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Posted: 9 years ago

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WOW! The way you portray their feelings, inner turmoil.. its just marvelous..

I guess Khushi will take time to come with terms to Arnav's oh sorry R ji's feelings towards her 😉

Beautiful story 😊

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eka.verma

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Posted: 9 years ago

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WOW! This is such a beautiful story...mind blowing! You are a fantastic writer!!!thumbs up!

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mansi0606

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Posted: 9 years ago

#943

Woman you re incredible amazing

I had read few chapters of SBH but then i didnt get to read it and now I have resumed again. You make me fall in love with your writing after every update.

You shud consider publishing.Like seriously.

Coming to the updates I read in a go

I loved the court hearing and the way Arnav handled it with his 'shaatir dimaag ' style the way Khushi held herself The innocence of Khushi and Arshi's friendship and the beauty of Arnav's love, the way you put forward the turmoil and agony of lower middle class parents in a conservative society wanting to support their daughter and their fear of failing her,the unwavering support of their friends and arshi nightly calls and msgs loved every bit.

I held my breathe while reading last part of chapter 29 and left a content sigh at the end. You make me fall in love with Arnav again and again.

I have to read further but before I left for the day I had to comment. Bye