

Haha... i came on this thread after 24 hrs srilatha. ..

So, i thought of trying my luck asking for an update than a teaser ;-)

Its going to be update dear :)

Abba chaa 😆😆

The beauty of this chapter ,this night is such that i dont feel like doing my bak bak to break the charisma which is created around me throughout its read..after reading this chap...i can well imagine y u stopped the last update there...seriously this night ,this scene demands a total separate page of respect :)..infact let me say big thank u ,the way u have put ur whole heart and soul in it .. it fabulous...simply brilliant.

wt a serene sweet moments of mid night shared by these two..talking sharing crying smiling,caressing and caring ...magical...his touches,his smiles, his assurance and his in a way repeating of promise ...wt a guy seriously..burrying his feelings deep down only for her...

i am impressed by khushi a lot here...she is such an easy soul...ready to adjust anywhere...the way she brought ease to arnav ...the way she expressed her feelings regarding his parents ,their efforts,she feeling content here...u have written her lonely state so beautifully deeps...her miserable state ,asking arnav again and again just wanted to know that he is there for her...that assurance that she is not alone,she wanted to make karan wrong here...her life not total loss case..thats awesome

seeing him saying sorry ,the way she gave peace to his hurting guilty heart...and then her words on her father...so so true,kitna sahi kaha khushi ney,if a father of girl not coming after his girl for 24 hours ,then there will be no hope left from him,yeah a night out of home for a girl is way too much, very deep in meaning. i am impressed by her the way his soothing yet fighting positive words brought back life in her...she is not in this world to cry,she is such an innocent soul who deserves happiness,free fly...the childlike her excitement after life coming back in her eyes in her smiles,her joy about being auspicious..uff amazing...

her talks on job,her admission about not memorising for long..:)...i feel the khushi really any next door simple girl...u r not at all trying to show some super woman in her...keeping it as real to life as possible ,really amazing approach ...

on other side...arnav right there with her...supporting her,respecting her likes dislikes about job thing..the whole emotional journey of her from the moment he make her sit on bed till him making her sleep...beautiful...

his sorry for leaving her at new place,his efforts in bringing her at ease...his understanding about her fragile state having more to it...wt u r hiding,that was so awesome of him...and then after listening to her pain..his supportive words...i think golden words of his on lovers and haters :)...and then F those who r mess in her life...awesome.

Him smiling with her smiles...his wiping of tears one or two..when ever they left her eyes..uff beautiful..

his unconditional support on job matters...and then the way he put her to sleep...simply beautiful ,eternal :)

Before going into sleep...her confusion and in a way her clarity about the man in front that something is off about him...earlier also he kept quiet when she told him about the touching of feet..and her eagerness to know his reply...and then the way u have shown wt she is missing from last few days,his fun side i guess...him giving her cool fun names...the morning and night ending with his endearments...her mind has started to see wt he is trying to hide :)...thats so cool going..

Beautiful the way u have shown her going into sleep and his state in the end seeing the sleeping beauty in front...all superb fantastic...loved it to the core :)

But even today she is not alone as Arnav said there are people who love her more than their life and are ready to do anything. I really felt very bad when she repeatedly asked Arnav the reason for his return she was so desperate to hear his reply , this shows how much she was disturbed. Aww so cute of Khushi to acknowledge Abhay and Gayatri's love and feel happy about it hahhah I love the kid in Khushi.

The whole update for me is like a song which touches the soul of the listener. 👏

My Res! 😊

Unres...

Deepthi,

This was a beautiful chapter...so full of hope for the future , for me...Khushi feeling the withdrawal symptoms after her night of bravado...where she moves on figuratively...however she feels the angst and the sadness of not having her family around...rightfully. No matter how comfortable the Raizadas try to make her feel, there is a part of her looking at their kinship and camaraderie, that wishes her own family was something like this. She cannot help marvel at the huge difference...she cannot help hurting now because in this critical juncture, when there is a no show by Shahsi and family, who she had imagined would come searching for her, she is taken back to Karan's hurtful words that they must be just too glad to be rid of her. 😭

The natural desire every human being feels to be loved by someone begins to take root. She waits for Arnav, the only one yet who has loved her unconditionally, outside of that beleaguered family, to come and tell her he cares. She fights with him to get him to admit the same. Poor Arnav is battling his own demons...on the one hand he feels guilty for having left her alone in a new place, on the other he is trying to fight his romantic feelings for her and treat her simply as a friend...but they neither of them, manage to keep that distance.

The scene where Arnav puts her to bed and rubs ointment over her feet, and the one where Khushi hysterically laughs relating to Arnav how his parents called her 'auspicious' were especially poignant. Arnav is keeping her every wish in mind, including not pressing her to work in the hospital, given her sad track record with hospitals...too beautifully conceived.

What can I say, rula diya, Deepthi! Update jaldee karogee, na?! ❤️

Waiting!