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Sameera ka toh bura haal hone wala hai!
Maan aise na thodi ussko chodega?

Maan ki tadap pe mera dil aa gaya!😉
Tumne sahi kaha pehle kabhi aisa maan nahi dekha!
Haan, jab geet hospital mein thi tab bhi maan ki halat buri thi..
Maine apni comments mein bahut baar kaha hai par phir bhi aaj bhi kehna hai ki ...
Maan geet ka jo pyaar hai woh kabile tarif hai!
Humein woh pyaar mehsus karane mein tum kamyaab ho gayi ho👏

Maan ka bas chale toh woh geet ko sab se dur le jaaye
Jaha geet pe kisiki nazar na pade!


Mujhse yeh har ghadi mere lab kahe, teri hee ho sab guftgu
Rakh lu chhupa ke mai kahee tujhko, saya bhi tera naa mai du
Rakh lu bana ke kahee ghar mai tujhe, sath tere mai hee rahu
Julfen teri itni ghani, dekh ke inako yeh sochata hu
Saye me inake mai jiyu...




umm,.. ab ji bhari ,... jitna bhi sab ka commt padu ,.. asli satisfaction tho tabhi milegi jab thumhara dekhu ,..itna late karli ,.. per commt dekhne ke baad ,.. chalo baksh, di thume.. and thunk.u for ur clapping smily ,.. ye sab aap sab ka encouragement and cooperation ,.. mai ye pura credit thumhe dethi hu ,.. har bar ,.. har success ke peeche thum ho ,... .

and bahut apt ful song hai ,.. maine pehle update me dal di ,.. like Maan imagining jaisa ,.. kaha mujhe yaad nahi ,...most favt to me ,.. beautiful lyrics ,...thank.u,..
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MG FF-ESSENCE OF LOVE-Th-1 1 /part-152/pg.140/11/6/2015
Part-152

Geet started to caress him making him all arose. She felt how each and every cell of his body craving in desire for her ,shivering in ecstasy of desires. But he is holding back. She confused ,.why?

Maan slowly parted fr. her. She looked at him questioningly,...

Maan:- said , dipping his head in shame and guilt ,... complaining like a small boy ,.. whose pen or other things have been stolen,..

" She touched me Geet,.. that bitch dared to touch me,... I hate myself,... u,.. only have the right to touch me,.. I disgust to be touched by that s**t ,.. I am only yours,.. he looked down in guilt,.. not able to see in her eyes,...

Geet stood there amazed ,.. how pure his love ,. He knows everything about her and accepted her like that,.. but here he is feeling guilt to be touched by that s**t ,.. which happened without his concern,..she has to do some thing and have to bring him out of this guilt, and eradicate that feeling in him... she took his face in her palms and, " Maan humare pyaar insab se kayi jyada age bad gayi Maan , ab ye saare baath koi maine nahi rakthe Maan,... humare pyaar bahut pavithre hai wo saare gandhagi ko mita dethi hai,..wo bahut swatch hai maan,.. divine jisko koi kalank nahi chusakthe ,.. she made him to look in to her eyes , " mere ankhome dekyiye Maan"He looked in to her pools which r depicting immense love and affection for him ,. " Kya dikhrahe hai meri ankhome aapko "?. drowning in her eyes .. he said "Pyaar"

She again came to his fore head and kissed him there,.. he closed his eyes feeling her pure and divine touch,.." mera sparsh aap ko kaisa lagtha hai Maan'?

Maan:- " divine and pure" he said in trance. She smiled and kissed his eyes one by one slowly came to his ear caressing his cheeks with hers making him lost in her spell.;

Geet:- Mere awaaz aapko kaise lagtha hai Maan"she asked like a whisper tickling all his senses,..

Maan:- all lost and drowned in her ,spell.. Jaisaki koi ghungru ki awaaz,.. ek melody sur halki si dhun ,. jaisa humesha mujhe koi jannat ko leke jayegi ,.. mai humesha is me kho jaata hu apne apko,.. Geet smiled listening him,.. she slowly moved to his nose, .inhaling his scent like her life is in him,. nuzzling her face and nose with his,..

before she ask anything Maan"Thumhari saas me hi mera saas basthi hai jaan ,.. wahi mujhe zinda rahnedethi hai,.. aur thumhari khushboo wo tho mujhe humesha ,apne aapko bhula dethe hai...bhul jaatha hu ki mai koun hu,.. kho jaatha hu mai thum me.

She moved to his lips slightly brushing his lips and drawing layout of his lips with her tongue slightly touching making his loose last straw of control over him and he pulled her on to him laying on the bed , aur meri taste,...she even didn't complete the sentence ,.. Maan hungrily took her lips in his making her to gasp .. in to a soul searing kiss,. deepening it , touching every corner of her every inner cell of her swallowing the nectar,, he said in her mouth... "Elixir" ,.. shaayad yahi hai Amrut,.. the divine juice ,.. sudha of heavens,.."he deepend the kiss more and more till they breathless.

Geet:-"Mehsoos kijiye Maan,.apni dil se mehsoos kijiye,.. humare pyaar ko ,.. aur ye ehsaas ko ,.. jo hume humesha band kar rakhthe hai ,.. wo bandhan hume jodthe,.. hum ek hain Maan ,.. aur aap sirf meri ho ,.. sirf meri ,.. Humare Pyaar swatch hai, pavitre hai wo pura kalank ko mita dethi hai pata hai maan mai kaisa mehsoos karthi hu ,... " jab humari shaadi horahi thi tab,. mai us shahnayi ki awaaz me ye mehsoos ki ek gana,.. jis me mereliye apki pyaar gunj horahi thi ,.. aur jab aap mere gale me ye mangalsutre panhnen wakth , uski roshani me mai humari khubsoorat humsafa ki raah dekhi thi,..aur jab hum saath phere lerahe the ,.. wo pal mujhe se sirf ye batharahithi ki abse mere asthitve , pehchan sirf ,aur sirf aap hai ,.. aur ye shabd " mai " ki matlab aaj se sirf aap hai"

Mai ye mehsoo kiya,. mere saare rishte ,.. jaisaki maa, pitha, aur dost sab bandhan aur risthe ab ek hi rup me mere saamne khadehue hai,. aur wo aap hai Maan..jab mere tan ,man , jaan , pehchaan sab aapki hait ho mere liye kuch bachahi nahi Maan,.. Isa koi dunia mereliye nahi hosakthi jisme aap nahiho,..

[ friends ye lines maine ek telugu song se liya,.. I tried my best to translate it into hindi ,.. but actually wo bahut beautiful hosake tho sunlijiye ek baar,... tabhi aap ko ache se patachaltha hai ki mai kya kahna chahthi hu .. aur wo movei ka nam hai "ahwaanam,.. and the song is ,...manasa,.. na manasaa,.. matadamma ,.. egase bhavaqlatho palike ee samayam lo inta mounamaa,..."]

She continued to kiss him till down fr. his neck to everywhere like to eras the every trace of the touch of that "s**t'.

And Maan directed her where he felt disgusted by the touch and she eradicated that with her pure and sacred love.She continued till his abdomen cracking desires in him which droved him in to the world of passion. The emotions bursted in them,.. yes its their emotional bonding,.. they r like two bodies and one soul,. and now their two bodies r craving to become one,..

Yes its their unison,.. union of two souls ,.. they flowed away in the ecstasy of desires,.. They carried away by the emotion and the passion. They don't know when their clothes separated fr, their bodies,. and who did it to whom.

Currents of sweet sensations passing through their bodies that r cracking to have each other in all senses. Passion took over them and they lost all other senses,..

Maan flipped her and come on top of her . His every part is throbbing for its peak. He hungrily took her lips again in to a capturing kiss. His hands roamed all over her body feeling her each nook and corner caressing every inch. He descended to her chest kissing her taking her tout nipples in his mouth kneading the other pleasuring her by sucking and biting ,. leading her to the heavens that she did't experienced till now .. Yes,.. for the first time In her whole life she experiencing the real love . ,..the pure and divine pleasure that is given by Maan. .With his pure love he awakened every dead cell in her body and that it is now craving more and more. The thurst of giving him everything is growing in her in every sec. And the thurst to take her all by himself is reaching to its peak in him.

He pounced on her belly button,.. which always left him mouth watering and provoking him by peeking through the edge of her saree . He took it all in his mouth to a deep longing kiss to quench his long thurst,. inserting his tongue in it and rolling around it leaving geet to gasp in the peak of pleasure.

Ahh;;" she gasped loud in pleasure,. she clutched his hair tightly in that ecstasy ,.. shivering like a leaf in tremors of pleasure,.. She never know that this small part with not much significance , other than the joining cord to the baby is this much pleasurable when touched lovingly. She perplexed ,. how Maan knows that when she herself dont know,..

The beautiful and explicit pleasure is ,.. being loved by our loved ones in loving way,.. no words can be match to explain that ,.and Geet experienced it for the first time in her life,. Of course for Maan also its his first.

Shedding every hindrances they drove to the goal,.. donoki ekhi goal to get united,..united in all senses,.. physically, mentally ,..emotionally, lovingly , passionately ,. divinely , sacredly and spiritually,.. The urge to devour and ravish her is raising to hights in him. Each and very cell of her body that r dead came to alive by his touch and make themselves ready for him.They become rigid to capture him. And Maan moved on her driving her to heaven. she trying to match his pace till they reach their destination,.. their souls together touched the heaven. With a loud groan of ecstasy in pleasure Maan collapsed on her , who is still panting heavily. He is still kissing ,nuzzling his face on her chest not get enough of her .

Tears of satisfaction and contentment rolled fr. her eyes as she felt completed. Maan also felt how incomplete his life till now . She took his face to look at her . Maan saw her tears and got worried ,. before he question,..she closed his lips by hers ,.. " thank.u Maan u. completed me,.. she kissed him madly on every where making him turn on again with in short period,..The demon which is sleeping all these years now waken up and demanding him more and more blessing him by filling the void in his life with the immense pleasures he get fr. Geet.

And there start their khubsoorat humsafar with never ending passion and love. They lived in their own world ,.. a world enriched with divine and sacred love.

Its not the ending of the story,.. it's a new beginning,. a beautiful journey of two souls.

e felt how each and every cell of his body craving in desire for her ,shivering in ecstasy of desires. But he is holding back. She confused ,.why?

Maan slowly parted fr. her. She looked at him questioningly,...

Maan:- said , dipping his head in shame and guilt ,... complaining like a small boy ,.. whose pen or other things have been stolen,..

" She touched me Geet,.. that bitch dared to touch me,... I hate myself,... u,.. only have the right to touch me,.. I disgust to be touched by that s**t ,.. I am only yours,.. he looked down in guilt,.. not able to see in her eyes,...

Geet stood there amazed ,.. how pure his love ,. He knows everything about her and accepted her like that,.. but here he is feeling guilt to be touched by that s**t ,.. which happened without his concern,..she has to do some thing and have to bring him out of this guilt, and eradicate that feeling in him... she took his face in her palms and, " Maan humare pyaar insab se kayi jyada age bad gayi Maan , ab ye saare baath koi maine nahi rakthe Maan,... humare pyaar bahut pavithre hai wo saare gandhagi ko mita dethi hai,..wo bahut swatch hai maan,.. divine jisko koi kalank nahi chusakthe ,.. she made him to look in to her eyes , " mere ankhome dekyiye Maan"He looked in to her pools which r depicting immense love and affection for him ,. " Kya dikhrahe hai meri ankhome aapko "?. drowning in her eyes .. he said "Pyaar"

She again came to his fore head and kissed him there,.. he closed his eyes feeling her pure and divine touch,.." mera sparsh aap ko kaisa lagtha hai Maan'?

Maan:- " divine and pure" he said in trance. She smiled and kissed his eyes one by one slowly came to his ear caressing his cheeks with hers making him lost in her spell.;

Geet:- Mere awaaz aapko kaise lagtha hai Maan"she asked like a whisper tickling all his senses,..

Maan:- all lost and drowned in her ,spell.. Jaisaki koi ghungru ki awaaz,.. ek melody sur halki si dhun ,. jaisa humesha mujhe koi jannat ko leke jayegi ,.. mai humesha is me kho jaata hu apne apko,.. Geet smiled listening him,.. she slowly moved to his nose, .inhaling his scent like her life is in him,. nuzzling her face and nose with his,..

before she ask anything Maan"Thumhari saas me hi mera saas basthi hai jaan ,.. wahi mujhe zinda rahnedethi hai,.. aur thumhari khushboo wo tho mujhe humesha ,apne aapko bhula dethe hai...bhul jaatha hu ki mai koun hu,.. kho jaatha hu mai thum me.

She moved to his lips slightly brushing his lips and drawing layout of his lips with her tongue slightly touching making his loose last straw of control over him and he pulled her on to him laying on the bed , aur meri taste,...she even didn't complete the sentence ,.. Maan hungrily took her lips in his making her to gasp .. in to a soul searing kiss,. deepening it , touching every corner of her every inner cell of her swallowing the nectar,, he said in her mouth... "Elixir" ,.. shaayad yahi hai Amrut,.. the divine juice ,.. sudha of heavens,.."he deepend the kiss more and more till they breathless.

Geet:-"Mehsoos kijiye Maan,.apni dil se mehsoos kijiye,.. humare pyaar ko ,.. aur ye ehsaas ko ,.. jo hume humesha band kar rakhthe hai ,.. wo bandhan hume jodthe,.. hum ek hain Maan ,.. aur aap sirf meri ho ,.. sirf meri ,.. Humare Pyaar swatch hai, pavitre hai wo pura kalank ko mita dethi hai pata hai maan mai kaisa mehsoos karthi hu ,... " jab humari shaadi horahi thi tab,. mai us shahnayi ki awaaz me ye mehsoos ki ek gana,.. jis me mereliye apki pyaar gunj horahi thi ,.. aur jab aap mere gale me ye mangalsutre panhnen wakth , uski roshani me mai humari khubsoorat humsafa ki raah dekhi thi,..aur jab hum saath phere lerahe the ,.. wo pal mujhe se sirf ye batharahithi ki abse mere asthitve , pehchan sirf ,aur sirf aap hai ,.. aur ye shabd " mai " ki matlab aaj se sirf aap hai"

Mai ye mehsoo kiya,. mere saare rishte ,.. jaisaki maa, pitha, aur dost sab bandhan aur risthe ab ek hi rup me mere saamne khadehue hai,. aur wo aap hai Maan..jab mere tan ,man , jaan , pehchaan sab aapki hait ho mere liye kuch bachahi nahi Maan,.. Isa koi dunia mereliye nahi hosakthi jisme aap nahiho,..

[ friends ye lines maine ek telugu song se liya,.. I tried my best to translate it into hindi ,.. but actually wo bahut beautiful hosake tho sunlijiye ek baar,... tabhi aap ko ache se patachaltha hai ki mai kya kahna chahthi hu .. aur wo movei ka nam hai "ahwaanam,.. and the song is ,...manasa,.. na manasaa,.. matadamma ,.. egase bhavaqlatho palike ee samayam lo inta mounamaa,..."]

She continued to kiss him till down fr. his neck to everywhere like to eras the every trace of the touch of that "s**t'.

And Maan directed her where he felt disgusted by the touch and she eradicated that with her pure and sacred love.She continued till his abdomen cracking desires in him which droved him in to the world of passion. The emotions bursted in them,.. yes its their emotional bonding,.. they r like two bodies and one soul,. and now their two bodies r craving to become one,..

Yes its their unison,.. union of two souls ,.. they flowed away in the ecstasy of desires,.. They carried away by the emotion and the passion. They don't know when their clothes separated fr, their bodies,. and who did it to whom.

Currents of sweet sensations passing through their bodies that r cracking to have each other in all senses. Passion took over them and they lost all other senses,..

Maan flipped her and come on top of her . His every part is throbbing for its peak. He hungrily took her lips again in to a capturing kiss. His hands roamed all over her body feeling her each nook and corner caressing every inch. He descended to her chest kissing her taking her tout nipples in his mouth kneading the other pleasuring her by sucking and biting ,. leading her to the heavens that she did't experienced till now .. Yes,.. for the first time In her whole life she experiencing the real love . ,..the pure and divine pleasure that is given by Maan. .With his pure love he awakened every dead cell in her body and that it is now craving more and more. The thurst of giving him everything is growing in her in every sec. And the thurst to take her all by himself is reaching to its peak in him.

He pounced on her belly button,.. which always left him mouth watering and provoking him by peeking through the edge of her saree . He took it all in his mouth to a deep longing kiss to quench his long thurst,. inserting his tongue in it and rolling around it leaving geet to gasp in the peak of pleasure.

Ahh;;" she gasped loud in pleasure,. she clutched his hair tightly in that ecstasy ,.. shivering like a leaf in tremors of pleasure,.. She never know that this small part with not much significance , other than the joining cord to the baby is this much pleasurable when touched lovingly. She perplexed ,. how Maan knows that when she herself dont know,..

The beautiful and explicit pleasure is ,.. being loved by our loved ones in loving way,.. no words can be match to explain that ,.and Geet experienced it for the first time in her life,. Of course for Maan also its his first.

Shedding every hindrances they drove to the goal,.. donoki ekhi goal to get united,..united in all senses,.. physically, mentally ,..emotionally, lovingly , passionately ,. divinely , sacredly and spiritually,.. The urge to devour and ravish her is raising to hights in him. Each and very cell of her body that r dead came to alive by his touch and make themselves ready for him.They become rigid to capture him. And Maan moved on her driving her to heaven. she trying to match his pace till they reach their destination,.. their souls together touched the heaven. With a loud groan of ecstasy in pleasure Maan collapsed on her , who is still panting heavily. He is still kissing ,nuzzling his face on her chest not get enough of her .

Tears of satisfaction and contentment rolled fr. her eyes as she felt completed. Maan also felt how incomplete his life till now . She took his face to look at her . Maan saw her tears and got worried ,. before he question,..she closed his lips by hers ,.. " thank.u Maan u. completed me,.. she kissed him madly on every where making him turn on again with in short period,..The demon which is sleeping all these years now waken up and demanding him more and more blessing him by filling the void in his life with the immense pleasures he get fr. Geet.

And there start their khubsoorat humsafar with never ending passion and love. They lived in their own world ,.. a world enriched with divine and sacred love.

Its not the ending of the story,.. it's a new beginning,. a beautiful journey of two souls.

Friends ,...I tried to explain what I feel and understand about love ,.. Its merely my view and opinion on love ,.. I tried my level best to give justice to my title " ESSENCE Of LOVE" don't know how far I succeeded ,...

And very very thanks to those who encouraged me ,. cooperated with me ,. and most importantly to those who guided me ,. and gave ur valuable suggestion ,.. when I struck some where,.. friends really u did I a great job ,..spending ur precious time to read , and hit likes , ur comments and ur guidance really did a great job , and for everything u did to me thank. u once again all...

I have no plans for epilog ,.. I left it to ur imagination,.. If any body wants to give ,.. ur most welcome,..

And one more thing ,.. One of my bestest buddy is helping me to convert this in to PDF and before that I want to edit it , or mean to say improve this as I committed a lot of mistakes in previous updates, in spellings ... grammar and ofcouse in hindi ,..,.. lot 0f blunders I did ,.. so I think that first edit and then to PDF ,.. And also some of u want English subtitle ,.. so I try to add them also ,.. but I request u to read it in hindi only ,.. as I feel the essence of my story only depicted in hindi better ,.. rest as u wish ,..

If time and other factors permit I will try to re-post it in IF,.. but that is purely if u people demand,...

Thank ..u .very much ,...enjoy,.

Edited by anuradha.nandam - 10 years ago
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☺️❤️ so divine update wow just love it ❤️
bola tha na you can do it 👏

am always said true 😉

maaneet become one ☺️
Edited by fariya20 - 10 years ago
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AMAZING ENDING. MAANEET BECAME ONE SOUL. I LOVE THAT TELUGU SONG. SO U KNOW TELUGU I HAVE A REQUEST ACUTALLY I DON'T KNOW ANY ONE KNOW TELUGU HERE IN OUR FORM SO THINKING WHOM TO ASK. I WANT SOME TELUGU MOVIES TO BE RETURN IN MAANEET VERSION. IF POSSIBLE PLEASE LET ME KNOW I WILL TELL THOSE FILM NAMES.SORRY IF I BOTHER U. BUT THIS STORY IS AMAZING. I READ UR OS N ITS AWESOME N STARTED READING UR ANOTHER STORY N COMMENT WHEN I COMPLETE IT.
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Thanks for the PM dear
Lovely update their love is so pure n I love this so much continue writing
Will be waiting for the update
TC
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Love it waiting for the next update
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superb update! Fab end! well written
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Wonderful ud
its really amazing their pure love
and their emotions in every kiss
u absolutely superb
i can't believe its ending
we wants epi but u already
told us ur plan

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fabulous update dear, loved it... 👏👏👏👏
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Awesome update dear. It is the essence of love. U justified it again. U were worried as to how u will write it but let me tell u u did a splendid job. 👏 👏 . Its jus not only physical but also a notch above in their love. It was serene...

Looked into this ff lately but u wrote it wonderfully. The journey of maaneet was beautiful and made this one of my fav...

But didn't expect it would end soon. But all is well that ends well. If u repost pls send me pm . And pls try to write another ff.

Kudos to u dear 👏 ⭐️

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