Never Alone... (Part 13: page 23)

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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Posted: 10 years ago

#131

Kk🤗

I am stunned by the beauty of this update. I must say, the last bit took my breath away.. Zara's first wish, the flying... it must feel so amazing to soar up in the sky, to be held by the one you love and just feel the wind in your hair... siiigh. Not possible unless we are paragliding or parasailing of course😛 .. Maybe somedaaay!

Anywaaay... it's not easy to write fantasy, u know and u are doing so great that i feel so proud of ya😳

The attack had me scared.. although I kinda knew Lucian wouldnt completely stay away.

I am hoping Ryan's plan works out - I am sure it will, right?😉

His love for Zara is so pure and beautiful... the flying scene revealed it all.

And Jenny.. the soft on the inside and hard on the outside person. That one scene spoke a lot KK... it made me a little emotional.

I hope this beautiful pair never gets separated (sochna bhi mat!).. their love is just tooo tooo pure and beautiful. (I dunno how many times I wrote beautiful)😳

Loved the updatee.. please update sooon😃

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Devangana

@Devangana

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#132

Ryan and Zara are lovely together. But the danger is coming closer. Please continue soon.

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Aliya

@Darlingladdu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#133

Waw,
Awesome update i just love it.
Keep it up
Update soon

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Areesha

@Areesha566

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#134

As always a brilliant piece of fic di
Love it 😃
Thanks for pm

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Swara85

@Swara85

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Posted: 10 years ago

#135

Commenting on last two parts..Sorry for being late.

Firstly I Loved the conversation between Ryan and Augustine.. 👍🏼And I actually imagined the place and the scene..Was biting my nails while reading it..Passing through the gates..the question about memories and only 3 questions to ask..to the end..It was Wow.👏
Oh Thank You there is a way..But even after sacrificing, will they win the war.?
And and Ryan-Zara moment was sweet..Zara is such a sweetheart..!
Michael's changing a bit was lovely to read.

Part 10:
Loved every bit of Zara-Ryan scenes..❤️They were so beautiful..👏I so love them. And the one where she was excited of being with an Angel..that was so cute..
Aww..to fly..I wish there were such powers so even we could also fly in the clouds..The scene there was beautifully described..👍🏼
You know you make me imagine the scenes happening and I had to bring myself out of it..I love you for this.🤗
Lucian got to know he broke some rules..hope this doesn't make him create difficulties in Ryan's plan..Waiting for the Big Day..*fingers-crossed*.

And Jenny..I was like a bit emotional..I liked the way her character is designed..
Waiting to know about other angels' decision..Aur please unko alag mat karna..

I loved both the updates..thanks for pms..

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Anu

@anu91

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#136

Superb update di. ..

Loved it...

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kunchu

@kunchu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#137

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904129

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#138

Awsum Update Heli Di..😊 Ryan-Zara's love is so so Pure! ❤️ So Mushy and Soulful! ❤️ I love their forbidden union! ☺️ Lets see what fate has planned for them. Thanx fr pm! Update Soon.

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Delusional Minx

@Delusional_Minx

Stunner

+ 32

Dialogue Dynamos

Posted: 9 years ago

#139

Wow, Super awesome update di

loved it to the core

It was the best update till now!

All the protector angles got back their memories n they agreed to help Ryan! Good!

Jenny's care was nicely penned!
Zara-Ryan's convo was beautiful! Their trips were lovely! The human n angel united, the forbidden tale is complete for now!

Beautifully written!

The war awaits!

Eagerly waiting for the next part

do continu soon

thanks for pm