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Swancy Cherry xx

@-Cherry-

Achiever

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

Thank you to the few individuals who made it impossible for writers to write what they want based on real life individuals just because of their immature childish fan wars.Thank You.

Edited by -Cherry- - 10 years ago

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missviolet

@missviolet

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

swancyyy🤗

you know that i love you righttt ❤️☺️

okay res for now coz i be working 😆

and not that you dont know my thoughts on this one 😉

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flighhigh

@flighhigh

Explorer

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

Wwwooowww... Just wOw.. I am speechless...don't know wat to sy...can you please continue...plzzz..plz continue from where you left...

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twinkle10

@twinkle10

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

Res <3
This could be in PUS right now if it was posted on the AT you know 😆
I need time to recover... But I shall be back!
And your dabba...SIGH you be such a talent hub!

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Unres:

So here I am, reading this for the third time now and I wouldn't mind giving it a fourth read honestly because the story contains so much depth and emotion that it digs deeper into my heart every time. SIGH... Swancy...where have you been hiding girl?? This is a piece which is home to so much tenderness and sensuality. The thing that stands out for me is there's nothing vulgar in this piece...such a fine balance of those hormonal cravings and the hearty needs.

I actually can't believe you dedicated a whole 4 paragraphs to the kiss! 😆 Take a bow please 👏🤗 To write about a scene and in specific just a kiss with such depth and devotion...that's true talent! Forget about reading and imagining the scene...I could literally WATCH every movement in front of me because that's how powerful your words were in terms of emoting the right emotions.

I also love how you explored the lighter side of their relationship such as the teasing and smirks...they add a new edge to the story! And like I said...you were so on point with your imagery and descriptiveness that the images were dancing in front of my eyes and I could hear their voices echo in my ears.

A marvelous effort and I most certainly look forward to reading more of your pieces. You can't hide away from writing anymore because we all know how absolutely talented you are!

Hugs and love!

Twinkle ❤️

Edited by twinkle10 - 10 years ago

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Rits3016

@Rits3016

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

That was like super hawttt😳😳

Pls continue naa!!!

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Nandini_goyal

@Nandini_goyal

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

That was one heck of a thing

Completely loved it!

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Manya

@manya_189

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

Oh boy! This was so hot & sexy!
Sooo Goood!
Write more!! :D pleaseee

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gauriangel

@gauriangel

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

I am not a Pani shipper I swear..

But this was awesome yaar...too good...u just gave us the behind the scenes scenario after the second onscreen kiss...

would love to read more on these two..

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pavi_

@pavi_

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

You are such a hard core PaNi shipper isn't?
Anyways nice job.
No one knows the secret behind the rain kiss which was highly edited and further censored with white flashes. You know gave wild imagination.😆
Brave attempt and played safe by posting it in FF section and not in KY2 forum.

Edited by pavi_ - 10 years ago