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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

@Friedriceji

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Posted: 10 years ago

#961

And my dhak dhaks too!!!

I thoroughly enjoyed reading the last two chapters I missed. Khushi's decision of leaving her home was the highlight. It was totally unexpected from her to do so, coming from such a conservative background, the move was surely something no one had expected.

I think she is better off without them. I know they are her family but, they are too complicated. And their affection and love for her is too tainted. I dont even want to comment on the society they live in.

Arnav's family looks like a dream one. So much understanding an openness in their talks and beliefs. Adorable! No wonder Khushi is having such alien feelings around them, she never witnessed such bonds in her life. Poor thing.

I really want her to stop friendzoning Dr. Rji and give him a break from all the rejections he faced. And I believe the start of dhak dhak's are a turning point, right?

Cant wait to read further.

Thanks a hell lot Deeps for all those PMs, I feel so bad when I dont get time to read and comment for chapter by chapter. I will try my best to be consistent with my comments from next chapter.

I heard you were unwell. I hope you are doing better now.

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ipkndlover75

@ipkndlover75

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Posted: 10 years ago

#962

Very touching and long update...!!!

It sure managed to tingle the senses.. Nice to see Khushi starting to feel for Arnav...bucket and mug was so cute!!!..she's so down to earth n simple!!

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shubhi7

@shubhi7

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Posted: 10 years ago

#963

Loving the way how everybody is concerned about Khushi... And the way Arnav is caring it's just so touching...he truly loves her

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barsana

@barsana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#964

this arnav is so so loveable...

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scrapbooker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#965

I love the way this story has progressed... Slowly, realistically... Tough set of circumstances you put Khushi in... It SHOULD have taken a lot to overcome that... And a person needs lot of support... That you provided from some expected and some unexpected sources... Love Arnav's character ( whenever I leave that comment in a story I think to myself... duh! but I think you know what I mean ). You have made him very different from his regular avatar! Fantastic!

P.S. Thx for the PM

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Meeshaali

@Meeshaali

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Posted: 10 years ago

#966

I read your fiction because it gives me peace n immense pleasure I think coz I don't have this kind of love n care in my life from my life partner as Khushi but Now when she finally have ... I'm kind of jealous though I know she can have that coz it's just a fiction still it hurts dear... why life is so tough to live
But let me tell you something your writing is the only thing which heels my pain n sorrow' thank you sooo much so very much for this effort... it's like a ointment to me