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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ToxicLove




Wow K, this is soo beautiful. Dr. R Ji love letter is superb...I wish he could do something like this for Khushi 😉

@PINK: How beautiful and apt is this line..My favorite...Thanks dear for sharing this.


@Red.. I will definitely faint if your Arnav become this dramatic 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
What a cute start of Anjali and Arjun's love story and for poor Arnav, one step forward and two steps backwards.
Edited by Armela - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Great update yaar!
Loved it to d core!😆😆😆
Such a sweet start of Anjali and Arjun's story😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago


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Posted: 10 years ago
wt a lovely update..seriously for me its not short one cause, its such heavy loaded with emotions and realisations that its worth 2 parts :)..all thanks to u for ur sincerity towards writing although u busy still u manage to pull it out brilliant...

how beautifully u have written arnav realisation that she not even attracted to him...no jelly,no possessiveness,no problem in sharing him even...aweee poor arnav..a man who is all about love and nothing else is suffering for the same,love..
and i think his break down in front of his besties is the most natural thing one can expect..i think u have shown real sense they friends in happiness and sorrow ,the way he shared his heart content in front of anjali and arjun...i loved it ...uff his reasons r the same as of anjali...beautiful..."friends" and fear of running away from him if khushi knows his feelings...so real deeps...awesome

now y she is crying,y a tear left her eye,y his silence effecting her ...her restless state ...maybe as friend today she is going through loads after seeing his response ,but i am sure if not now in future deep down these all feelings r going to hit her strong in a very different way ,the way arnav is going through right now :)...i found khushi pretty strong in her own lil way too..thinking about past ,that wait for a call thing,and then her anger in present and her resolution of not talking to him. but then very next moment she is ready to...it seems to me same like my new year one,weight loss the only aim...and it never happens at my end...same with her lol...so she is going to his birthday party and that also to fix her bestie mood...lol...she can't stay away from him...one thing is for sure :)

loved the way if arnav is surrounded by people who love him the most...similarly khushi is having lavuu at other end...and all friends now seriously focusing towards arnav and khushi ...hehe :)

its amazing to see lavuu such an intelligent soul...she is pretty similar to arnav in a way...adding 2 plus 2 is her cup of tea ...lol...the way she was having sympathy towards bechara doctor...:) thats simply awesome ...loved the way she tried to discuss lil bit about arnav maybe in love and all :)...loved how she dressed up khushi...taking so much care ...wt i imagine khushi must be looking like...i am sure arnav going to be mesmerised by her beauty...:) see i am having strong romantic imagination ,u know that...lol

garima and payal discussion on arnav ,hmmm...red alert :)...but its very true ,things can't be hidden from a mother's eye...specially if a mother is breathing careful steps in society..and i think u again very realistic in ur approach towards it...awesome

like seriously who throw party for falling in love...hehehehe...hilarious baby...our dear cupid sulking ...lol...loved these three friends hugging and thanking ...and staying happy in each other happiness... no matter back ends they all know one is going through hurt but supporting each other...thats beautiful :)👏...its pretty understandable the intension behind this party :)...hope it helps in manaofying arnav here :)

i loved the tsunami's in both arjun and arnav 's lives...lol...arjun here hilarious,my tsunami not urs..:)..lovely..indeed arnav life is upside down from the moment tsunami hit him hard ...lol...and loved how u have shown the entry of his tsunami...excellent writing...cliff hanger is killing but kiya keray wait keray ki perdhi...:)...loved the chapter to core :)

i think this whole chapter is about friends :)..friends helping friends at all ends..friend being restless for a friend...friend hiding his feeling for his friend..friend trying to put sense in friend...friends understanding each other ...and friends being happy in each other happiness


Edited by lalarukh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh my God tell me I'm dreaming. First time on second spot😳
I was waiting for two teasers actually..

I'm here I'm here 😊
This update was a total unexpected one for me and I dont mind it at alll..
Now lav knows it, and Anjali plus Arjun knows too what kaarnama did Khushi do, waiting for the face off eagerly at the party for falling in love 😆
OMG I cant just wait, but you take your time and update
will be waiting 😊
Edited by Rishaal - 10 years ago
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Wow.. What a surprise Deepthi. I didn't expect that you will come up with an update today. Amazing. Lovvved the surprise. Of course it is better than the teaser. And you said it is short update.. but it is more worth than long update. Today's update really gave me positive vibrations and made happy butterflies fly in my stomach. It was so beautifully written.


Since I read the last update I was thinking about, how Dr. R will react after saying shut up to her. I was so worried about how he will handle the situation and his frustration. But you really came up with an amazing style. (Of course you always do that).


Poor Dr. R.. he got the shock of his life from his woman. She is the only person on this planet who would think about hooking up Dr. R with others. And for that.. Poor Dr. Rji's phone has to suffer the punishment. I felt so sad for that cute little phone which must have been enjoying it's life in Dr. Rji's hands.. Now left lifeless in the form of broken pieces. When I imagined the broken pieces of the plastic, I felt like it the mirror image of the current situation of his broken heart.


But more than what she asked him.. the realization he got hurt him more. The realization that she is not possessive about him.. the realization that she is not jealous of seeing others girls with him.. the realization that she is not even attracted to him..is burning his heart more. All this while he tried to mask his feelings to not scare her away from forming any relationship. After they became friends.. he tried very hard to mask his feelings to not scare her away from trusting him.


He has many things to think about. Because this is not an ordinary girl to deal with. It is not that easy to tell Khushi that Dr. R ji has feelings for her.. She is like a sensitive doll kept safely on the edge of the mantel. Anything that hits hard at it will make the doll break into pieces. He should carefully lift it and put it safely inside the glass doors of his heart. And that's what Dr. Rji is trying to do since the day one. And for that he needed to put that doll on a soft cushion. He made their friendship as that cushion. Now.. he has to be very patient until that doll reaches his heart. One wrong move ... it will break forever.


While Dr. Rji's heart is weeping with it's fresh wounds... Her heart is struggling to breath because of his anger. She never witnessed this side of him. Because this time she pushed him beyond the capacity of his tolerance. And as a result she has to face the angry side of him. I don't know whether Khushi is realizing or not.. but for me.. I saw positive vibrations generating in her body. It is giving me the hope that the day she realizes that their relation is much more than friendship is not so far.


I really Lovved Lavanya's reaction. What she said is absolutely true.. he indeed got a shock of his life. I liked the idea Lavanya gave to Khushi to ask him whether he is in love. But here we are talking about Khushi. After seeing his reaction after putting her finger in his personal life.. will she ever dare to ask that question again.. She will come up in her own juvenile style testing his patience more.


So it is Garima who heard their conversation.. I thought it is sashi.. Heheh as always I guessed it wrong. (Hehehe .. I know as always). When the girl getting rejected many times.. parents will get new hope by changing little things in the appearance of displaying them infront the idiots who steps into the home thinking it is market. I don't understand why these people won't think and decide to to come after seeing the photo and doing the research on family. If they are ok with everything but just they want to meet the girl once.. then only they should visit the girl's home. or I would say it is better to make them meet outside.. just them. But all this procedure.. getting ready and displaying themselves to the boys who judge them cruelly.. is a complete brutality.. because every time when a girl gets rejected.. it kills her. Garima is also thinking that.. the expensive dress may help her daughter next time. But why Payal should face so many next times. Garima is sensing something.


What the... It's Dr. Rji's birthday. Really.. And Anjali and Arjun are giving him a surprise party. And Khushi is invited. And Khushi is getting ready for him. Did she even realize what she just said.. Either his anger or me should be in his life. ..OMG... And as a cherry on top... She is giving him names now.. Hitler. Oh my my .. the butterflies in my stomach are speeding up... I am feeling tickles...


And LOL.. Anjali and Arjun are giving party for falling in love.🤣 Really.. Seriously. ..Its hilarious.. Poor Arnav.. he is not in right mindset to even think the chance of his birthday party. His Tsunami's presence might bring his lost and wandering brain back to him. Tsunami.. hehehe right word given to her.


What the.. what the... what the... You are really a cruel angel.. Didn't you get the right spot to stop the chapter. Urgh.. My BP machine is in the verge of exploding. It's all your fault.. Please Time ji.. please roll this week very fast. I have to have to have to know what is next.


** I know.. I wrote a very long comment.. don't blame me yaar... blame yourself.. Your amazing writing made write this much and the butterflies in my stomach are not stopping flying..


I really loved the update so much Deepthi.. I should say you are amazing.. marvelous.. How could you write this beautifully in very short time.. in your busy time.. You are brilliant.👏 👏 👏
Edited by lovedrops - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow deepthi 😊 what a lovely surprise..!! I was stalking the thread for teaser but whoosh, There you updated. .! I just cant believe that you updated..!! Thank you so much dear for giving us update as we all know that your schedule is very busy..!!! Coming to the update, as usual brilliant update yaar.. 😃

I can still hear Arnav's SHUT UP echoing everywhere... I dont know what to say about khushi..?? How can she propose something like that.. She completely pissed him off with her so called proposal..:( i know that she felt bad for her taayi but it doesnot mean that she propose something like that to arnav.. !! Arnav's anger is genuine towards her.!! Here lavanya plays an important role by putting some sense into khushi:)

Anjali n arjun are like lifeline yaar:) i felt bad where arnav realises that khushi is not jealous or possessive or attracted towards her:( infact trying to hook him other women..!!! How can she not able to see the true feelings of arnav.. Does it mean she only considered him as only friend..?? But her first drop of tear after their phone convo shows the immense attachment that she felt unknowingly..!!!

I love when she said these lines "I am not buying any gift for that hitler. He will not get anything from me until he shoves away that anger forever. Either anger or Khushi stays in his life! There is no room for both!" After reading these lines i feel something more than friendship.. Maybe m over reading but i like it that way..!! I hope she realise it soon..!!

So it was garima who overheard payal n khushi's convo..!! I hope she will not create any problem ..!! So its anjali's plan to invite khushi at her place .. Hmmm interesting:) love arjun n arnav's convo !! Arnav opens door for khushi, his tsunami and they came face to face ..!! But you left us at cliffhanger deepthi:( that so evil yaar!! I so love the endearments that you give both to arnav n khushi whether its dollface or hitler :) haha.. Lovely update :) beautifully written !!

Thanks for pm:)

Edited by Dhrenu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
I was waiting for teaser but here we are getting an update :) maza hi aa gya..!! Thanks deepthi :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful update as usual deepthi :-)
Arnav's reaction is understandable and justified. . She is not jealous, not possessive and not attracted to him.. that hurts any lover, if his own love is match making with her own sister. . The irony is , all the girls surrounding him are gaga over him, but the girl he loves is not even attracted to him..
I loved arjun and anjali trying to comfort him.. they are there to share his happiness and also his sorrows.. true friends.. and adorable friendship..
Kushi is thinking that she has made him upset but not trying to know the reason for his outburst. . But i loved her determination to speak to him...
Lavanya on the other hand had made a million dollar statement that he might be in love.. hope kushi tries to find out, but i doubt after his reaction whether she will ever dare to intrude into his personal life. . But la's sympathy to drji is hilarious. .
So its garima who heard the conversation between payal and kushi.. but she is very smart.. she doesn't want payal to tell kushi, so that kushi will stop sharing with them..
Is it really drji's birthday or anjali will just tell kushi, so that she can surprise arnav by calling kushi..
He opened the door, and there stood his tsunami..
Everything in this update is about friends. . Lovely update deepthi. . Take a bow to your commitment dear..
But I've a doubt after reading the update deepthi. . Were you trying to put us out of this cliffhanger misery or trying to push more deep into it, by leaving us on another cliffhanger... lol...
Thanx for the pm and Waiting deepthi..
Edited by pravallika - 10 years ago

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