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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update...nice for pm
i do not whether i read your ff before or not...but any way nicely written update... maaneet accept each other and finally become one... i really like the way u end it... hope u come up with more ff in future... good luck dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
When r u going to update dear
Waiting waiting
Plz update de dho naaa
Plz plz plz
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Whitepigeon

When r u going to update dear

Waiting waiting
Plz update de dho naaa
Plz plz plz


actually i thought to end this there ,with no epilogues ,.. but as some of u r wanting ,.. so now thinking to give epilogue need sometime ,.. will try to give soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks dear is it possible Geet to give a baby to maan I just love when Geet getting pregnant n maan to handle her with the mood swings
TC
BYE
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Posted: 10 years ago
sorry, sorry, sorry for late reply

Ang laga de re...
Mohe rang lagaa de re..

Mein to teri joganiya tu

Jog laga de re

Prem ka rog laga de re
Mein to teri joganiyaan
Tu jog laga de re

Beautiful update

Maan aur geet ki feelings ke liye koi sabd hi nahi hai...

Kabhi kabhi lagta hai ki sach mein pyaar aisa hota hai? Agar hota hai toh sab ko kyun mehsus nahi hota?

Waise toh tumne cheating ki hai!!

Maan geet ki sr jis tarha se mangi thi waisi nahi hai!!

Par tumne jo likha hai...awesome!!


Tere seene ki lou
Mere undar bhi hai
Tu hawa de isse
To mera tan jale
Jala de re sang jala dere
Mohe ang laga de re
Mein to teri joganiya tu
Jog laga de re

Tumne likha hai...


The beautiful and explicit pleasure is ,.. being loved by our loved ones in loving way,.. no words can be match to explain this...

Ekdam sahi hai...i loved it!!
Aur yeh bhi...


Shedding every hindrances they drove to the goal,.. donoki ekhi goal to get united,..united in all senses,.. physically, mentally ,..emotionally, lovingly , passionately ,. divinely , sacredly and spiritually,.. The urge to devour and ravish her is raising to hights in him.

Ab bolne ko kuch rehta hi nahi!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
ab maine comment kar di!!!!!!

tum ab update de do...jaldi jaldi...

we r waiting...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sheetalvasa

sorry, sorry, sorry for late reply

Ang laga de re...
Mohe rang lagaa de re..

Mein to teri joganiya tu

Jog laga de re

Prem ka rog laga de re
Mein to teri joganiyaan
Tu jog laga de re

Beautiful update

Maan aur geet ki feelings ke liye koi sabd hi nahi hai...

Kabhi kabhi lagta hai ki sach mein pyaar aisa hota hai? Agar hota hai toh sab ko kyun mehsus nahi hota?

Waise toh tumne cheating ki hai!!

Maan geet ki sr jis tarha se mangi thi waisi nahi hai!!

Par tumne jo likha hai...awesome!!


Tere seene ki lou
Mere undar bhi hai
Tu hawa de isse
To mera tan jale
Jala de re sang jala dere
Mohe ang laga de re
Mein to teri joganiya tu
Jog laga de re

Tumne likha hai...


The beautiful and explicit pleasure is ,.. being loved by our loved ones in loving way,.. no words can be match to explain this...

Ekdam sahi hai...i loved it!!
Aur yeh bhi...


Shedding every hindrances they drove to the goal,.. donoki ekhi goal to get united,..united in all senses,.. physically, mentally ,..emotionally, lovingly , passionately ,. divinely , sacredly and spiritually,.. The urge to devour and ravish her is raising to hights in him.

Ab bolne ko kuch rehta hi nahi!!

thanks for ur beautiful song ,.. very apt to my context,.. suitable to my veiw on love ,.. mujhe nahi pata love hogi ya nahi per agar sucha love hotho isahi honi chahiye ,.. chahe hum mehsoos karo ya na karo ,..ye devine love jo mai bolrahithi in my update,Mein to teri joganiyaan...Jog laga de re beautiful,.. ,.. humara pyaar tho ankhonse suru hotha hai ,.. kabhi kabhi dil ke jaga dimak se sochthe hai ,.. isliye shaayad hum ye pyaar mehsoos nahi karpathe ,..kyunki hum is meterialistic dunia me ji hahe hai ,.
than.k.u very much ..
Edited by anuradha.nandam - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

HI GUYS,.

Me back,.. as u all know I have ended my E.O.L without epilogue. But some of my buddies r asking for it ,..I gave a second thought to it. So here is an update. Its not epilogue ,. Its just an extension,.. and epilogue follows soon after some more updates may be 2 r 3. Thank.u for ur love and encouragement ,.. and hope u really enjoy this.

Essence Of Love Part-153

And there started their beautiful saga of love and passion.

Dev ,Annie and Arjun wanted to send them on honeymoon..But Maneet never thought about it as now they have a family. Geet wants to live with her complete family now which she always craved ,..with a loving and caring husband and a father to her children. So she wanted to enjoy a family life like taking care of Maan and others like a typical wife.

And Maan also got a family His adha adhura zindagi pura hogaya and he too don't want to leave any stone to take care of his family and in his duties and responsibilities towards his family.

Maan took Geet to the tourism company to introduce her to the staff as their M.D. after lot of pestering Geet obeyed him , still she wondering how far she can do justice to the company. More over after marriage everything has been changed to a great level. Now her top most priority is Maan. Maan and his needs and necessities, his comforts stood first to her. Her world always revolve around him only . Never give any chance to feel any low in any way. At the same time she don't want to leave the school. So she is working hard as she will not let down Maan and his expectations from her to the company. She reduced the working hours in the school and allotting time to T.C.

Maan made Dev as joint M.D. of his companies . He stopped to go out of city for meetings and conferences as he don't want to leave Geet . He sends Dev for them. He gave independent charge of his construction company of Mumbai and Maharastra branches to Arjun as Arjun wanted to live with his parents. They can shift after Anie's delivery.

Maan made Parasnt as head of finance and public relations of tourism company as Geet will need him ,.. and Arpitha as her assistant . He took Aakash in his construction company giving in charge of all accounts and finance .Ankitha will join in Geet after the delivery and babies responsibilities.

Maan transferred many of his properties among all his family members according to their interests and aspirations . He discussed with them before doing so . Geet and her family got hurt by this as they never wanted this ,..but Maan convinced them as he know the main reason behind every clash r dispute will be always money. Money can break every relation and he don't want it . He only wanted a happy and peaceful life with his family,. who knows better than him that money can play dirty games in the lives , so he wanted to curb that right from the beginning. He even didn't leave Rahul and Dishu and the two other coming new members[ Annie's and Ankitha's babies] He even gave some of his properties to the children of Vicky and Meera.

Everyday Maan drops her at school in the morning and goes to his office and picks her in lunch time .After lunch he again drop her in her office and then he to his office. In the evening all family members gather at Geet's house . Its Maan's order that every day all family should meet and take dinner together. And after dinner all disperse to their respective places. In the evening either Anine r Ankitha goes to school and picks up Rahul and Dishu nd bring them to Geet's house. Sometimes they wants to stay with them.

Dev brought his two children fr. hostel as he want to leave them under Gets brought up. Initially they[ Minnu and Chotu] not ready to accept Geet as their badi maa as they felt she is the main reason for her mother's plight. But slowly Geet's selfless, flawless and a true mother's love changed their attitude towards her. Now they will not stay a minute without her.

Pammi left alone in the Mansion . No one there to talk to her and even take care of her . Even though Annie tried to mingle her ,, but she felt that she is an outsider. And slowly she started to think about her deeds and started to repent . Her age and health pblms, she is facing now became very tough to her to live alone . She needs some one who loves her who cares for her , who fulfill her needs. She needs her family's attention. Their aloofness killing her. She wanted to mingle with the family. More over Annie's pregnancy is advancing with lot of health issues as her's is late pregnancy. She also needs someone near her every mint. And Pammi could not fulfill this by herself. Now she is ready to accept Geet as her Badi bahu. She know Geet will definitely forgive her and she will not allow her to suffer alone and only Geet can convince Maan to come back to Mansion.

One day she went to Geet's house to beg them to come back to Mansion and she is ready to accept Geet as her bahu. But Maan can forgive her for what she did to him,. but he cannot forgive her for what she done to Geet .. He rejected to go back to KM saying now he has his own famliy and has responsibility towards his family and his family needs him. And he assured her that they will take care of Annie from here itself .

And now coming to Maneet's personal life ,.. Romance is all in air with Maan demanding more and more . Geet's day starts with him in his arms and ends with him in his arms. Every day he comes with new demand and ideas. He want to do everything that what young couples do. He wants to enjoy with her like a young married couple roaming around hand in hand., which Geet always denies and their rutna ,.. manana suru,...which eventually ends in Geet's giving up and surrendering to his demands. He will not leave her a single second ,..always tries to be with her. All his inner desires which he never wanted coming out now and he wants fulfill them . He always want to be around her helping her ,..actually its romancing with her.

One of his demands now is ,.. he want to go to pub with Get and dance with her . He came fully prepared for that with a short dress for Geet .

Geet outrightly rejected to wear that and to pub it's a big no to her .She gave many reasons like does't look nice , their age, society , bacche like that ,.. to which Maan gave any head .

Maan:- Fine ,.. math jao,.. mai kisi aur ke saath jaunga" he said in annoying

Geet:- Kya ? Kya kaha apne? kisi aur ke saath jaathe ho? tho thik. hai jayiye ,.. she too turned her face other side pouting.

And this time Maan really pissed off by her. And now it become a little bit tough to Geet to manaofy him. Evening dinner time also he is very calm. all asking her with their questioning eyes

"lagtha abhi bhi janaab naraaz hai, kuch tho karna hai Geet" she thought in her .

At the night all went to their homes. Maan sat on couch in hall and doing something in his lap top still in grumpy.

After few minutes he got a message . He looked at it.

"Geet" ye message kyu derahe? muh se bolnahisakthi" He opened the message.

"Bed room me ayiyena" Geet

He closed his laptop and went to their bedroom which is a little bit dark , no light only scented candles here and there and full bed covered with redroses creating a full romantic atmosphere.

He smiled seeing that but masked it. "lagtha hai begum full mood me hai mujhe manane,.. per hai wo hai kaha? he scanned every where for her,.. soon she came fr. behind keeping her hand on his shoulder.

He looked at her and tried to go away showing that this time he is not going to bend,.. when she caught his hand and start

Baahon mein chale aao

Ho, humse sanam kyu rutna

Oh humse sanam kyu rutna

coming to his front she caressed his face lovingly

Yeh aaj ka nahin Milan

Yeh sang hai umar bhar ka

Baahon mechali aao

Ho, humse sanam kyu rutna,..

Maan is enjoying this ,.. actually this side of Geet he never thought and intend to experience this also loving to be manaofying by his misty.

And want more and more ,..so he is hiding his joy still showing his annoyance towards her to tease her some more time

He is trying to move away and Geet pulling him

"Chale Hi Jaana Hai,kisi ko leke yu"

Phir Thaami Thi Saajan Tumne Meri Kalayi Kyu ?

she questioned him with her eyes,.

stopping him fr. going by keeping her hand in his way.

Kisi Ko Apna Banake Chod De,

Aisa Koi Nahin Karta

Baahon mein chale aaa,.

Ho, humse sanam kyu rutna

Oh humse sanam kyu rutna

Geet take him to the bed and trying to made him sit but Maan trying to get up. She sat on his laps caught him by his chin

" Kabhi Kabhi Kuchh To,..

suno piya meri"

she leaned on him to kiss him on his lips but Maan turned his face,.. she fully leaned on him making him lay on bed ,.. but Maan rolled and came out. He is loving her efforts to manaofy him,.. he is melting one side want to go into her arms and other side he want more and more pampering from her.

Geet caught his hand and ,..

" E, Kam-Se-Kam Aaj To Khulake Milo Zara Humse"

Maan moved releasing his hand from her ,.. suddenly song stopped ,. he turned to see what happened and fearing little bit " kayi kuch jyaada tho nahi hua? where she disappeared now?

Then he felt her presence hugging him fr. behind,..

Hai Raat Apani,,..

Jo Tum Ho Apne,

yaha thumhe koi kami kya?

Baahon mein chale a

Ho, humse sanam kyu rutn

Oh humse sanam kyu rutna

Maan slowly turned to her ,.. to his astonishment, Geet welcoming him in a red see through night wear,. which he gave her before and she rejected to wear and throw it the corner of cub board,.. now she wear that to please him clearly telling him that she is only belongs to him. his heart missed its beat. She knows how to kill him with her antics. he looked her fr. top to bottom and she hugged him in shyness not able to with stand his gleeful looks. All his drama , noutanki gone, seeing her like that all for him. He scooped her in her arms kissing her madly . Her this act aroused him to a great level and he pounced on her as a hungry lion taking her right then and there.

"Yes she is his ring master"

Edited by anuradha.nandam - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
WOW!! wonderful update dear...loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful update and a surprising one at that...thank you for that...was missing this jodi a lot...
First of all maan's thoughtfulness for his family...making them all financially independent..which is so maan...also his wanting his whole family with them at dinner time...nice..but is geet the one cooking for the whole family all the time..poor woman...hope her daughters and annie helps her..

Geet her whole world now is maan and then the rest of the family...she does all she can to please him and not disappoint him in any way...aww
she can even go to the extent of wearing clothes for him in private of course but still..all the things she does to manofy him how sweet...and our hero doing all the nautanki to be pampered by his beautiful and sweet wife..aww..in public they are the perfect father mother grandparent uncle aunt etc, and in private total deewanis of each other

so glad pammi came and apologized to geet and realized her mistakes...but glad maan did not bend down and go there .. i seriously thought geet would convince maan to not go there but bring pammi to their house to take care of her at this age, but interesting that she did not...hmmm nice

Since you are extending this FF would like to see some events etc with maan being a father to the girls which they have missed their whole life till now...and of course more maaneet is always a bonus...thanks

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