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Cooldude101

@Cooldude101

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Okay! This was 😳☺️. Being a PaNi shipper, man! You hit the notes just high enough for me to drool over this for a very very long time! Niti and Parth, I really can imagine this happening and your OS just brought out my imagination! Take a bow!

Please if possible continue! We have many more scenes onscreen that can lead to things like this offscreen ☺️😆

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Natashaaaaa

@Natashaaaaa

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

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NushIsh

@NushIsh

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Swankyyy

So I came back to IF just for you. And you dedicated to all of us.

Btw I want the more lol

Love you babes

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Srujana

@Srujana7.MaNan

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Swanzy I never knew you were such a hardcore PaNi shipper. 😲

Where have you been hiding for so long. 😛

This was brilliant, your play on words is commendable.

With PaNi in the scene things are bound to heat up.😈

I was able to envision everything.

Loved the entire buildup to the kiss till the make out in her room.☺️

I want to read more. 😉

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Heya Swanzy😳

Woww u r a writer too😳

I've alwayzz been in love wit ur creations

and now m loving ur writings too😳

Beautifully penned down

it felt SO REAL☺️

do come wit more PaNi write-ups if possi😳

Aishu⭐️

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Swancy Cherry xx

@-Cherry-

Achiever

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: missviolet
swancyyy🤗
you know that i love you righttt ❤️☺️

okay res for now coz i be working 😆
and not that you dont know my thoughts on this one 😉

And I love you more 🤗 thank you for being the driving force behind this OS.

Love you Bachu 😳

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riddhima11

@riddhima11

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

The best OS I have read on PaNi.. Oh how I loved the flow of your words Swancy.. You a perfect writer.. Coz u managed to keep the essence of these two individuals and it did not come off as a fiction.. As a hard core MaNan and PaNi fan.. You touched my heart.. Although the scenes were ahem..ahem.. steamy, somehow with the purity and simplicity you put in your words, I enjoyed every word of it.. This was recommended by a friend, Twinkle and m gonna thank her loads..

I really hope you write more.. Coz i would love to read it..

Lots of love

Pankhuri

P.S. I love your username 'cherry' <3 <3

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Swancy Cherry xx

@-Cherry-

Achiever

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: flighhigh
Wwwooowww... Just wOw.. I am speechless...don't know wat to sy...can you please continue...plzzz..plz continue from where you left...

Thank you so so much, glad you liked it

and yea i'll think about finishing OS soon 😳

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Swancy Cherry xx

@-Cherry-

Achiever

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: twinkle10
Res <3
This could be in PUS right now if it was posted on the AT you know 😆
I need time to recover... But I shall be back!
And your dabba...SIGH you be such a talent hub!
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So here I am, reading this for the third time now and I wouldn't mind giving it a fourth read honestly because the story contains so much depth and emotion that it digs deeper into my heart every time. SIGH... Swancy...where have you been hiding girl?? This is a piece which is home to so much tenderness and sensuality. The thing that stands out for me is there's nothing vulgar in this piece...such a fine balance of those hormonal cravings and the hearty needs. Hawww twinkieee stop making me blush, thank you so so much baby girl and I haven't been hiding anyway anywhere just been quiet 😆😆 Oh thank god, I wanted this to be sensual and erotic but didn't want it to be vulgar and coarse. So I'm happy that you found the right balance in it <3

I actually can't believe you dedicated a whole 4 paragraphs to the kiss! 😆 Pssst one must always be dedicated with the Kiss 😛 Take a bow please 👏🤗 Someone hold my crown 😆 To write about a scene and in specific just a kiss with such depth and devotion...that's true talent! Forget about reading and imagining the scene...I could literally WATCH every movement in front of me because that's how powerful your words were in terms of emoting the right emotions. Thank you so so much twinkiee, because as a writer we want the words to emote everything that we feel and even more so we want the words to showcase the movement in front of you and I'm so happy that you liked it boo <333

I also love how you explored the lighter side of their relationship such as the teasing and smirks...they add a new edge to the story! Hawww thank you, I was going for a different feel ans Im glad it came out the way I wanted it to <3 And like I said...you were so on point with your imagery and descriptiveness that the images were dancing in front of my eyes and I could hear their voices echo in my ears. LOVE YOUSS. Thank youuu so damn much!

A marvelous effort and I most certainly look forward to reading more of your pieces. You can't hide away from writing anymore because we all know how absolutely talented you are! Seriously twinkieee I love you lots and lots and you are a gem and it meant a lot to me especially a comment coming from you. You have no no idea 😳

Hugs and love!
Twinkle ❤️