AsYa FF : Not meant to be (Ch5 18/8) - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: asadzoyaqubool

Gr8 stry

Asya r adorable
Humeira😕 hpe she leaves asya happy
Pls pm me too


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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
WOnderful part Afreen
Asya's family scene's were good
So Humi se Asad ki CD khrad karke Zoe ko phsa diya 4 which he got angry on her
But Zoe managed 2 help him on time now he wants 2 apologise & she's gayab
ab kya hoga?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kabhibloom

Lovely chapter.
Zoya got insulted due to humera.
Continue soon



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: jas91

WOnderful part Afreen

Asya's family scene's were good

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So Humi se Asad ki CD khrad karke Zoe ko phsa diya 4 which he got angry on her


But Zoe managed 2 help him on time now he wants 2 apologise & she's gayab


<em>ab kya hoga?



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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
Nice story
So asya loves each other
But don't know and haven't confess
He pretends humera is his gf so Zoya stays away from him
Aww asad is the same always blaming soya
Can't believe humera is the witch in here
Love asya dance
Continue and pm plz
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice update
Humeira blamed zoya & asad didn't trust her. He hurt her again & she did whatever she can do for his presentation. He realised his mistake again & wanted to apologise but she was not there. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: anopama

Nice story

So asya loves each other
But don't know and haven't confess
He pretends humera is his gf so Zoya stays away from him
Aww asad is the same always blaming soya
Can't believe humera is the witch in here
Love asya dance
Continue and pm plz




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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 4

Asad tried his best to find Zoya . She was missing. He couldn't find her. He was upset & then he thought she must have gone home.

While at zoya's place -

Zoya came running to the hospital . She was worried. She had got call from Aisha telling her Abbu got heart attack suddenly. At that moment itself , Zoya had ran to the hospital.

Mr. Gaffoor kaunse room mein gain?
Wait a minute ma'am.
what minute ? It's an damn emergency!
Okay sorry he is in room number 32.
Where is room number 32?
From here , straight then right.

Zoya ran to room number 32. She saw Aisha sitting outside the OT.

Kaise hai Abbu? Is he fine ? Do did it happen ?
Aisha didn't reply , she was crying just crying.

Zoya kept asking her. She was broken. She only had her dad and Aisha. She didn't want to lose her dad.

Few mins later , doctor comes out of OT.
How is he ? Asked concerned Zoya.
I'm sorry... We couldn't save him..

I'm sorry we couldn't save him.
I'm sorry we couldn't save him.
These words were ringing in zoya's ears. She had fallen down already hearing it. She was uncontrollably crying. Aisha too was crying trying to console Zoya. She couldn't see Zoya in this condition.

3 days had already a passed.
Zoya didn't go to her college.
She was sick , high fever since 3 days. She was missing him already. She felt no one loved her. No one liked her. Aisha tried her best to get the old Zoya back.
Where as , asad was conserned. Where is she? Is she fine ? Is she still angry with me ? Should I go to her house ? He had finally decided to go to her house and meet her.

In the afternoon -

Aisha had gone out for buying vegetables for dinner. Zoya was alone in her house. She missed asad too. Is he still angry with me ? Ik he doesn't care about me, that's the reason he didn't call or come to meet me.

Just then the door bell rings.

Abuuu , koi aya hai!!
Zoya forgot that her dad is no more.
She had tears in her eyes. She loved her dad so much.
Zoya had gone to open the door as no one was there except her.

To her surprise , it was ASAD.
Without thinking anything , Zoya hugged him.
Tight.
Very tight.
Asad could feel her.
They both had closed their eyes.
Zoya started to cry.
Zoya didn't want to leave asad , she don't want to be alone.
They hugged for 5 mins. Asad allowed her to hug him as he knew SOMETHING WAS WRONG.
He couldn't see her crying. He lived it when she smiles , when she smiles the world smiles :") everyone loves her smiling.
Then slowly they leave each other.
Zoya looked in asad's eyes.
I'm sorry...
No , it's fine.
Okkk
Are you well?
Obviously. Mujhe Kya hoga? She said with a fake smile.

No fake smiles please. Kya hua ZOYA?
Zoya was shocked. This is the the VERY FIRST TIME WHEN ASAD CALLED HER with her NAME.

Zoya was silent. Asad was already worried.
Batao ? You won't share your feelings with me ? You don't take me as your friend ?
Friend ? Asked Zoya. Just friends ?
Asad looked at her.
Obviously ? Just friends ryt?
Oh yeah JUST FRIENDS.

Bolo.
Dad.
Ko Kya hua?
Hea..r.t Attaaa.c.kk.

Asad was shocked. He saw Zoya breaking down.

Oh my god :o yeah kaise huwa ?

I..I.. Don't know... He left me ... Everyone left me... No one loves me... Everyone left mee Asad. Even YOU.

Me ? No Zoya. I would never leave you. Never. Promise. I do love you.
Zoya was shocked. He loves me ?

No. I meant we love you. Ayaan loves you , Humeira loves you , Aisha loves you.

And you?

I do too. As a friend I do.

Yeah.. Wait for what you came ?
Come in Na

I wanted to meet you. I was worried.

You wer worried ? Why?

You were missing. I wanted to say you sorry.

For ?

Presentation. And thank you too.

It's fine .

So.. You would be living here with Aisha only? Why don't you shift to MY HOUSE ?

No. Actually I'm shifting to my dad's friend's house. Idk who are they. But they are my dad's close friend.

Who are they?

I don't know...

You would be living with strangers ?

Yeah.
Come to my house.

No asad. But thank you .

Hm. Okay. See you later. Bye take care. And don't be depressed.

Okay bye thank you ^^

Call me whenever you're sad. I'm there with you always okay?

Okay.

Omg !!! He is there with me !! Bale bale bale. So what Zoya? He is just your friend. Never mind.

Later in night -

Aisha done with packing ? Asked Zoya.

Haan all done.

Let's go then.

Only you .
What only me ? I ain't going with you you.

Hahah I was joking. I'm always with you okay?

I love you maan '
I love you too now let's go.

They were shifting to her dad's friend's house. They don't even know who are the people living there , they just know it's a family of 3.

While at asad's house
Ammi kaun araha hai? Asked asad.
Woh gaffour bhaijaan hai na ? Woh guzar geye. Toh unke beti aur dost arahe hain.

Ya Allah . RIP. Kab Aj?
Haan. Kuch hi waqt mein.

Hmm. I'm going to sleep.
Atleast meet them and then go?
I have no interest to meet any stranger.
Aray , she is very nice.
I have no interest Ammi , good night
Good night beta ^^

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I'm done with this too.
I hope you liked it :")
Thanks for your comments ^^

For PMs buddy me.
Edited by Afr.in - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
An emotnal updt.
Very sad,zoya lost her dad.asad console her.
Bt whts tht asad's 'jst frnd' jaap?his insecure feelings hurt zoya.
Zoya cming 2 asad's house 2 stay bt both didnt knw it.
Lets c wht happn nxt whn asya cm fc 2 fc at KV.
Thnks 4 pm.cntinu soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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