NEW TS: TRAPPED IN THE WARDROBE___Part-3 Page 14 [Aug 19]

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Hi Kutties... 😊

Sorry for disturbing again 😆

This is a THREE SHORT from me 😉

No twists and turns... 😈

Easy going ROMANTIC COMEDY 😆

The thought came to my mind when I saw Moozi surfing through some IshRa pics 😳

So here goes the wardrobe scene in Three or maybe Two *UP TO YOU*

I'm giving you a small PROLOGUE

*DO NOT INCLUDE IN THE SHOTS*

Gaya3


SCROLL DOWN FOR PROLOGUE
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INDEX

Scroll Down For Prologue

Mission: Kill The Devil In The Home

Mission: Hide My Treasure

Mission: Makeout Session
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Hi Kutties...

Not proofread so please ignore errors...

Enjoy reading and let me know if I should continue by your valuable comments... 🤗



PROLOGUE


Raman was thinking about different ways on how to give his Pagal Madrasan [Mad Madrasan] a surprise. It has been seven days that he didn't saw her, in real flesh and blood. Moreover, her being able to walk around freely made him do some Michael Jackson moves inside his heart.


He wants his wife for himself just for some time. Well...scratch that, He needs his wife only for himself as long as possible. Yes, that is it. He needs some excuse to get hold of her. In fact managing the family is easy in this case but fooling his Madrasan into some cozy moments is like playing chess with Magnus Carlsen! 😲


He looked at her with so much longing and love from inside the taxi. She was looking serene. The whole family was up to some picnic,without him, arrgh...!!! He cannot blame them, because they are unaware of his surprise entry.


As Ishita took a step forward, she did hurt her injured leg and yelped in pain. He clutched tightly on the headrest of the front seat when he saw her face wrinkling with pain. He didn't fail to notice a small pearly tear drop escaping the corner of her right eye.


Oh meri Madrasan ko bahut dard ho raha hai...!

[Oh my madrasan is in so much pain]


He could make out from her gestures that she is asking everyone to go on while she will take some rest. The family did as she say after a lot of push. She covinced them of saying that Neelu is there.


Good...Neelu is there! Crap...Neelu is there!


Then she waved good bye to everyone and thought to herself, Ayyoo Murugan...night akeli...Neelu toh ghar gaya...kya karun...?

[Ayyo Murugan...night alone... Neelu had gone home...What to do?]


He confirmed that she is going to be alone at home from her 916 expression. He was smiling to himself like a Pagal [mad] when the driver asked him about the further journey. He stealthly walked to his apartment following Ishita after settling the driver.


TO BE CONTINUED...


PS. Please tell me honestly if I should continue or not 😕
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Gaya3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Gaya you remind me of that day hide and seek in the wardrobe. And Ishra always had some clich romance near the wardrobe ( the ring seal life long together). I think will be nice one in lighter mood please continue want to see Ishra expression.😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yeh I love romcom type update 😛 and Raman and ishita in home alone state tell me one thing does this update have more romance or more comedy 😉 according to miss gaya3 amma. I think first option is right 😆 I am waiting
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nyc prologue di. excited to read ishra romantic comedy. update soon
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Im expecting comedy..i want raman one liner and ishita kuch bhi;-);-);-)
waiting:-D
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Intresting prologue
Expecting comedy and romance
Waiting.
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interesting start
ishra cute nok jhok
n romance I just loved continue soon
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This sounds so interesting.. Waiting!!

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