PaNi OS| Screaming Cuts - Page 5

Originally posted by: suv-kriyaansh

Awesome

Lovedd itt

Twas soo hooottt...

Plz cntinue it... pretty plsss

Originally posted by: OhMeriJaan

Resss! 🤗

Swancy dint know you write also! Do you have any other works of yours?😃

I am sure this will be kickass!😉 Lemme read it and come back!

Originally posted by: Bgtyh

it was awesum wish to read more frm u on manan or pani.

Originally posted by: diva82

Wow. Amazing 😆

Originally posted by: Endurance

Oh This was SOMETHING Man ...
Kese karleti ho tum? ? Like seriously ? 🤣
I just felt everything was REAL.. From one thing to other Eee. .
Swanz u killed it baby with ur words and of course it gave me SOLID PHEEELS #PaNiPheels 😆

Originally posted by: twinkle10

Unres'd my response on page 1 babe! You need to know that no matter how much you get praised, it really isn't enough! Such a fine piece of art this was! 😳

Take care 🤗

Originally posted by: anuv123

Hey swancy that was a lot of fun to read..😃..i didnt notice that it was a Pani OS..i found the link in manan AT and assumed that it is a manan os..so when i read niti's name..i did a double take..so this is the first Pani story that i read..and was very entertaining..😳 hahahaah sorry for the false advertisement 😛 I'm glad you enjoyed it though? 😳

Well written and you have a way with words..it brought everything alive..i could literally watch every second of it..you know..like a BTS..😛.Oh wow thank you so much, thats the best compliment a writer can achieve bringing words to life 😳.i didnt know how else to explain how live it was..the crew..the cast..richa..vanity van..you even brought brusha in 😆 Dude I was going for realistic as possible LOL, go hard or go home you know? Lol

I know i m repeating myself but that was too much of fun..keep going..waiting for more..😳 Glad you liked it, thank you so so much :Dxx

Originally posted by: -shenz-

Take a bow. This piece of writing is something in itself. I am unable to describe how beautiful it is but you need to get it that this one is one of the best among the One Shots I've been across so far. Oh wow thanks so much shenz, this means a lo to me, thank you so very much hun <33

I really loved the way you kept detailing, that's a talent. The depth of every emotion been portrayed so marvelously. It seems like - 'Picture Perfect' Hawww thank so much god damn much, I'm glad you liked it.

You got a way with words, easy and smooth with all the detailing and stuff.eeeks thanks I thought I was describing too much if that makes sense lol Yet, how many hidden talents do you possess, girl? How many? You are outstanding with your siggi/avi/icon making stuff, now we also know you as an exceptionally good writer who presents beautiful piece of writings. Awww thanks yaar, I'm just a person who likes experimenting, a writer first and foremost and editing just did cause I was bored 😆 turned out to be alright in it lol

Thanks for attempting this one. And keep coming with more, if possible. 😊 Thank you for the kind words once again, i'll write more in the future xx

Originally posted by: Cooldude101

Okay! This was 😳☺️. Being a PaNi shipper, man! You hit the notes just high enough for me to drool over this for a very very long time! Niti and Parth, I really can imagine this happening and your OS just brought out my imagination! Take a bow!

Please if possible continue! We have many more scenes onscreen that can lead to things like this offscreen ☺️😆

Originally posted by: maanluvsgeet

Wow...speechless...awesome