ISHRA SS: AGAINST ALL ODDS (Last chapter - Pg 24) - Page 16

Created

Last reply

Replies

195

Views

53.1k

Users

42

Likes

424

Frequent Posters

Aru.Divan thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vidya_prasad

Wow !!!!
Aru di... I'm loving this
Read all four parts together
Simply loved it
Subbu gaya finally... Kahi tho huva 😆
Action between puttar and subbu 👏
precap 😲 ... Kiska kidnap??
Waiting eagerly... Continue soon



Thanks a lot Vidya for reading and commenting!!!
Will be updating in some time and hope you will like the last and final part of this story :)
Edited by Aru.Divan - 10 years ago
Aru.Divan thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aviana

wow yaar amazing
well written kidnap bt kiska
updt soon



Thanks dear 😃
Aru.Divan thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shalz_123

subbu mar gaya.a..a. yaaay yaaay yaay...party party...

jungli madrasan...lmao...too good...

loved the update aru... poora filmy ishtyle... maaza aa gaya...

update soon...muaaah


Shalzu ..! Itna tho banta hai 😆

Glad you liked it and yes will update today ..!! Love ya ❤️
Aru.Divan thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: meenu_taarey

amaazing update

like it
\update soon n
pm me
take care



Thanks a lot 😃
Aru.Divan thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago
This is another cheesy filmy update from my side and my last one for this SS. Not sure if I have done justice to what I had promised but here it is. I am bad with poetry be it English or Hindi, But puttar is just too good when he gets all romantic. I have tried my shot at it and hope you all are able to connect it with my story. I don't mind being criticized so please feel free 😃.

CHAPTER 5

He stood there in the kitchen with sleeping pills in one hand and alcohol in the other. He was about to add the alcohol but thought about her state few nights before and placed the alcohol on the table with a force. He took two of the sleeping pills and started stirring them in to her juice with excitement and wiped the sweat off his forehead. He walked in to his room and found her staring outside the window wilting in her guilt. He did not want to see her like that but this was her over the last two days.

"I don't have the mood and don't force me please" and she pushed the juice away. "Arre Madarasan, Ek juice hi tho hai.. You won't become fat" and he winked at her. "Ramannn" and she pouted at him. He placed the glass on her lips and gently forced the juice. "Raavan Kumar" she murmured. She started feeling drowsy after a solid 10 to 15 minutes and settled herself on the bed entering in to a long slumber as planned by him. He had convinced and packed all the ladies off to the spa including his mother in law and here he was packing some random things for her in to a bag. Within hours' time he got everything ready and carried her all the way in to the car "Yeh Madarsan zaroor moti hogayi" and found her getting disturbed a little. He shushed himself and sat in the driver seat making their way to the airport. After clearing all the formalities he helped her sit inside the private jet.

At the Bhallas, they entered in to a very silent house and looked for Raman and Ishitha. Simmi tried reaching both their phones but were switched off. Neelu entered the house in the meantime and she handed over an envelope to Simmi saying it was from Bhai. She couldn't control herself from laughing when she read the letter. Mrs. Bhalla nudged her and asked her to read out the contents

Simmi,

I am taking my wife away from all this for a few days to spend time with her. Lots have happened over the past few months and we really needs this time. Now stop laughing and inform everyone else at home. Please do not try contacting us, we will be safe wherever we are and will return before the kids are back from their camp.

~ Raman Kumar Bhalla.

Both laughed out loud for a second and Mrs. Bhalla spoke aloud "Hoyeee hoyeee mere puttar Happy honeymoon Shoneymoon"

Inside the aircraft, Ishitha had her head rested on his shoulders throughout the journey and he made sure nothing disturbed her sleep. He did not want any glitch till they reached the destination. They had to set many things right in their life and he wanted a fresh start. After an hour or more of travel, they landed in summer capital of Jammu and Kashmir. She slowly stirred in her sleep after hours. He was excited but he wanted her to sleep for an hour more. He again patted her to sleep and made sure to take care of things even better till they reached their place of stay. An hour later they reached the place and after earning some unusual glares from all the people around, he carried her in to the suite he had booked for the two of them.

After a good relaxed sleep, she scrunched her eyes open and stared at the wooden ceiling. She looked around the canopy like bed with curtains covering all the four sides. The intricate work on the four posters and the ceiling scared her. She shouted his name in fear and he was there in a flash. Without realizing she hugged him like she saw a nightmare but a beautiful one alone. He kissed her forehead and she opened her eyes and was puzzled at the view before her. "Welcome to Srinagar, Mrs. Raman Bhalla" and her eyes almost popped out. "Arre yaar saans tho lelo, we are here from all of them just you and me" and winked at her. For once she wanted to be selfish and enjoy the time with him. Staying away from family and kids worried her but she thought she would stay in touch with them. She again found herself in his embrace and stayed there resting her head for a couple of more minutes. Both wanted to talk but they found it better to spend the rest of the evening in a calm manner.

He woke up the next morning to an empty bed side. She was standing at the sit out and sipping on her coffee when she felt him hugging her from the side. He took a sip of her coffee while she wrapped the other half of the shawl around him. They enjoyed their perfect morning in each other's warmth while they sipped coffee from the same cup. Such moments came in their life after 1.5 years in to their married life.

After lunch, they were on a Shikara enjoying the vibrant view of the Nagin Lake. He preferred Nagin Lake to keep them away from the crowd which was quiet common in Dal Lake. The scenic view and breath taking of nature's beauty did not stir the both of them during their initial part of the journey.

Ishitha: When I saw Subbu for the first time, I was angry for facing him again in my life. I was tired hiding behind a faade which read I am strong. I never wanted to trust him, but his loss and then his sudden attraction towards Ananya fooled me again. Mummyji wanted Simmi to settle down and I felt everyone did deserve a second chance in their life. I had long forgotten whatever that happened between me and Subbu and thought his loss would have changed him. But he did not Raman. He would never love anyone. He was an obsessive lover of no one but himself. I fell in to the trap when he blamed Romi for the accident. I can never forget that night for one reason. He had his face turned to the opposite side when she mentioned about that night. He wiped the lone tear which clouded his eye. It's not that I want to be against our family or anything Raman, maybe I take them all for granted and start getting impulsive.

Raman: Ishitha why are you blaming yourself? It is not just you but we were all taken on a ride. None of us really looked in to all that was happening behind our back. If you want to blame anyone, it should be me. I failed as a brother not once but twice. My messy personal life after Ruhi's birth did not allow me to exercise any of my other duties with utmost responsibility. If there is someone who has to be blamed for Romi, Simmi or Rinki's life then it has to be me. You entered in to my life as a not so pleasant person but you did take my past along with Ruhi and you have changed it till now. We have all ignored many things Ishitha. I still remember being warned by Mihir about Shagun and her sudden trip to leave the country. But I chose to ignore it even after knowing how cunning she can get. This is us Ishitha. Our love for our family makes us forget the truth that we have gone past from being together for "Sirf Ruhi ke liye". I break promises when I make

Ishitha: I forget we are a couple and bring Ruhi between us.

Raman: Chod do yeh sab. Ruhi Adi aur sab ko. Sirf hum ek dusre ke liye (leave all of this behind. Ruhi, Adi, everyone. Just for the two of us

"Friendship is the first and last step of love. I finally found a relationship in between those steps with you. Let bygones be bygones. Let's step in to a more meaningful relationship which has understanding and loyalty with love for the rest of our life. I love you Mrs. Raman Kumar Bhalla" and held his hand before her. She locked her hands with his and replied "I love you Raman Kumar Bhalla".

He looked around for a second and sealed his lips with hers. She deepened the kiss this time around plunging in to his mouth, yanking his hair while he moaned her name in to her mouth and his hands clutched her waist tight. Events of that night flashed in her head which made her withdraw from the kiss all of a sudden. She blushed and her cheeks turned cherry red as the cold wind blew across their faces "Raman, that night". "I got the same" and held her in his arms tight. She stammered for words and heard him again "Ek aur kaam karna baakhi hai hamare liye" and winked at her, while she hid her face against his chest refusing to show her face to him.

She stood before the mirror in the bathroom trying to calm herself. The room was lit with perfumed candles definitely increasing the temperature of both the room and her body. She clicked open the bathroom door when she saw him waiting for her in the bed. She stood before the bed taking the sight of him in black kurtha through the curtains while he couldn't take his eyes off her. She had draped herself in a black shiffon saree with a thin strand like waist band beneath her pallu. The pallu which was fastened in pleats made the band all the more visible adding a sensuous touch to her dressing. Her hair set to one side falling freely down her shoulders and her smoky eye makeup definitely raised the sexual meter he felt. He ran his hand from the other side of the curtain tracing her figure and stopped near her waist. He stroke his finger gently over her hip chain which evoked a tingling sensation within her. She struggled to push the canopy curtains with her hands which were trembling under his passionate gaze. Minutes later she found herself on his lap and heard him whisper "Sexy Madarasan, mujhe marwanae ka irada hai kya". His tone made her clutch his hands tight when he felt tiny little bumps erupting on her skin. He ran his hands over them and kissed her nape as he heard her hiss. While his hands moved closer to her waist he felt her body warming up and slowly he unclasped the hip chain while running and stroking his fingers over her tender belly. Minutes later he undid her safety pin and yelped suddenly. She instantaneously sucked his finger and in the process her pallu which was freely floating fell down making him stare at her amorously. He traced her face with his pricked finger and pulled her cheeks.

Mere Haath Mein Tera Haath Ho Saari Jannatein Mere Saath Ho
Tu Jo Paas Ho Phir Kya Yeh Jahaan Tere Pyar Mein Ho Jaaun Fanaa

He ran his hands generously over her bare shoulders and explored her back ripping her dori which held her blouse together. Her hands tried holding on to the blouse but she was pushed on the bed and her blouse now lay aside on the floor. He dropped kisses generously on her face wiping away the tiny beads of sweat that appeared on her forehead while she had her hands on his back underneath his kurtha. She looked in to his black knight eyes with the same emotion that his eyes spewed.

Tere Dil Mein Meri Saanson Ko Panaah Mil Jaaye
Tere Ishq Mein Meri Jaan Fanaa Ho Jaaye

He leaned forward and kissed her again and she kissed him back with more fervor than she had before. Her hands ran slowly up into his curly hair pulling them and down over his thick shoulders and along his strong arms and around his brawny back, holding his gorgeous male body against hers. His hands float onto her. Their sum of small mischievous and naughty acts began to unite them, their pure calculus of love.

Rone De Aaj Hamko Do Aankhen Sujaane De,
Baahon Mein Lene De Aur Khud Ko Bheeg Jaane De
Hain Jo Seene Mein Qaid Dariya Woh Choot Jaayega
Hain Itna Dard Ke Tera Daaman Bheeg Jaayega
Jitne Paas Paas Dhadkan Ke Hain Raaz
Jitne Paas Bundon Ke Baadal
Jaise Saath Saath Chanda Ke Hain Raat
Jitne Paas Nainon Ke Kaajal
Jitne Paas Paas Saagar Ke Lehar
Utne Paas Tu Rehna Humsafar
Tu Jo Paas Ho Phir Kya Yeh Jahaan
Tere Pyar Mein Ho Jaaun Fanaa
Mere Haath Mein Tera Haath Ho Saari Jannatein Mere Saath Ho

Adhoori Saans Thi Dhadkan Adhoori Thi Adhooren Hum
Magar Ab Chaand Poora Hain Falak Pe Aur Ab Pooren Hain Ham

****************************************************

Thank you all once again


Edited by Aru.Divan - 10 years ago
Anju.s thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
Res

Unres

Loved it finally puttar took biwi for alone time/honeymoon 😳 ...show mein bhi kuch aisa Hi karo puttar 😉.

Puttar and biwi in black 😳...and that kamarband haiyee ☺️☺️.

The song choice also excellent ...once again brilliant 👏👏
Edited by yhmmylife - 10 years ago
fugitives123 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
res
Unres

Sowwy i'm late 🤗

I loved the update. Such a beautiful end to this awesome story. 👏👏👏

Puttar said "Sirf hum ek dusre ke liye" 😳 Good choice of location...The romance was sooo hotwa☺️ Loved it...esp the parts where she sat on his lap and the one where he unclasped the hip chain...

Loved the song..fit really well...esp the last 2 lines..

Adhoori Saans Thi Dhadkan Adhoori Thi Adhooren Hum
Magar Ab Chaand Poora Hain Falak Pe Aur Ab Pooren Hain Ham
Edited by fugitives123 - 10 years ago
Aru.Divan thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: florine_20

Wow sensuous update.
lovely



Thank you 😳
.TIA. thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
Res
Edited 😛
Haiillaaa Aru

I'm Deadwaa ☺️ ☺️
It was so beautifully written.
Puttar n Biwi in black
Puttars Battle supreme finally successful 😆
🤗
Edited by .TIA. - 10 years ago
janani_divan thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago
Sensuous and romantic update..;-)
atlast raman successfully completed his mission..;-)
happy ending
thanks for pm:-)

Related Topics

Ye Hai Mohabbatein Thumbnail

Posted by: Im_sherlock

5 months ago

IshRa OS: Unspoken Desires.

On the show, we all know how Raman tried to give hints to Ishita about his feelings and desires, by keeping a box of condoms in her drawer. An...

Expand ▼
Ye Hai Mohabbatein Thumbnail

Posted by: ChanChanMan

4 years ago

YHM DT #8 (Strictly Reserved for IshRa/DivAn)

I dare you to post a thing about anyone other than DivAn.

Expand ▼
Ye Hai Mohabbatein Thumbnail

Posted by: Devanshi14

4 months ago

FF: IshRa ISHQ !!

Chapter # 01 Title: “Pehli Baar Ishq Hua” Raman and Ishita had been married for months now—contractually, yes—but slowly, silently, love had...

Expand ▼
Ye Hai Mohabbatein Thumbnail

Posted by: Im_sherlock

4 months ago

ISHRA OS:- Tumhare bina main adhoora hoon.

It was one of those rare calm nights in Delhi, the kind that carried a soft breeze, the scent of blooming mogra, and a strange kind of silence...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".