Res <3
This could be in PUS right now if it was posted on the AT you know 😆
I need time to recover... But I shall be back!
And your dabba...SIGH you be such a talent hub!
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Unres:
So here I am, reading this for the third time now and I wouldn't mind giving it a fourth read honestly because the story contains so much depth and emotion that it digs deeper into my heart every time. SIGH... Swancy...where have you been hiding girl?? This is a piece which is home to so much tenderness and sensuality. The thing that stands out for me is there's nothing vulgar in this piece...such a fine balance of those hormonal cravings and the hearty needs.
I actually can't believe you dedicated a whole 4 paragraphs to the kiss! 😆 Take a bow please 👏🤗 To write about a scene and in specific just a kiss with such depth and devotion...that's true talent! Forget about reading and imagining the scene...I could literally WATCH every movement in front of me because that's how powerful your words were in terms of emoting the right emotions.
I also love how you explored the lighter side of their relationship such as the teasing and smirks...they add a new edge to the story! And like I said...you were so on point with your imagery and descriptiveness that the images were dancing in front of my eyes and I could hear their voices echo in my ears.
A marvelous effort and I most certainly look forward to reading more of your pieces. You can't hide away from writing anymore because we all know how absolutely talented you are!
Hugs and love!
Twinkle ❤️
Edited by twinkle10 - 10 years ago
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