ISHRA SS: AGAINST ALL ODDS (Last chapter - Pg 24) - Page 20

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Pankhuri-

Res

my latest unres 😆...ok i know i am laughing like shameless but you know the real reason

ok coming to update...do i even need to write those words again and again...you just nailed it and you know it
Sheesh .. how late can you even get and real reason mujhe nahi pata 🤣🤣
the description of the morning was so painful and yet so beautiful...that emptiness 😭😭

Romi Raman scene was aww...his promise was so Raman kind of...he can go to any extent to protect his family
u know what you can make anything just so beautiful...i fell in love with that simple cupboard scene as well...firstly the desripction and then the way he ran his hand on her saree...blue shirt memory 😳😳😳

and and and finally the ishra scene...that one night of separation has created a havoc inside both of them...the way he took her towards the car 😳😳😳

her car never starts in one go it seems...Raman's that sense of responsibility and possessiveness at the same time was so cute...anyone would react the way he did...his angry mode is such a hot sight to witness...you just wrote that part too perfectly

Raman is surely a mystery not only for Ishita but for all of us...one moment he is angry and the next moment he is as caring...getting the shawl, setting her car all that proves it

Thanks a lot and glad you found their tadap cute which I really want to see in this show. Khair .. It's not happening 😆

and he is so intelligent...how he worked out everything and finally got a suspect on ACP too...you please take the credit coz the intelligence is yours obviously...you created him here this way 👏👏👏
Thank you ji Thank you 😳

Her happy face and those embarrassed eyes which spewed passion every time he spoke about consummating their relationship

ahem 😳😳😳...you perfectly know how to keep the reader stuck to it with such simple one lines...the part was getting serious and this line came and that's it

lo Mihika ne Ishu ko talli kar diya...🤣 bas isi ki kami thi

"i want him" ahem bold roop of ishu coming out

biwi and talli sequence is too cute and I really wanted that happening you see 😳 and felt this was the perfect timing 😆😆

Raman is not worried about talli biwi but the fact that she didnt drink with him but with Mihika 😆😆😆

mere raavan kumar mere ramu kumar 🤣

talli madrasan ko kaise rokun...arre rokna kyun hai mat roko...let it happen...i really liked her how she pointed her finger to calll him and he thought he was hallucinating

and the last part 😳

diii kya kar diya aapne...ek hi update mein itna sab...i am short of words...this was the best update of this story till now...i might change my words after reading the next update but until i read you can be happy...sach mein this was just the best 👏

Hehehehe 😆😳. IshRa romance jo show mein nahi milta 😆. Awww, that's a huge complement and I am grinning already 😳

thank you so much for this wonderful update...i loved every bit of it...i now feel i should have not delayed it this much Thanks Thanks Thank you so much for your kind words. Made my day 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Pankhuri-

RES 😭😭

yeahhh another unres...maine kisi ko dhokha de diya yeh unres karne ke liye 😆
Bechara 😡..

ok coming to update

what better can i read than this update

i mean shuru hote hi what a description of the morning...love, passion, shyness, happiness, desires and lil comedy...you blended everything so well in those perfect words that the morning just looked so beautiful

starting right from her position to her self realization about her deeds last night to her embarrassment to his teasing session and what not
jungli billi & wait for tomorrow 😳😳😳

awww..!!!! Thank you so much.. I mean such sweet words not sure if its even worth it. But one thing. You are too kind 😳

lo din shuru hua nhi aur miya biwi chalu...she is blabbering something about him and he wants to kiss her already but yeh phone...u went the cvs way...woh bhi humesha phone ko haddi banate hain aur aapne bhi bana diya 😡😡 but never mind i trust you

and the action sequence was just too real...i really enjoyed Raman beating that idiot black and blue...and and and i love for killing subbu...thank you so muchhh

the ending was perfect...her guilty and the way he pacified her...i just loved everything about it

di i dont know where to get new words from but this was just another perfect update...only if Taklu could read and put some sense in his useless mind

the best part was subbu dead 👏

All of you liked the fact that Dubbu died and me really happy about it. Thanks a tonne again 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Pankhuri-

one more res 😆😆😆

yeahhh another unres...now don't blame me for always being late lateef...i am faster than akshu atleast Tu kabhi nahi sudrogi and don't blame Akshu 😡.. Poor thing 😳

this last update is my favorite part from this story...not because of one particular reason which is the consummation ofcourse but because it has everything

when it comes to planning surprises Raman Kumar Bhalla is surely the best...who would go to an extent of giving sleeping pills...this is your creation so hats off to you 👏 Puttar can be gutsy if he wants to 😆. Awww, thenk you ji 😎

the family scene was cute too and Toshi Ji's reaction happy shappy honeymoon lolll...it will eventually be happy if you all dont disturb 🤣 🤣 🤣 Point but they can actually disturb anywhere and everywhere 😡🤣

coffee moment was just awww😳😳😳

i just loved how you chose nagin lake instead of dal lake...only you can do that I asked you and you ditched me.. So google helped me you see 😆

the conversation in the shikara was just heart touching...so simple meaningful and yet so beautiful...both of them opened up their guilt and comforted each other so beautifully

"Friendship is the first and last step of love. I finally found a relationship in between those steps with you.
this particular line stole my heart seriously ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ You know what when I wrote those lines.. I wasn't satisfied but then it's these comments which really made me feel good 😳. Special thanks for that,

their confession was just sooo...what do i say i dont have the right word to say

ahem kiss shikara mein 😳😳😳

ek aur kaam karna baaki hai humare liye 😳😳😳

and finally the ultimate step...it was "perfectly perfect" Thanks a lot .. See they can kiss anywhere and kahin pe bhi ☺️

i know that word makes no sense but i just mean to say it was just rightly done...so subtle and yet passionate...👏

Their sum of small mischievous and naughty acts began to unite them, their pure calculus of love ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

di this one was just beyond perfect...i just loved it

thank you so much for this wonderful story

Thanks for such sweet words.. I am really blushing and you made my day. Love you ❤️

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Posted: 10 years ago
Aru
I don't know how I had missed reading parts 4 & 5 of this.


Sorry yaar.

What can I say - I loved it. So hawt. The waist chain, the black saree, the candles, the kiss on the terrace, the way he kidnaps her and takes her away - everything was do well written and oh so romantic.

Hotwa Aru. Loved it.

👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
srinagar😳 wowieee... im late to read. Sowiee😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

read the last part again 😳
Edited by fugitives123 - 10 years ago

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