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Gaya3sb

@Gaya3sb

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Posted: 10 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: sukanksha

No u r the principal

Sorry no imagination we are still on the spoon feeding so kindly write one more part

You'll make me gutter mind 😆
well...I think I'm already is 🤣

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12Singmeenu

@12Singmeenu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: Gaya3sb

Oh my kud-kud kumari is getting angry 😆
I'm really not teasing yaar...
Just thought of making your brains work and imagine the third short 🤣

And u think I sab thumari bath maan lege. 😆 I know u were too sleepy to write the next part na 😉😆

My kumbkaran Kumari. See now we r both having new names 😆and don't worry hum ko apne update sooth samath vasul karna atha hai 😆

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Sushma

@SushSathisha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#93

Yanna di..

its awesome...

Please don't end it.. make it a three shot. .

Please update soon

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sukanksha

@sukanksha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: Gaya3sb

You'll make me gutter mind 😆
well...I think I'm already is 🤣

Every sane person is also insane.
Every non guttery is also guttery. Lol

Ab isse kya Mai HAAN samjhu ? 😉

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janani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#95

Kya yeh keyhole sai dhek liya tho?:-D:-D:-D

Puttar is to tensed;-)

he want to see his wife first...
Yeh admi ko wardrobe ke padi huye hai..
Biwi ke jaan se pyaar hai yeh wardrobe se;-);-):-D:-D

ishita is so cute ..she asking her intraugation in wardrobe...;-):->

Koye be place ho... madam lecture ka kaam shuru hojathe:-D:-D:-D

Kuchi bhi bacha ..paida karega tho ...its hilarious part...

COCKROACH ..YEH MALE COCKROACH..ishita ko kaisa patha tha?;-);-);-)

ASLI COCKROACH TOH PUTTAR HAI;-);-);-)

CHABHI WALA suspecting raman...:-DDRUGS...
HAA BHAI PUTTAR KA DRUG ANDHAR HAI...HE want that DRUG smell every second...;-) ;-);-)

raman teasing mode kabhi nahi chodenga:-D;-):-D;-)

y u incomplete this?y u always ask us to continue your stories... ;->:->:->

yeh dil mange more...
Thanks for pm:-)

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ishra123

@ishra123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#96

Amazing update.
loved Raman hide his treasure
plz don't end one Romantic update plz

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Gaya3sb

@Gaya3sb

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Posted: 10 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: janani_divan
Kya yeh keyhole sai dhek liya tho?:-D:-D:-D

Puttar is to tensed;-)

he want to see his wife first...
Yeh admi ko wardrobe ke padi huye hai..
Biwi ke jaan se pyaar hai yeh wardrobe se;-);-):-D:-D

ishita is so cute ..she asking her intraugation in wardrobe...;-):->

Koye be place ho... madam lecture ka kaam shuru hojathe:-D:-D:-D

Kuchi bhi bacha ..paida karega tho ...its hilarious part...

COCKROACH ..YEH MALE COCKROACH..ishita ko kaisa patha tha?;-);-);-)

ASLI COCKROACH TOH PUTTAR HAI;-);-);-)

CHABHI WALA suspecting raman...:-DDRUGS...
HAA BHAI PUTTAR KA DRUG ANDHAR HAI...HE want that DRUG smell every second...;-) ;-);-)

raman teasing mode kabhi nahi chodenga:-D;-):-D;-)

y u incomplete this?y u always ask us to continue your stories... ;->:->:->

yeh dil mange more...
Thanks for pm:-)

Poor puttar 😆
Isn't it nice ending it like this 😕
I felt so 😆
OK leave it...
I'm gonna give puttar a new name after reading your comment 😉
COCKROACH KUMAR 🤣

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Gaya3sb

@Gaya3sb

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Posted: 10 years ago

#98

Hi Kutties... 😊

I'm back with the Third Shot 😉
My greedy readers were compelling me to make this Romantic-Comedy a Mature-Comedy 😆
Yaar... Don't try to turn my gutter mind on 😈
Well...This must be the ending 😉
God knows if my lovely readers will ask me for a fourth shot 😆
You know it's not proofread
So ignore typos and Enjoy reading 🤗

PART-3

MISSION: MAKE OUT SESSION

"Just two more buttons...!" Raman danced a 'balle...balle...' in his mind.

"It's almost done beta...!" He did a moonwalk in front of which Michael Jackson is nothing!

"Matarani kripa kare...madrasan ki ankhen aise hi bandh rakhna...!" He send emails to Matarani temples from his mind.

[Keep madrasan's eyes shut like this]

"Kahin madrasan soh toh nahin gayi???" He asked himself looking at her.

[Has she slept?]

The slight smile which lingered on her lips confirmed that she is silently enjoying it. He grinned at her. Coming closer to her ear he whispered, "Ab kaha gayi sharam...?"

[Where is your shyness?]

She couldn't understand his words. Thus she kept mute and eyes shut. She felt his hands removing her shirt. Oops...! His shirt! The next thing he did was expected. He came closer to her ear again. But what he said shook the hell out of her.

"Mujhe laga tum sharmaoge...Lekin tujhe toh mere samne bina kapade laitne mein koyi problem nahin!" His voice was husky-crispy.

[I thought you'll get shy. But you don't have any problem laying in front of me without clothes!]

She jolted open her eyes and looked at him. He was looking at her eyes...no...nose...no...lips...no...neck...impossible! When did he unclothed her upper body???

"Ayyo amma...!" She screamed and closed his eyes with her hands.

"Oye pagal...let me see...!" He tried to shrug away her hands.

"Ayyo...no one has seen me like this before...ayyayyo...!!" She got panicky.

"Acha hua nah...! Let me see..." He screamed.

[That's good]

"Mujhe acha nahin lagta...!" She said trying her best not to let him see her. He was laying over her making her unable to move.

[I'm not feeling good]

"Oh Ishita...what are you doing...Let me see. I was almost there..." He said in haste for which she asked crinkling her eyebrows, "Where...?"

"Ni..." He was about to start but she closed his mouth with her hands. His mouth now under her control but his wandering eyes were on the dangerous part. She couldn't handle his piercing gaze which was on her bosom making it erect though he was not touching her. He closed in his face towards the place of focus. His lips were moving towads one of her orbs. Before he could do what he was about to, she hugged him tight crushing her bosom with his hard chest. The only thing she wanted was to escape his passionate eyes and sinful lips. Anyhow, she was unknowingly making everything easy for him and making him tighter!

He nicely threw away the shirt and her inner which he had already removed and was under her. Her sudden embrace astounded him though his concentration was strong. When she was literally hugging him to death he was enjoying her proximity. His hands were drawing patterns on her bare back while she rested her head on one of his shoulders. The only thing he didn't like that moment was his shirt. He wanted to feel her skin in his. But his shirt was a hindrance.

He couldn't risk his chance by parting from her as she may ran away and he will not get a chance like this again. So he just kept on tightening his grip and stay like that.

*ONE MINUTE PASSED* 😳

*FIVE MINUTES PASSED*😲

*TEN MINUTES PASSED*😡

"Ap kuch kyun nahin karte Raman...?" Ishita asked cutely.

[Why don't you do anything?]

"Tum karne nahin derahe hai nah...!" He whispered.

[You're not letting nah!]

"Maine kya kiya?" She pouted.

[What have I done?]

"If I part andlook at you...you'll shout. Agar dekhne ko nahin milta toh kuch kaise karenge?"

"It's my first time!"

"I can see it" He made a face.

"Voh...kuch...gudgudi ho rahi thi jab apne dekh rahe the...!" She mumbled near his ear.

[I felt ticklish when you looked at me]

"Acha...toh bolo ab kya feel ho raha hai...?" He loosened his grip.

[OK... Now tell me what you're feeling?]

"Aur gudgudi...!" She smiled.

[More ticklish ]

"Kya yaar...tujhe sikhate-sikhate main budda hojayega!" He pouted.

[What yaar...I'll get old by teaching you!]

"Kya sikhate?"

"Dentistry main sach main biology nahin hai kya?"

[Does dentistry doesn't have biology?]

"Ramannn...!"

"Mujhe tujhse kuch lena dena nahin. Main jaa raha hun. Bye!" He said annoyed.

"Arey...Mat jaao...!" She tightened her grip.

"You either let me go or let me do something. Aise hug karke maar daalne ka irada chhodo..." He tried to pull her away.

[Drop your intention to kill me in your embrace]

"Promise me?"

"Kya?"

[What?]

"Ki ap nahin dekhoge"

[That you won't look]

"Toh kaun dekhega? Yeh toh mera hai nah?" He got angry.

[Then who'll see? It is mine right?]

"Nahin...yeh meri hai!" She fought back.

[No it's mine!]

"Leave me...I need to go." He struggled in her arms.

"Promise me that you won't look at me." She tightened again.

"Nahin meri maa...ab chhodo bhi...!"He cried and cursed himself.

[No...just leave me!]

She slowly loosened her grip. He wanted to break his promise but then watching her fear and nervousness, decided against it. He raised a bit looking deepily into her eyes promising her that he won't look at there. She smiled slightly while he pulled the duvet and covered her with it. She sighed a relief while he told her naughtly, "Raat hogi...lights off hoga...toh kuch dekh nahin sakta...tab mujhe rokna mat!"

[Night will come...lights will be off...nothing will be seen... Don't stop me then!]

Second Ending...🤣
Don't ask me for a third ending 😆

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Edited by Gaya3sb - 10 years ago