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Posted: 10 years ago
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Girl u made me blush like never before...
I can't write anything more now.. Shall b back tomorrow ;-)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Awesome update
Loved it
Plz Plz continue from where u left the story
Plz update the next part
Edited by mairaallauddin - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Swanzy 🤗
This is just wow!!! I could totally imagine PaNi reacting the same way after reading confession script 😆
Your dabba is ❤️
Edited by moonstonespirit - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Awesome
Lovedd itt
Twas soo hooottt...
Plz cntinue it... pretty plsss
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Resss! 🤗
Swancy dint know you write also! Do you have any other works of yours?😃
I am sure this will be kickass!😉 Lemme read it and come back!

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Ok ok ok. Firstly a BIG apology Swancy. I really did not realise I hadn't unresed this. *Hides face*

Ok so lemme start! And before I came to comment here I again read the OS coz dude this is AWESOME! And I can read this 'N' number of times! ❤️

Your words are seriously LOVE! And I really mean it. Every expression and every reaction and every moment was described SO beautifully! And I swear I could visualise every scene frame to frame in my mind! You really nailed it with your words!

Dude seriously every line of yours is love and beyond. The visuals refuse to leave my mind. And picking one moment would be unfair to the rest! ;) The way you started with it and the progression and finally the end! Bravo! Too good!

And yes I srsly gotta tell this. The last line really made me jump up! That was BRILLIANT!

Come here jooo 🤗 You are one heck of a talent man! Keep shining with this freaking awesome talent of yours! 🤗 ❤️
Edited by OhMeriJaan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
it was awesum wish to read more frm u on manan or pani.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Oh This was SOMETHING Man ...
Kese karleti ho tum? ? Like seriously ? 🤣
I just felt everything was REAL.. From one thing to other Eee. .
Swanz u killed it baby with ur words and of course it gave me SOLID PHEEELS #PaNiPheels 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Unres'd my response on page 1 babe! You need to know that no matter how much you get praised, it really isn't enough! Such a fine piece of art this was! 😳
Take care 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey swancy that was a lot of fun to read..😃..i didnt notice that it was a Pani OS..i found the link in manan AT and assumed that it is a manan os..so when i read niti's name..i did a double take..so this is the first Pani story that i read..and was very entertaining..😳
Well written and you have a way with words..it brought everything alive..i could literally watch every second of it..you know..like a BTS..😛..i didnt know how else to explain how live it was..the crew..the cast..richa..vanity van..you even brought brusha in 😆
I know i m repeating myself but that was too much of fun..keep going..waiting for more..😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Take a bow. This piece of writing is something in itself. I am unable to describe how beautiful it is but you need to get it that this one is one of the best among the One Shots I've been across so far.

I really loved the way you kept detailing, that's a talent. The depth of every emotion been portrayed so marvelously. It seems like - 'Picture Perfect'


You got a way with words, easy and smooth with all the detailing and stuff. Yet, how many hidden talents do you possess, girl? How many? You are outstanding with your siggi/avi/icon making stuff, now we also know you as an exceptionally good writer who presents beautiful piece of writings.


Thanks for attempting this one. And keep coming with more, if possible. 😊

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