ISHRA SS: AGAINST ALL ODDS (Last chapter - Pg 24)

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kavya

@s_kavya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#181

Loved Loved Loved the update Aru 👏 👏
Aiyooo ishra romance
Lovely SS Aru.. hope we get another story soon from you 😳
Thanks for this superb SS Aru 🤗

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SA1234

@SA1234

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Posted: 10 years ago

#182

Sorry Aru for commenting late.

First of all let me say..excellent choice of song!

Very apt for something like this.

And you ended the story well. Lekin Puttar ne Biwi ko sleeping pills khila diya...my my! Yeh idea aaya kahan se? And this is exactly what they should be doing on the show. Biwi pehle Ruhi Ruhi jap ti thi...aaj kal Adi jaap shuru hogaya hai..so yeah..filmy hai par achha idea hai..😉

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Pankhuri

@DivanIsh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#183

unres on page 19

Edited by -Pankhuri- - 10 years ago

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Pankhuri

@DivanIsh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#184

one more res 😆😆😆

yeahhh another unres...now don't blame me for always being late lateef...i am faster than akshu atleast

this last update is my favorite part from this story...not because of one particular reason which is the consummation ofcourse but because it has everything

when it comes to planning surprises Raman Kumar Bhalla is surely the best...who would go to an extent of giving sleeping pills...this is your creation so hats off to you 👏

the family scene was cute too and Toshi Ji's reaction happy shappy honeymoon lolll...it will eventually be happy if you all dont disturb 🤣 🤣 🤣

coffee moment was just awww😳😳😳

i just loved how you chose nagin lake instead of dal lake...only you can do that

the conversation in the shikara was just heart touching...so simple meaningful and yet so beautiful...both of them opened up their guilt and comforted each other so beautifully

"Friendship is the first and last step of love. I finally found a relationship in between those steps with you.

this particular line stole my heart seriously ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

their confession was just sooo...what do i say i dont have the right word to say

ahem kiss shikara mein 😳😳😳

ek aur kaam karna baaki hai humare liye 😳😳😳

and finally the ultimate step...it was "perfectly perfect"

i know that word makes no sense but i just mean to say it was just rightly done...so subtle and yet passionate...👏

Their sum of small mischievous and naughty acts began to unite them, their pure calculus of love ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

di this one was just beyond perfect...i just loved it

thank you so much for this wonderful story

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Aru.Divan

@Aru.Divan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: avni_19
RES

Editeddd...

OMGGG Arruuu... Awesummm yaaraaa!!!!☺️
That Letter by the Great RKB..Hailaaa!!! *facepalm*! Kya guts yaar to write a letter stating he is kidnapping his own wife from all! 😆😆😆

Phir...in Srinagar, Hailaaa..Evenn Awesomee. I loved how u described each and every thing. Right from the view of their room, wakeup, ishra hug plus kissy☺️ and their talk... Tooo Gooddd!!!

I loved ittt soo muchh and Trust me, u will not believe... that song which u chose for them, I was listening to that song yesterday in MTV and I was imagining IshRa instead of Aamir and Kajol! Hayeee!☺️

Writeee moreee Jaannnuu😳😃

Thank you soo much Suni 😳. Puttar has guts and exhibits when he wants to you see 😆.

Awww thank you so much .. *Hides face* 😳.. Glad you did and yes will try to write provided the show let's me too 😃.

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Aru.Divan

@Aru.Divan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: swathin
Superb.update

Thank you 😳

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Aru.Divan

@Aru.Divan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: beckysharp
Hi Aru,

sorry for the late comment... I had to re-read all the chapters to remember the story ...

Loved it. Thank god, dubbu died ... :) I wish they had killed that character in YHM too, at least we would not have been subjected to unnecessary torture !

Loved puttar kidnapping biwi and the after math .. hope one day, puttar kidnaps biwi in YHM too and takes her away from all haddis !

😆

Ashuuu .. Thank you for reading 😃. More than Dubbu, I want jagat behenji to die like right now. Her social services irk me big time 🤬.

haiyeee .. Puttar biwi kidnap in the show is the best thing that can happen ❤️.

Thanks a lot Sunshine 🤗

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Aru.Divan

@Aru.Divan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: -godschild-
Finally read through all the chapters.
what a beautiful story. 😛
Enjoyed it thoroughly.
Best bit was him kidnapping her,thats what they need to do man 😆
N the last update was well just too hawwttt. U have written it really well. 😳

Thanks a lot 😃. Exactly just kidnap and do 😳.
Rest can wait .. !! Thanks again 😳

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Aru.Divan

@Aru.Divan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#189

Originally posted by: s_kavya
Loved Loved Loved the update Aru 👏 👏
Aiyooo ishra romance
Lovely SS Aru.. hope we get another story soon from you 😳
Thanks for this superb SS Aru 🤗

Thanks a lot Kavya 🤗. So happy you liked it 😳
Hopefully yaar and writing amidst all this mess is . Will def try 😃

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Aru.Divan

@Aru.Divan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#190

Originally posted by: SA1234
Sorry Aru for commenting late.
First of all let me say..excellent choice of song!
Very apt for something like this.
And you ended the story well. Lekin Puttar ne Biwi ko sleeping pills khila diya...my my! Yeh idea aaya kahan se? And this is exactly what they should be doing on the show. Biwi pehle Ruhi Ruhi jap ti thi...aaj kal Adi jaap shuru hogaya hai..so yeah..filmy hai par achha idea hai..😉

Thanks a lot Anju .. It was planned to be filmy yaar 😆.
Enough of all the haddis already.. Just wanted them to do it and the wait has been for too long 😃
hehehe 😆. Glad you enjoyed reading it 😳

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