congratulations on new thread ...may u have many many many many more 😊
wt a bang on start of new thread with excellent chapter👏...its beautiful the way u have written it...from starting till end...emotions at there best...hurt ,pain,anger,disappointment,smiles ,friendship,love,trust...name it and have it ...everything was there...
From day one the feeling was like wow arnav is a gem of a person...he is at giving end...but today i can say with immense satisfaction ...that his heart is not beating for some random girl...he got real time equal partner in giving back with full honesty and sincerity no matter how much tough the storm is ...this girl who is nothing but broken shattered soul is able to give back with full sincerity the due respect which he deserves...i have seen her as a fighter for her babies...i have seen her as a fighter for her bestie...its like she is drowning but tried her best for arnav to reach safe shore...
i dont know how to express my pain for khushi here...i dont know wt was in her mind when she was taking the steps towards arnav's place...kiya gouzari hogee dil per when she came to know that he is not at home...uff...wt a lonely soul ...she has really lost a family...and the guard words regarding ur name as in his family...and the way u have written her turmoil attached with this word...un bearable and un believable...how much she suffered...the wait outside his black door...that ting voice ..her eyes landing on him...and then the hug which it self was screaming her pain and at the same time satisfaction of being in arnav's arms...beautiful...breath taking...i think one hug was there when she went to anjali arjun party ..and that hug was for arnav's birthday...but this one truly called THE HUG :)...its intensity the way u wrote it...the force with which she hugged him...mind blowing...can i say ...i loved loved his fingers running in her hair :)...its beautiful
well arnav coming out of elevator...his confusion on seeing her...thinking maybe hallucinating her again...and then him saying khushi...my heart missed the beat even there :)...kiya likha baby...awesome superb...he is gem of a person ...epitome of excellence ...no words can do justice in his praise...his desicion of taking her to his parents place...in order to safe her innocence dignity...while his eyes were on keycard lying on floor...ufff...kayse bataon how excellent u wrote it..:)loved it
abhey and gayatri such an awesome parents...and usually the focus remains more on gayatri that she is awesome mom and all...but the way abhey received the sms...and his eagerness to know the cause ...and then seeing only khushi face ...he came to conclusion that something is not right...was fabulous ...other hand gayatri love on seeing both of them together was brilliant too :)...such an understanding parents...they know when to give space...when to take step forward...its beautiful writing deeps
u know in this all mess ...i found her innocence back...when she tried to hide herself behind him seeing abhay gayatri in front...aweee...its beautiful...her innocence was right there when she was trying to safe arnav from his parents wrath...and best thing with her every gesture..she is winning the hearts of people around her in few mins... but with those she spent her whole life...they unable to see this innocence in her...they unable to treasure this gem
loved the way arnav took care of her ...bringing milk..setting bed...making her comfy around...loved her thoughts while looking into mirror...brilliant writing...the crack on mirror or her own soul...uff amazing amazing...no crack in mirror but one in her..issue with her and not the mirror...ufff...beautiful
her eyes alive,thats how he found her ...she sitting on floor...the balcony reminds me of her terrace...its like she found solace in between mid night...something common she found finally for peace...the open air ,night and city lights...her link with these all r kind of beautiful in my eyes..:)...
he heard it loud and clear wt his heart wanted to know...she told him all...and most imp she believes him :)...beautiful...nothing else matter to him...nothing else matter to her
both sitting together...looking into each other eyes some times ...some time she holding his palm...some time he holding her hand...she caressing his palm worried about his injury ,feeling it on her heart...he feeling her blisters of feet ,bleeding his heart...she started with hug he ended with hug...it was night when she started the journey of pain once again with him while sharing all the bad...and it was new dawn out on sky of eternal togetherness in each other embrace...i felt the pain flowing in ur writing in woh keya kehtay hain ode of melancholy...although she was sharing openly ...hurt pain ...the ambiance was calm...something peaceful was there...its like after the storm ,silence...
p:s...will
NOT VOTE Edited by lalarukh - 9 years ago
33