AsYa FF : Not meant to be (Ch5 18/8) - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
#51
Dat was a gr88 chp
Asad was concerned for zoya
He met her
Dey r cumin to stay at asads plc
Thnks fr pm
Cntinue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
Emotional update
Zoya lost her father bc of heart attack. Asad was worried for her as he didn't saw her. Zoya missing him. Asad went to zoya home & got shocked to know abt her father. So now zoya is coming to stay at asad house. Update soon plz
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
Very sad
Zoya lost her father.
A sad came there.show his concern n love n then refuse saying it's live for a fruend.
So she is actually going to stay with asad but both are unaware of it
Feeling bad for zota.
Continue soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
Lovely update
so beautiful story
plz pm me wen u will update
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408

An emotnal updt.
Very sad,zoya lost her dad.asad console her.
Bt whts tht asad's 'jst frnd' jaap?his insecure feelings hurt zoya.
Zoya cming 2 asad's house 2 stay bt both didnt knw it.
Lets c wht happn nxt whn asya cm fc 2 fc at KV.
Thnks 4 pm.cntinu soon



Thank you 😃😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: --Arpita--

nice..too touching n emotional


Thank you so much 😃😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: asadzoyaqubool

Dat was a gr88 chp

Asad was concerned for zoya
He met her
Dey r cumin to stay at asads plc
Thnks fr pm
Cntinue soon


Thank you :'}
Glad you liked it 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
Chapter 5

The door bell rang , dilshad went running to welcome her guest.

Asssalam alaikum Aunty , said the guest. She was wearing a red color dress with ipad in her hands.

Walekumasalaam, kaisi Ho Zoya ?

Mein thik hoon Aunty

Don't call me Aunty , I have taken care of you since your mom left you. I'm like your mom beta :")


Yeah... Ammi
Haan ab yah hoyi na baat

I felt really sad when guffour left us. He was really an wonderful person.

I miss him so much , she said with Tears in her eyes. Dilshad hugged Zoya.
I under stand your feelings. But you have to move on. mein Khana lagati hoon tum wahan bait jao, dilshad said pointing the dinning table.

Nahi Ammi , I had food.
Sure ? Eat little atleast ?
Nah Ammi shukriya.

Take rest now , you seem to be so tired.
Room Kahan hai?
2nd floor right.
Ok Ammi , good night
Do tell me if you have any problem here Zoya , dilshad said with a smile on her face.

Haan ammi , ghar bahut beautiful hai.

Thank you , mere bete ki choice SE bana hai.

Oh yeah apka beta , Kahan hai? I remember when I and he used to play together and fight so much.

He was so tired so I told him to rest , dilshad lied.

Acha Ammi.


Zoya had no idea where her room was. She forgot what dilshad had told her. She went upstairs and turned left. She was confused.

This house is sooo big , she thought in her mind. The room lights were off. She turned them ON, and was surprised to see. How beautiful it is! That beautiful window. The wallpaper and all. Just so beautiful. She headed towards the washroom.

She tried opening the door but failed. She pushed more and more , unknowing there is someone inside.

The person inside heard someone trying to open the door , kaun hai? He screamed from inside.

And Zoya , without hearing the person's voice still kept trying to open the door. The person opened the door while Zoya had pushed the door, she ended in someone's arms.

She opened her eyes.

Mr khan? What the hell are you doing here ?

I'm supposed to ask you this. What are you doing in my house ?

Your house ? Oh please mr Khan , all the beautiful houses in Bhopal is not your house , and this is my room.

What? Do you even know what are you saying? This is my room since years.

Wait. This is your house ?
Haan
Is dilshad ammi your mom?
Haan
How do you know ?
Zoya was shocked , she opened her eyes widely.

You can blink , said asad.

Ammi said me that my room is in 2nd floor left.

She said right maybe. Wait? Ammi? You meant my mom?

Yeah.
Are you the guest?
Sadly.
Omg. I'll have to suffer you here also now.
Oh really ?
Sadly.
Argh mr khan. Bye!
Bye.
Now go?
This is my room .you can leave .
No this is my room.

Just then dilshad enters the room ,
Acha tum yahan par HO. I had told you right Na. Anyways , this is asad my son. You Both are childhood friends remember ?

Asad & Zoya looked at each other.

I can't believe she is my childhood friend , kitni achi thi ye once upon a time ab dekho. , said asad teasing her.

Acha ! Aur ap ? Ek number ke akdu !
Whatever , replied asad.
Allah miyan , what's wrong with you?
Kya?
Nothing , replied Zoya.

Chup chup , kitna laroge tum log? Bachpan mein toh tum dono love birds KI Tarah saath hote the. Ab Dekho , said dilshad.

Bachpan mein Na Ammi , ab dekho kitna change hoo geye hai mr akdu!

Oh really ? Look at ur self.

Chodo tum dono. Yaad hai jab Zoya ja rahi thi, tum dono ek dusre Ko chod hi nahi rahe the. Asad cried also , dilshad said laughing .

Zoya & asad both blushed.

Ammi bas kariye , good night , said asad.

Good night asad , good night Zoya.

Good night Ammi , replied Zoya.

Zoya made a 'whatever ' expression at asad and left his room.

How kiddish. Thought asad , smiling.

Next morning ;

Zoya , asad & dilshad are sitting on the dinning table eating their breakfast.

Asad ; ammi najma ne khana khaya ?
Dilshad ; Haan asad

Zoya ; najma ? *confused *

Dilshad ; oh yeah Zoya , I forgot to tell you , najma asad KI behen hai.
Zoya : toh woh yahan kyu nahiand ayi? She doesn't want to meet me ?

Dilsha ; woh actuallyyy. Najma Ko hea...

Just then asad cuts her .

Asad ; woh she is not well , that's why she didn't come here to have the breakfast.

Dilshad was confused , why did asad lie ?

Zoya ; Acha. Fever ?
Asad ; umm, yeah.
Zoya ; she doesn't want to meet me ?

Asad ; woh actually she doesn't know that you came cuz she is sick.

Zoya ; oh okay. *looks at the watch* Allah Miyan ! It's 9am already! Mr khan you don't wanna go to College or what?

Asad ; oh sh** , Ammi bye I'm getting late.

Dilshad : by the way?zoya is going with you too.

Asad & Zoya both look at each other with a surprised face.

Zoya ; no ammi it's fine I would go by myself.

Dilsha : nahi Zoya , you re in this house , so obviously you're our responsibility. You're going with Asad & that's final.

Zoya ; thik hai.

Dilshad ; by the way Aisha nahi ayi?
Zoya : she went to her house.
Dilshad ; Kyu?
Zoya ; her husband had called her , he didn't want her to be with me..
Dilshad ; Kyu? Anyway jao.

Asad & Zoya leaves the house. They feel very awkward in the car.

Asad : mein apka driver nahi Ho. Come and sit in the front.

Zoya : Allah Miyan , why should I ?
Asad : cuz I told you.
Zoya ; oh really ? Do you think I would even obey your words ?

Asad : I know you won't , still come.
Zoya ; no
Asad : better come.
Zoya ; no.
Asad : or else.
Zoya : or else what?
Asad looked at her angrily. Zoya got scared & sat in the front seat next to asad.

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I know you guys wont be satisfied with my update 🤣
Next Update would be romantic i promise 😆😆😆

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I really wanna know do you guys actually like this story , if no then i would be discontinuing 😕

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Edited by Afr.in - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
wonderful updt Afreen
so Asad paid Zoe a visit
& now she's coming his home
well done looking 4ward 2 nxt part😛
btw sorry I guess I missed 2 comnt last time😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
oops😳 I didn't knew u were updating
can I take this 2 res my post😆😆
OK me 1st🥳
Edit
Chalo read it😊
It was such a lovely part Afreen
I really enjoyed it
Zoya came 2 KV
her Scene wid Dillu & Asad was so lovable
I liked their bikering & Dillu's comnts on their childhood days😛
Really enjoyed it😃
Curious on what's wid NAjma😕
Edited by jas91 - 10 years ago

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