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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ToxicLove

Asha, Sharu...Hold On...Almost done...I am struggling with a dialogue...Bear with me...Its almost ready...I am working on it as we speak...


No problem dear...

Take your time...😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
A Morning Text Does Not Mean Only Good Morning.. But It Olso Mean, I Think About SexBetween Hearts When I Wake Up...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ToxicLove

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Asha, Sharu...Hold On...Almost done...I am struggling with a dialogue...Bear with me...Its almost ready...I am working on it as we speak...</font>



Waiting for update deepthi woh bhi palke bichaye.. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago


aweee excellent chapter...one of THE BEST of sbh...i am in love with ur perfect timings about everything deeps...its like this chapter meant to be the high time...thats the amazing writing skills u having baby...how excellent u portrayed the best friends forever in arnav khushi... both r right there for each other that goal was when set completely ...the way both were talking with so much of ease and comfy ...lag hee nahi raha tha that there was any gender difference it was like emotions going from one heart to other...blood running from one body to other...smiles sharing...promises noted...route map discussed...talk and solve issues ...when every thing done then it feels to me u holding hands of arnav and helped him in crossing the next line that is above friendship...his dil ki duniya...and this time he opened all the gates and windows of his heart for her only...showing the side of his personal to his lady of heart...its like stage is set to show wt this man can offer next to khushi ...



arnav state goes so well with this song...


Hume Tum Se Pyaar Kitna

Tumhe Koi Aur Dekhe To Jalta Hai Dil

Badi Mushkilo Se Phir Sambhalta Hai Dil

Kya Kya Jatan Karte Hai Tumhe Kya Pata

Yeh Dil Bekaraar Kitna Yeh Hum Nahi Jaante

Magar Jee Nahi Sakte Tumhare Bina



Edited by lalarukh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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What an amazing update deepthi!! 😳 This update is just a dream..umm no a beautiful dream come true..:) i was like waiting for it for sooo long:) your given teaser already gave me unlimited dhak dhak but after reading the update my heart is completely out of control due to happiness:)

I can imagine arnav's expression watching his tsunami aka khushi on door..:) loved the way you describe how he felt seeing her, noticing her details!! Khushi has obviously not expected that arnav will open door for her as it was his birthday..!!! There come a beautiful moment when khushi hugged him and wished him but again confusion takes over his sharp mind..!! Haha " bechara arnav, uske sath kya ho raha hai use pata hi nahi hai" 😃 😆 before he conclude something anjali comes and divert khushi's attention.. Haha..:) she is such a devil:) I love the concern that arnav have for khushi that it must be difficult for her to manage her family :) can he get more cuter than that..?? Loved Anjali n khushi's convo about party, arnav's arrival :) they are so comfortable with each other after few meetings:)

Arnav n khushi's conversation makes me feel really good as they sort out the issue and his anger melts in front of her just like that..!!! Khushi understand him so perfectly as friend but i guess she felt something more than that ..!!! I guess Arnav's heart go dhak dhak when she came closer to ask about arjun n anjali:) Loved small moments like how khushi jaw dropped after seeing arjun n anjali kissing, khushi bidding bye, praising arjun's home:) you've write it so amazingly deepthi :)

I was amazed how khushi asked him about his home..!! That was sucha cute thing:) loved their car ride!! I loved every single conversation they have that i cant pick which one i like the most:) The parting is bit painful when he stop her by uttering her name.. My heart beats increased when he asked her " How about you, would you have married me?" It was like now or never as you said..!!! And there comes THE moment which we all readers were waiting for desperately..!! If one can see its just a kiss , but you my dear created magic that one kiss spoke volume itself..!!! The way they come closer, him noticing her face expression, soft touches everything is so pure and divinely written:) i was savouring each and every word you have written that was so romantic deepthi :) finally they had their first kiss.. Seriously it was a pure bliss to read it!!



It was beautiful moment but his last words just left me speechless !! Lovely selection of words deepthi:) mostly reader speculate that arnav will not kiss her or there will be some twist but you gave us what we all were craving for ..😆



Nothing can be beautiful than this "Fall in love with me, Khushi!" loved it 😳
Edited by Dhrenu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
THEY REALLY KISSED... OMG...can't believe... U r awesome deepu. What n chapter dear. U get me killed one day with ur story. Hahahaha jokes apart but wow...finally DrRji make a move and confess something... Now what????? Defiantly khushi is going to burry herself deep down. But I'm sure here comes lav to help her ...😃. Kyoki dimag ki batti jalane ke lie koi toh chahiye ab next update mein khushi ke reaction ka intzar...but please yaar teaser mat dena kyoki I'm sure teaser janleva hone wala hai...
I'M THIRD... Yipeee
Edited by 9351594004 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
i res aftr so many months.. Feeling mjhey koi position mili...lol
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From Wednesday i was back on IF..and first thing i ask Maasi kya padho..😕 she suggested me SBH.. 😃after reading all chapters back to back.. u advised me "Soja"n mai sau b gayi tab..
but wnen i chkd thread again in morning,i mean what i am seeing new thread with teaser..
and teaser b kaesaa Kissing one..

and slowly slowly i start reading everyone's assumption regarding "Kissing Teaser.."

my first reaction was i have heard about Kissing Car in P.K😉 movie bt "Kissing Teaser"😆
wo b aapse means have to work for this.. so i wear my CID glasses and then kaam shuru..
Kisss.? Kuch gadhbhad hai..?😲

itna hi nahi even i typed KISS in google js to see it's definition..
and my theory regarding KISS is here MADAM..😆 I have finished my work.. now give me my marks..lol

"A Kiss Is The Touch Or Pressing Of One's Lips Against Another Person.."

while going through Kiss's Definition i found there something very thoughtful for me..

"A Kiss Can Express Sentiments Of LOVE, PASSION, ROMANCE, SEXUAL ATTRACTION, SEXUAL ACTIVITY, SEXUAL AROUSAL, AFFECTION, RESPECT, GREETING, FRIENDSHIP, PEACE AND GOOD LUCK.."
and after reading update i can proudly say for Arnav this KISS WAS NOT ONLY TO SHOW HIS LOVE,PASSION,ROMANCE BUT FOR MY JAAN DR R JI THIS KISS MEANS "KISS OF PEACE"👏👏
kasam se for this update mjhey feel horaha hai i did phd in Kiss😆😆.. kitni Kisses's k barey mai padha. have nvr heard about them.😲
bacha loug u b padho sab..how many kisses r in total..? meri trh confusewaa jawogey..😲
Kiss Of Respect
Kiss Of Peace
Kiss Of Friendhsip
Kiss Of Love
Kiss Of Protection
Kiss Of Trust
Kiss Of Disguise
Kiss Of Dragon
Kiss Of Passion
Kiss Of Arousal
French Kiss
Choclate Kiss
Healthy Kiss
n yes imp one Kissing Disease..lol
ufff.. kitna kaam kraati ho aap mjhse..
but i loved while doing it,,👍🏼 coz as usual i learn something new..🥳
now i can say proudly My dear Husband ☺️I M ready for whatevr kiss u lyk bt in future...🤣lol

whole update was totaly soothing.. roumaniyat se bhara.. bt i frgt ol update only Kiss yaad hai..
Baarish phir Kiss.. ufff.. ufff.. ufff.. maasi k style mai bht saarey ufff..😆

For Arnav i m quoting some beautiful lyns.. coz i read in one of update he loves alchol when khushi made coffee.. his condition is same lyk these lyns..
"AND WHEN HER LIPS ARE PRESSED MINE,
I AM MADE DRUNK AND NEED NOT WINE,
WHEN WE KISS. AND HER WARM LIPS HALF OPEN,
I FLY CLOUD HIGH EVEN WITHOUT BEER"

same lyn from my side no worries of nxt update.. when writer aap ho toh mai q tension lou.. i Trust u.. I Love u so much.. and thank u spamming k lye na rokne k lye, hug u tytlyyy🤗❤️
ab waps update padhungi.. coz mai bhool gayi sb..hehehehehe
Edited by ShahSAIR - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
One of the best...👏. I am over the moonnn 🤗

Wow, you have a way with naming your characters, Tsunami, Hitler, Fireball? What more is to come? I am sure, they are few more to come, before the journey is overs... In the Valiant night is was Black and White and his Posy...

What magic has Khushi sprinkled onto our poor Dr. R Ji? Her presence itself melt him into thin air... The anger forgotten... At the same time it sparks at rocket speed... Poor Dr R Ji and his Tsunami...a well suited name for her. She creates Tsunami into this heart, brain and does his poor soul is included too?

The duo conversation was absolutely fantastic and so natural...👏

It's not a one sided affair, both creates havoc to the other... But our naive Khushi is in oblivion. When will she realize this?

The present was so cute... 😛

It was a close shot?... Haha 😆 what is in store for part two...


PART TWOO...

A well rewarded update... ❤️

woah hooo? What do I say now... Our stragtegy worked... We can now rest in peace for a week, until the next teaser...

But, sincerely sorry for stalking your tread... But wouldn't hesitate to do it again if the teaser tease life out of us...😈... Just kidding...

I am so in love with Dr. R Ji for his bold move...

What do I say about the closing phrase... " Fall in love with me, Khushi", even, I wouldn't think twice before falling him totally, utterly and deeply...


Anxiously waiting to findout her response... Hope she wouldn't blow it up...

Edited by SharuAG - 10 years ago

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