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RaMaya TS: Making things right.

It had been 2 weeks since Rama and Amaya got married and shifted to Mathur's haveli. The wall which had been taken down after 20 + years had been replaced by a rope separating the two houses. Amaya silently bore everyone's hatred. Rachita who had given the benefit of the doubt too was no longer on her side after the Guptas shifted to Mathur haveli. Amu' she longed to hear someone call her lovingly but all she heard was Amaya Gupta, hate was the only feeling associated with that name. Amaya was all alone in her fight with the chandal chaukdi. For the sake of her family's reputation and happiness she had to do things she never would. She did it all while teaching a couple of small lessons to her sasuma.

Jeevan saathi' is someone who is with you every step of the way for life, Amaya had heard this and believed it to be true but when she looked at Rama she did not see it in him. He hated her the most. What right does he have to hate me? He was the one who went along with the chandal chaukdi's plan. He was the one who married her having full knowledge of it. He knew everything even Rachita di's secret. What right does he have to accuse me? What right does he have to call me characterless, cheat and a person of the last order?' Amaya sat thinking in her room after Rama once again insulted her.

"Oh maharani!" Sumitra called Amaya. She got off the bed and prepared herself for another challenge. "Jijji, wo ek baar mein aane walon mein se nahi hai! Dekha nahi tumne use har baar wohi ki wohi chaabi lagani padti hai." The chandal chaukdi rolled their eyes and made wicked faces. "Kya hai?" Amaya stood with her hands crossed at her chest. "Sun le! Maine Rama ki shadi ke liye mannat maangi thi. Ab jaisi bhi hui hai jisse bhi hui hai mere Rama ki khsuhi ke liye ye mannat pori karni hogi." Sumitra stood in front of Amaya with her hand on her waist. "Toh main kya karoon?" "Kheer aur poori banana hai tujhe 5 bhraminon ke kiye. Aur sun ek ek poori gol gol banni chahiye. Poori ginkar mat banana kam nahi padni chahiye samjhi nahi toh!" Sumitra gave Amaya a warning which she understood very well. "Theek hai."

Amaya was walking aimlessly thinking about her ordeal. "Ae! Kya kar rahi ho?" Amaya was irritated enough and to make things worst Rama yelled at her. "Kya hai? Kyun chilla rahe hain aap? Aur aap hote kaun hain jo mujhpar chillane wale?" Amaya yelled back. "Tum darwaza knock karke nahi aa sakti kya? Main change kar raha tha." "Darawaza band ho toh knock karte hain khule darwaze ko kyun knock karoon? Change karna tha toh darwaza band karna chahiye tha na!" "Ladke aise hi change karte hain." "Haan toh phir koi bhi aa sakta hai uss baat ke liye bhi tayyar rehna chahiye." "Theek hai ab jao yahan se." "Haan ja rahi hoon mujhe shaukh nahi hai yahan rukkar aapko change karte hue dekhna." "Tumhara koi bharosa nahi! Jo ladki..." "Bas!" Amaya yelled as she knew what Rama was going to say next.

Amaya stormed out of the room. Their voices had been heard in both houses. They fought every day. There was not a single day when Rama did not insult her for what she had done to her family and him. Amaya tried hard not to let Rama affect her but he did. The harsh words of her family made her stronger to fight for them but Rama's accusations made her weak even if were for a second he did weaken her. She was going to the kitchen when she was passing by the chandal chaukdi's planning adda, Sumitra's bedroom. "Arri Sumitra, ye Rama aur wo modi roz roz aise ladte rahe toh kahin kisi din Rama ke moonh se sach na nikal jaaye. Amaya ko lagta hai ki Rama ko sab pata tha par use toh Amaya ke bare mein sindoor bharte waqt pata chala. Amaya humaara sach use bata sakti hai agar use ye Rama ka sach pata chala. Tera beta tujhse bahut pyar karta hai par wo modi bhi kuch kam na hai kahin Rama ko tere khilaaf na kar de." Rama's grandmother expressed her worry.

Amaya was shocked to hear the truth. Rama, ko kuch bhi nahi pata tha aur maine!' Every fight where Amaya accused Rama of knowingly marrying her, betraying his love for Rachita flashed before her eyes. She thought he had wronged Rachita but she was the one who had wronged him. She sacrificed her life and love for her family's honor and happiness but what was Rama sacrificed for? When all of this will be over she will get her family's honor, her father's last memory everything back. Rachita will one day find someone she will love and who will love her back. She might have a chance with Mantu... What about Rama? He will be left empty handed. Amaya came out of her thought when she heard some noise.

"Pani chahiye, main deti hoon." Amaya moved towards Rama who was picking up a glass. "Mere haathon mein mehendi nahi lagi. Main khud le sakta hoon aur tumhe mere liye kuch karne ki zaroorat nahi hai. Tum pehle hi bahut kuch kar chuki ho. Ab maaf karo humein. Hato!" Rama took a glass of water. "Tch ye poori toh gol ban hi nahi rahi." Amaya looked at the maps she was rolling out. She looked at Rama from the corner of her eyes. Rama walked away slamming the glass on the kitchen platform. She picked up on of the maps and looked at it weirdly. She remembered Sumitra's warning. A hand took the poori from hers and placed it on the rolling board. It was Rama. He then picked a katori and placed it one the poori. He removed the extra dough and lifted the katori. A bright smile came to Amaya's lips. "Ye toh ek dum gol hai. Thank you." "Zyada khush hone ki zaroorat nahi hai. Ye humne tumhaare liye nahi jis parivaar ki tum zabardasti bahu bani ho us parivaar ki izzat ke liye kiya hai. Tumhe pane parivaar ki izzat ka khayal nahi hai par humein humaare parivaar ki izzat ka khayal hai." Rama gave Amaya an angry look and stormed out.

Sab theek ho jaayega Amaya. Tumhe sab theek karna hai. Sab kuch sabki life mein sabke liye.' Amaya promised herself.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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I'm trying to understand the real meaning behind this TS 😆
*confused*
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Originally posted by: Chahanya

RaMaya TS: Making things right.

It had been 2 weeks since Rama and Amaya got married and shifted to Mathur's haveli. The wall which had been taken down after 20 + years had been replaced by a rope separating the two houses. Amaya silently bore everyone's hatred. Rachita who had given the benefit of the doubt too was no longer on her side after the Guptas shifted to Mathur haveli. Amu' she longed to hear someone call her lovingly but all she heard was Amaya Gupta, hate was the only feeling associated with that name. Amaya was all alone in her fight with the chandal chaukdi. For the sake of her family's reputation and happiness she had to do things she never would. She did it all while teaching a couple of small lessons to her sasuma.

Jeevan saathi' is someone who is with you every step of the way for life, Amaya had heard this and believed it to be true but when she looked at Rama she did not see it in him. He hated her the most. What right does he have to hate me? He was the one who went along with the chandal chaukdi's plan. He was the one who married her having full knowledge of it. He knew everything even Rachita di's secret. What right does he have to accuse me? What right does he have to call me characterless, cheat and a person of the last order?' Amaya sat thinking in her room after Rama once again insulted her.

"Oh maharani!" Sumitra called Amaya. She got off the bed and prepared herself for another challenge. "Jijji, wo ek baar mein aane walon mein se nahi hai! Dekha nahi tumne use har baar wohi ki wohi chaabi lagani padti hai." The chandal chaukdi rolled their eyes and made wicked faces. "Kya hai?" Amaya stood with her hands crossed at her chest. "Sun le! Maine Rama ki shadi ke liye mannat maangi thi. Ab jaisi bhi hui hai jisse bhi hui hai mere Rama ki khsuhi ke liye ye mannat pori karni hogi." Sumitra stood in front of Amaya with her hand on her waist. "Toh main kya karoon?" "Kheer aur poori banana hai tujhe 5 bhraminon ke kiye. Aur sun ek ek poori gol gol banni chahiye. Poori ginkar mat banana kam nahi padni chahiye samjhi nahi toh!" Sumitra gave Amaya a warning which she understood very well. "Theek hai."

Amaya was walking aimlessly thinking about her ordeal. "Ae! Kya kar rahi ho?" Amaya was irritated enough and to make things worst Rama yelled at her. "Kya hai? Kyun chilla rahe hain aap? Aur aap hote kaun hain jo mujhpar chillane wale?" Amaya yelled back. "Tum darwaza knock karke nahi aa sakti kya? Main change kar raha tha." "Darawaza band ho toh knock karte hain khule darwaze ko kyun knock karoon? Change karna tha toh darwaza band karna chahiye tha na!" "Ladke aise hi change karte hain." "Haan toh phir koi bhi aa sakta hai uss baat ke liye bhi tayyar rehna chahiye." "Theek hai ab jao yahan se." "Haan ja rahi hoon mujhe shaukh nahi hai yahan rukkar aapko change karte hue dekhna." "Tumhara koi bharosa nahi! Jo ladki..." "Bas!" Amaya yelled as she knew what Rama was going to say next.

Amaya stormed out of the room. Their voices had been heard in both houses. They fought every day. There was not a single day when Rama did not insult her for what she had done to her family and him. Amaya tried hard not to let Rama affect her but he did. The harsh words of her family made her stronger to fight for them but Rama's accusations made her weak even if were for a second he did weaken her. She was going to the kitchen when she was passing by the chandal chaukdi's planning adda, Sumitra's bedroom. "Arri Sumitra, ye Rama aur wo modi roz roz aise ladte rahe toh kahin kisi din Rama ke moonh se sach na nikal jaaye. Amaya ko lagta hai ki Rama ko sab pata tha par use toh Amaya ke bare mein sindoor bharte waqt pata chala. Amaya humaara sach use bata sakti hai agar use ye Rama ka sach pata chala. Tera beta tujhse bahut pyar karta hai par wo modi bhi kuch kam na hai kahin Rama ko tere khilaaf na kar de." Rama's grandmother expressed her worry.

Amaya was shocked to hear the truth. Rama, ko kuch bhi nahi pata tha aur maine!' Every fight where Amaya accused Rama of knowingly marrying her, betraying his love for Rachita flashed before her eyes. She thought he had wronged Rachita but she was the one who had wronged him. She sacrificed her life and love for her family's honor and happiness but what was Rama sacrificed for? When all of this will be over she will get her family's honor, her father's last memory everything back. Rachita will one day find someone she will love and who will love her back. She might have a chance with Mantu... What about Rama? He will be left empty handed. Amaya came out of her thought when she heard some noise.

"Pani chahiye, main deti hoon." Amaya moved towards Rama who was picking up a glass. "Mere haathon mein mehendi nahi lagi. Main khud le sakta hoon aur tumhe mere liye kuch karne ki zaroorat nahi hai. Tum pehle hi bahut kuch kar chuki ho. Ab maaf karo humein. Hato!" Rama took a glass of water. "Tch ye poori toh gol ban hi nahi rahi." Amaya looked at the maps she was rolling out. She looked at Rama from the corner of her eyes. Rama walked away slamming the glass on the kitchen platform. She picked up on of the maps and looked at it weirdly. She remembered Sumitra's warning. A hand took the poori from hers and placed it on the rolling board. It was Rama. He then picked a katori and placed it one the poori. He removed the extra dough and lifted the katori. A bright smile came to Amaya's lips. "Ye toh ek dum gol hai. Thank you." "Zyada khush hone ki zaroorat nahi hai. Ye humne tumhaare liye nahi jis parivaar ki tum zabardasti bahu bani ho us parivaar ki izzat ke liye kiya hai. Tumhe pane parivaar ki izzat ka khayal nahi hai par humein humaare parivaar ki izzat ka khayal hai." Rama gave Amaya an angry look and stormed out.

Sab theek ho jaayega Amaya. Tumhe sab theek karna hai. Sab kuch sabki life mein sabke liye.' Amaya promised herself.

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highly disappointed with ur views yaar!!!!we want our MANYA back...no RAMYA at all watsoevr...
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Originally posted by: Chahanya

RaMaya TS: Making things right.

It had been 2 weeks since Rama and Amaya got married and shifted to Mathur's haveli. The wall which had been taken down after 20 + years had been replaced by a rope separating the two houses. Amaya silently bore everyone's hatred. Rachita who had given the benefit of the doubt too was no longer on her side after the Guptas shifted to Mathur haveli. Amu' she longed to hear someone call her lovingly but all she heard was Amaya Gupta, hate was the only feeling associated with that name. Amaya was all alone in her fight with the chandal chaukdi. For the sake of her family's reputation and happiness she had to do things she never would. She did it all while teaching a couple of small lessons to her sasuma.

Jeevan saathi' is someone who is with you every step of the way for life, Amaya had heard this and believed it to be true but when she looked at Rama she did not see it in him. He hated her the most. What right does he have to hate me? He was the one who went along with the chandal chaukdi's plan. He was the one who married her having full knowledge of it. He knew everything even Rachita di's secret. What right does he have to accuse me? What right does he have to call me characterless, cheat and a person of the last order?' Amaya sat thinking in her room after Rama once again insulted her.

"Oh maharani!" Sumitra called Amaya. She got off the bed and prepared herself for another challenge. "Jijji, wo ek baar mein aane walon mein se nahi hai! Dekha nahi tumne use har baar wohi ki wohi chaabi lagani padti hai." The chandal chaukdi rolled their eyes and made wicked faces. "Kya hai?" Amaya stood with her hands crossed at her chest. "Sun le! Maine Rama ki shadi ke liye mannat maangi thi. Ab jaisi bhi hui hai jisse bhi hui hai mere Rama ki khsuhi ke liye ye mannat pori karni hogi." Sumitra stood in front of Amaya with her hand on her waist. "Toh main kya karoon?" "Kheer aur poori banana hai tujhe 5 bhraminon ke kiye. Aur sun ek ek poori gol gol banni chahiye. Poori ginkar mat banana kam nahi padni chahiye samjhi nahi toh!" Sumitra gave Amaya a warning which she understood very well. "Theek hai."

Amaya was walking aimlessly thinking about her ordeal. "Ae! Kya kar rahi ho?" Amaya was irritated enough and to make things worst Rama yelled at her. "Kya hai? Kyun chilla rahe hain aap? Aur aap hote kaun hain jo mujhpar chillane wale?" Amaya yelled back. "Tum darwaza knock karke nahi aa sakti kya? Main change kar raha tha." "Darawaza band ho toh knock karte hain khule darwaze ko kyun knock karoon? Change karna tha toh darwaza band karna chahiye tha na!" "Ladke aise hi change karte hain." "Haan toh phir koi bhi aa sakta hai uss baat ke liye bhi tayyar rehna chahiye." "Theek hai ab jao yahan se." "Haan ja rahi hoon mujhe shaukh nahi hai yahan rukkar aapko change karte hue dekhna." "Tumhara koi bharosa nahi! Jo ladki..." "Bas!" Amaya yelled as she knew what Rama was going to say next.

Amaya stormed out of the room. Their voices had been heard in both houses. They fought every day. There was not a single day when Rama did not insult her for what she had done to her family and him. Amaya tried hard not to let Rama affect her but he did. The harsh words of her family made her stronger to fight for them but Rama's accusations made her weak even if were for a second he did weaken her. She was going to the kitchen when she was passing by the chandal chaukdi's planning adda, Sumitra's bedroom. "Arri Sumitra, ye Rama aur wo modi roz roz aise ladte rahe toh kahin kisi din Rama ke moonh se sach na nikal jaaye. Amaya ko lagta hai ki Rama ko sab pata tha par use toh Amaya ke bare mein sindoor bharte waqt pata chala. Amaya humaara sach use bata sakti hai agar use ye Rama ka sach pata chala. Tera beta tujhse bahut pyar karta hai par wo modi bhi kuch kam na hai kahin Rama ko tere khilaaf na kar de." Rama's grandmother expressed her worry.

Amaya was shocked to hear the truth. Rama, ko kuch bhi nahi pata tha aur maine!' Every fight where Amaya accused Rama of knowingly marrying her, betraying his love for Rachita flashed before her eyes. She thought he had wronged Rachita but she was the one who had wronged him. She sacrificed her life and love for her family's honor and happiness but what was Rama sacrificed for? When all of this will be over she will get her family's honor, her father's last memory everything back. Rachita will one day find someone she will love and who will love her back. She might have a chance with Mantu... What about Rama? He will be left empty handed. Amaya came out of her thought when she heard some noise.

"Pani chahiye, main deti hoon." Amaya moved towards Rama who was picking up a glass. "Mere haathon mein mehendi nahi lagi. Main khud le sakta hoon aur tumhe mere liye kuch karne ki zaroorat nahi hai. Tum pehle hi bahut kuch kar chuki ho. Ab maaf karo humein. Hato!" Rama took a glass of water. "Tch ye poori toh gol ban hi nahi rahi." Amaya looked at the maps she was rolling out. She looked at Rama from the corner of her eyes. Rama walked away slamming the glass on the kitchen platform. She picked up on of the maps and looked at it weirdly. She remembered Sumitra's warning. A hand took the poori from hers and placed it on the rolling board. It was Rama. He then picked a katori and placed it one the poori. He removed the extra dough and lifted the katori. A bright smile came to Amaya's lips. "Ye toh ek dum gol hai. Thank you." "Zyada khush hone ki zaroorat nahi hai. Ye humne tumhaare liye nahi jis parivaar ki tum zabardasti bahu bani ho us parivaar ki izzat ke liye kiya hai. Tumhe pane parivaar ki izzat ka khayal nahi hai par humein humaare parivaar ki izzat ka khayal hai." Rama gave Amaya an angry look and stormed out.

Sab theek ho jaayega Amaya. Tumhe sab theek karna hai. Sab kuch sabki life mein sabke liye.' Amaya promised herself.

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Rama has to divorce Amaya if dis shitty marriage track is nt a dream...and then RAMA and Rachita has to unite...and then our most loved cutest couple MANYA...dats it...i can c the TRPs falling below 1 also if this idiotic track continues further...and pls don post RAMYA stories...not that it will affect MANYA bcz MANYA will be back as MANYA is the reason we watch TSM and their separation has caused so much uproar that the TRPs of TSM has sunk...just dat such sad buzz off kind of write ups disappoints TSM fans big time...so pls no more of dis crap...m sry if i hve offended u...
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Originally posted by: NiRajCraZey

I'm trying to understand the real meaning behind this TS 😆

*confused*


and so m I...
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count me in...😆
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Same here. 😆
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Me too! 😆
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Originally posted by: NiRajCraZey

I'm trying to understand the real meaning behind this TS 😆

*confused*


Me too... If it is a RaMaya love story, I cannot read the next part 😆
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someone has gone mad.. i think haters automatically arises. sorry to say they look like brother and sister.. as i mentioned earlier.. even if .01% people is ramaya lover.. they are totally incest lover...😆

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