RaMaya FS: Making things right | Part 5| Page 7| Sept 15 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh good...i can see good things happening for RaRa and ManYa...😳
Edited by frenz4u - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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After seeing rama drunk today... i was like "yaar that ramya fs... kahin sach toh nahi honay wali"
I hope it happens just as you have written
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow...initially i tot u wer ramaya fan and could not have guts to rwad it...but still i tot i will take a look...woowww!!!pls post soon ur next part...its more good than d soap...i just loved it...i know whats going to happen...Rama will ask about Mantu!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Last Part

Rachita had been shaken to the core by the truth about her parentage. She was not Rishi Mathur's daughter. Her entire identity had changed by this one truth. She was walking aimlessly through the narrow streets of Benaras. Her feet or rather her heart took her to Dev's door step. The servant let her in and showed her the way to where Dev was. Dev was packing his clothes. Rachita stood there looking at him. He was her father? No he was the one who blemished the name of her nanaji and father... Father? She stood there confused. She closed her eyes remembering Rishi. Things were so easy when he was around. How she wished for her father to be there for her now.

Rachita opened her eyes when she felt the familiar gentle warm touch on her head. "Dad!" She opened her eyes and saw Dev. She lowered her eyes. "Kya hua? Nazarein kyun jhuka di?" "Thank you. Aapne jo kiya aapne jo kaha uske liye." Rachita said without lifting her eyes. "Rachita, mujhe kabhi mauka nahi mila kyunki mujhe tumhaare hone ka ehsaas nahi tha par aaj main tumhe kuch sikhana chahta hoon ya jo tumhaare dad Rishi ne tumhe sikhaya hoga use yaad dilaana chahta hoon. Sach bolte waqt kabhi nazrein nahi jhukaate." Rachita lifted her eyes and looked at Dev.

"Tumne sahi kaha, Dad, Rishi hi tumhaare dad hain beta. Janam dene se koi mata pita nahi ban jaate. Meri wajah se tumhaara janam hua hai par Rishi ne tumhe zindagi di hai. Rishi ne tumhe har wo cheez di hai jo ek pita apni aulad ko deta hai. Acchi life, acche values ye sab tumhe Rishi se mila hai. So sahi maayno mein Rishi hi tumhaare dad hue na?" Rachita looked at Dev. This was the same man who left no chance instead created chances where he could insult her family. One truth can change so much and that too for the better. Dev handed her some legal papers.

"Ye kya hai?" "Rachita, main tumhaare liye kuch nahi kar paaya aaj tak mauka hi nahi mila. Shayad ab jakar hi mujhe tumhaare liye kuch karna tha. Beta ye meri Banares ki property ke papers hain. Nahi beta main kisi ghamand mein aakar ya duniya ko dikhane ke liye ki tum meri beti ho... ye property tumhaare naam nahi ki. Ye tumhaara haq hai. Tum chahe ab iske saath jo karo ye tumhaari marzi hai. Jo tum kho chuki ho wo wapas pa sakti ho." Rachita looked at Dev. "Haan main Rohan ki baat kar raha hoon. Daulat na hone ki wajah se usne tumhe chod diya tha, aaj tumhaare paas daulat hai toh wo wapas aa jaayega. Par beta soch samajhkar ye faisla karna. Jo insaan tumhaare tough time mein tumhaare saath nahi khada raha kya wo sach mein tumhara jeevan saathi banne ke layak hai? I don't think so."

Dev asked the servant to get coffee for him and Rachita. "Rachita, I know pehla pyar bhulana itna asaan nahi hota par jab tumhe saccha pyar mile na toh uss phele pyar ko apne pairon ki zanjeer nahi banate. Apni mom ko dekho unse seekho. Pyar dobara ho sakta hai aur doosra pyar pehle pyar ko na toh kam karta hai aur nahi uss se bewafai hai. Humein use apna life partner banana chahiye jo humse pyar kare kyunki jab koi aapko sacche dil se chahta hai na toh aapko bhi uss se sacchi mohabbat ho jaati hai. Saccha jeevan saathi wo hota hai jo aapke har such dukh mein bina koi sawal bina koi shart aapke saath khada rahe. Aur jab aisa jeevan saathi mil jaaye na toh use jaane nahi dete uski kadar karte hain."

Rachita was thinking about Rama as Dev told her about a true lif partner. She had missed her chance. That ship had sailed. Rama was now someone elses. Not just someone her own younger sister. She had seen how Rama stood by Amaya and helped her in her tough times. He was truly her life partner. Now she must wait if and when life and love gives her another chance. She left from Dev's home after a long chat.

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Rama returned to Mathur haveli an hour later. "Amaya, ye kya kar rahi ho tum?" Amaya was amused by Rama's question. "Rama, packing kar rahi hoon. Wapas ghar jaana hai na? Bas ye char sariyaan baki hain abhi packing ho jaayegi." Rama stopped her. "Arre Rama kya kar rahe ho. Mujhe kaam karna hai." "Iss kaam se zyaada important meri baat hai. Chalo." Rama asked Amaya to get on the bike. He stopped in front of Mahadev's temple. Amaya plam smacked her forehead. "Main bhi kitni buddhu hoon na, Mahadev ka thank you toh karna hoi bhool gayi apni khushi mein. Hum jo bhi kar paaye humne job hi paya hai ye sab inke aashirwad ki wajah se hi toh hai. Mujhe job hi diya hai wo Mahadev ne diya hai aur wo sab mujhe sacche mann se sweekar hai." Rama and Amaya entered the temple and prayed to Lord Shiva.

Rama then removed a set of ledger papers from a folder and gave them to Amaya. "Rama, property ke papers toh humne mom ko de diye, ye kaise papers hain?" "Amaya, tum chahti thi na ki sab kuch theek ho jaaye." "Haan sab kuch theek ho toh gaya hai." "Nahi ab bhi kuch glaat hai jise sahi karna zaroori hai." Amaya looked at Rama with confusion. "Amaya, do galat log ek sahi rishta kabhi nahi bana sakte. Ek acchi aur sacchi shadi shuda zindagi ke liye usmein pyar hona bahut zaroori hai. Tum mujhse pyar nahi karti. Tumhaari khushi mere saath nahi kisi aur ke saath hai." Rama looked away from her and Amaya's eyes followed his eyes.

"Mantu?" Amaya was shocked to see him there. "Amaya, main bahut pehle jaan chuka tha ki tum Mantu se aur Mantu tumse pyar karta hai. Amaya humaara saath yahin tak ka tha. Ye divorce papers hain. Tum sign karke mujhe bhijwa dena." Amaya looked at the divorce papers. Mantu took his steps towards Amaya. With every step Mantu took towards her Amaya saw Rama take one away from her. Mantu now stood very close to Amaya and Rama had gone far away. Amaya took a deep breath, clicked her pen and signed her name on the divorce papers. Amaya Gupta she signed. Mantu saw it and he was in agreement with Amaya's decision. He could not stop smiling. He was trutly happy today.

Amaya folded her hands, closed her eyes and prayed to Mahadev for the new beginning of her new life. She also thanked Mahadev for Making things right.

Edited by Chahanya - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Awesome update...so very wish the Cvs do the same. Now dat u have beautifully made everything right and Amaya Gupta after signing the divorce papers to get divorced from Ramashrey Gupta has become Amaya Mathur again...
Now pls write a conclusive part showing Amaya marrying Mantu and Rama marrying Rachita...After dat some tingling romantic sequence of sparkling couple MANYA...This final part would be an icing on the cake...Pls give us this final part.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice ending for RamAya...👍🏼
But yeah can we get more conclusive part for RaRa and ManYa both...last romantic part for both...it wud be good...😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: frenz4u

Nice ending for RamAya...👍🏼
But yeah can we get more conclusive part for RaRa and ManYa both...last romantic part for both...it wud be good...😳


It can have a small leap and show how they moved on... Won't it be great 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for PM.😊
It was Very Interesting Story.😊
The whole Part was so Nicely started.😊
Please Continue soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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