MG FF-ESSENCE OF LOVE-Th-1 1/part-156/epilog /pg.156/23/9/2015 - Page 82

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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
Maan ne sab ko apni apni jimmedaari de di!
Roj sab saath mein dinner kar rahe hai!!
Dev ke bachhe bhi geet ke diwane ho gaye!
Pammi bhi ab sudhar rahi hai...
Par maan ne achha kiya pammi ke saath nahi gaya
Geet ke paas sab se jyaada kaam hai!
School, office aur MAAN!!
Maan ka kaam sab se jyaada hai😉
Life aisi hi honi chahiye...jo jis time pe mile usse apnana chahiye
Aur ussi mein khush rehna chahiye...aur maan waisa hi kar raha hai!
Maan geet ka ruthna manana ...achha laga!
Geet dhire dhire maan ke desire poore kar rahi hai!!!
I loved the song aur jis tarha se tumne usse likha hai...
Poori story mein pehli baar iss tarha se song ko diya hai
Varna har baar ab aise hi do line likh ke chod deti ho...
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Posted: 10 years ago
its surprising and mindblowing ud
thank u so much fr giving more uds
really missing maan geet as couple now
geet taking good care of him maan is now
hr most top priority maan also not less he
is very mature and thoughtful maan so he thinks
money is behind every clash in relationship
he transferred many of his properties among all his family members geet and her family's hurt by this but maan convinced them he wanted happy and peaceful life
and mostly he want to enjoy with his geet
pammi now realise families importance she ready
to accept geet but maan denied to go back KM
but we know geet how soft hearts she have she
will convince maan soon or later
their roromance pt is so so lovely
their rotna manana is awesome
and of course the way geet manofying hr husband
was superb want to see more of like this moments
and loved to see whole family in on roof as maan
have big mansion and live with full house which he
missed and geets daughters too so sweet moments
of maaneets too geet missed husband's love which
she getting from maan

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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update
Tanks for the update dear

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Posted: 10 years ago
shikari khud shikar hogaya...

awesome update...


loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 10 years ago
maan shared his property n responsibilities to all his family members
he gave his full time to geet
n he didnt stop her working as teacher too
their romance is in air
n maans new idea to go to pub
n geet denying it
maan is angry n geets manofying
or to say seducing him made maans guzza vanish in air
nice part
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fabulous update, a very beautiful mature love story.
Beautiful banner.
Please update your other ff Izhar pyar ka... also.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful Update

Maan in a way is right to share everything with family members as one never knows when money , property becomes the sole reason to destroy relationships .
Geet doing everything to make sure she lives up to Maan's expectations
while he is now wanting to explore his love life to the fullest
its time that Pammi realize her faults and atone for them

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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update
maan disturbute his property to his family members
pammi relaised her mistake went to meet geet talk to her
but maan denied
maaneet romance was super
waiting for next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update
Waiting for the update
When are you going to update
Edited by Whitepigeon - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

MG FF-ESSENCE OF LOVE-Th-1 1 /part-154/pg.147/28/7/2015

Part-154

After 4 months:

Ankitha and Annie r facing health problems due to their pregnancies,. Annie due to her late pregnency and Ankitha by her health issues ,. her first pregnancy is a mal function fetus so dr. told this time to be careful and she is suffering with high B.P as she is stressing herself with the tension and a complete bed rest .So Maneet brought her to their house to look after her. Now Geet's work doubled. She has to maintain so many things,. first Maan's responsibility and Ankitha nd Anne's nd above all her school and office ... she is too much stressing herself . sab samalna bahut muskuil horaha hai ,..

Humesha Ankitha ke pass rahna padrahahai. kabhi kabhi wo puri raat bhar soyi nail paarahihai. unki pass , aur saath koi na koi hona jaruri hogaya.In sab me Geet Maan ko time nahi de paarahi hai. Maan always very supportive to her .He is giving maximum cooperation to her. Helping her in every work and even in kitchen also he is helping her,..staying nights along with her beside Ankitha ,.. in everything ,..wat not .He even pampering Ankitha and running with Akash for her cravings.

But Geet is feeling bad for him. She know he cannot stay without her , even one second . He wants her . she herself don't want to stay away fr. him. His needs and necessities r always stood first in her priorities. But now they r getting less time to spend together except some quick kisses [chori chori]. Their private life is being effecting , even though Maan never complain, but she know .He needs her . She is trying her best to spend some time with him as she is also longing for him, craving to be with him.

That day Ankitha's check up ,.. Geet send Arpitha with her and staid back. She quickly prepared lunch for Maan with his favorites and went to his office.

she knocked his cabin door.

"Come in" Maan

She entered in to the room.

He surprised seeing her " Geet" Thum yaha,..? is wakth?.. he got up at once and reached her in a jump.

and came to her and hugged her he is also longing for her ,. he even forgot that it is his office

Geet also hugged him tightly satisfying her cravings.

"Mai aap keliye lunch leke aayi hu" she said.

He surprised " mai ghar anewaala hu"he said looking her questioningly closing his room blends.

She didn't give reply. He understand her silence and took her in to his arms ,.. He know that she knows his needs more than him,... and she came taking time leaving everything behind . His love for her increased for her efforts. He took her lips in to a longing kiss.

Khana khayiye" Geet

"Baadme " telling this he scooped her and took her to his guest room which is attached to his office .

" Arre,.. kaha leke jaarahe ho mujhe,.. " Geet screamed not knowing his intentions.

he dropped her on the bed .

" ye kya hai Maan ?"seeing that well furnished room.

"Ye mera guest room hai ,.. jab mujhe office me late hua tho mai raat ko yahi aram letha hu ghar nahi jaatha" hovering on her and taking her lips in a hungry kiss caressing her body and undressing her. Geet hugged him tight getting his intentions and giving in to their passion, longing and craving for each other.

After some time Maan sat on bed all bare still and Geet hugged him fr. back ,.. "Maan I am sorry , mai aap keliye bilkul time nahi de paarahi hu,.. ye Ankitha ki wajese,..

Maan:-turned to her and kept his finger on her lips stopping her,." Geet ye thum kya baat karrahi ho? Ankitha humari beti hai,. aur unhe ab humari jarurat hai,.. ye humari jimmedaari hai Geet,. humari furz bantha hai,. mujhe koi pblm nail hai,,. He took her lips again in his and said in her mouth, " mujhe ye sab manjoor hai agar mujhe isi surprises mili tho wo bhi double interest ke saath" he leaned on her in full intention to repeat their passion.

After some time they came out and had their lunch.

Geet:- Ab mai chalthi hu".

Maan:- chalo mai drop kardetha hu.

Geet:- nail mai scooty pe ayithi . mai chalijaathi hu. aap ghar jaldi ayiye,.

Maan:- o.k. and she went home.

Geet on one side she is happy seeing Maans's care and affection towards Ankitha, he fully accepted her children as his and even pampering her running to her cravings.

Another side fr. the deepest corner of her heart she is feeling jealous on Ankitha,..[ haa yaar,.. she is feeling jealous,. I know wat u think? Geet jealous ? that too with her own daughter? wat rubbish me writing? yahi soch rahi hona thum log?bakwaas likhrahi hu,. haina ?why not? after all she is a woman,.. who craved for this care and attention of some one in her pregnancy. There is no one at that time to share her happiness. No one there to pamper her, no one is there to run to her cravings, only god knows how she bored and managed everything all by herself alone. She suffered a lot when she is carrying Ankitha as there is no big gap between the two sisters. These moments r very precious in every woman's life. Every woman become week ,. not only physically , but mentally and emotionally and psychologically at that time She needs care and support fr. her family especially from her husband. At Dishu's time she didn't felt this ,. probably that time Maan is not there in her life. She too pampered Arpitha,.. but now she is leading a married life with Maan , she has everything now. She want to relive in that beautiful moments with his child in her womb. She want to experience all that attention , care love fr. him. She want to enjoy her mother hood again with his ansh .She want to gift him with this beautiful gift.. and isse jyaada accha gift kya de sakthi hai wo Maan ko?carrying his blood,.. jise unki saare rishthe jodthe, tan se , manse , aatma se, pyaar se,. she want to have him in all senses, in everywhere,.. and in every means.ye ek amanath hothi hai inkeliye.

The pride ,. contentment ,satisfaction on Anakitha and Annie's face probing geet to feel that ,crave that.

Geet don't know whether she felt them at that time of her pregnancy.. It happened without her concern ,. later she accepted that whole heartedly . everything is in uncertain at that time ,. how can she took this responsibility ,.. how can she brought up them,... everything ,. is a big fight ,.. fight for existence ,.. fight for life ,..

Day by day these lurking desires forming in to a shape in her heart. With maan beside her these inner desires which buried deeper in her which she didn't recognize at that time r overpowering her inhibitions. They r pestering her something that she cannot voice out and these feelings r increasing in her probing to increase love on Maan . Her love for him is reaching to a height and Maan is experiencing this every time. He is loving this but every time when they get intimate he is observing that Geet wants to tell something but stopping herself. He don't know wat is bothering her and why she is stopping herself to open up. He asked her many times but she didn't tell changing the topic,..

She fears ,.. same old fears of her,.. society ,. log ,.. her children etc,.. etc,.. r stopping her.

He thought that she is worrying for Ankitha's delivery ,. some times he feels something else is there bothering her , but he could not fathom wat is it.

Ankitha delivered a baby girl . Both safe and sound . All took great relief and very happy. All gathered around her and baby with lots of congrates and pampering both the angels . Ankitha's face is glowing with great satisfaction and contentment and happiness and pride,. nothing can be compared to the happiness that she get now. Geet is observing all this ,. she too felt happy for her . She became nani again. she took the baby in her hands and hugged her with whole heart. She felt relief as both r safe and sound. But when she saw the gurur and contentment on her face when Aakash hugged Anktha and thanking her for giving him such a beautiful gift and pampering her a lot she missed that at her deliveries she didn't expected this ,but as Maan is there for her now, she want to experience all this . She want to complete every phase of his life . She want to give every happiness to him and complete him with her flesh and bones.

Later at night Arpitha send Geet and others to home to take rest telling them that she will take care of Ankitha and baby. Geet came to room after making Dishu sleep. She stood by window thinking everything lost in her turmoil.wat to do? to whom she can share her this desire? how do they take this? first her marriage at this age and now "baby"? wat people think and say? And wat about Arpitha @ Ankitha ,.. how will they took this? will they accept our baby?

And most importantly Maan,... will he accept for this? do he want a heir for him? wat to do if he don't want? About society and people he may not mind, as he already proved that he don't give any head to them by marrying her ,. but for baby wat will his response? How will he react?

Maan came to her fr. back . He understand that again she lost some where . And now he is sure this is not the worry for Ankitha , it is something other. Now it became unbearable to him. He kept his hand in her shoulder . She turned to him lowering her eyes not able to answer his questioning eyes. She leaned on his chest dying in this ambiguity in her heart. Her eyes repeatedly becoming moist.

Maan scooped her and bring her to the couch and made her sat on his laps. Geet sat like that hiding her face in his nook of neck.

Maan hold her chin and lift her face him,." Kya bath hai Geet? isi kounsi baath se thum itna pareshaan horaheho? ab tho sab kuch thik hua ,. Ankitha and baby both r safe ,.. isi kounsi baath hai jo thum mujhe se share karna nail chathi ho?Agar thum nahi bathoge tho mujhe kaise pathachalega? kya mujhe se koi galathi hui? ya mai apni jimmedaari nibhane me kuch kami ki? did I lack any where? if so I,...

these words of Maan knocked her heart like arrows ,.. " My God" ye maine kya kiya? mai apni duvidha me na jaane Maan ko kitna takleef di?isiliye wo isa sochrahe,.. tears flowed out of her eyes hearing this fr. him

Maan:- Agar isa hua ho mai jaan buch kar,..

Geet immeadiately closedhis mouth with hers shutting him not allowing himto spell mone more word,.. expressing her hurt by his words,. chewing and sucking his lips biting them and she started to hit himonhis chest,.. spoke having him still in her,. " Aap isa kyu kahrahe? aap se kabhi koi galathi hohi nahi sakthi,.. aap kabhi koi galathi nahi ki humare saath. aap aap ki jimmedaari bahut achhe se nibhaya ,.. koi aap se badkar nahi hosaktha,.. galathi meri thi,.. jo mere under chalrahi hai wo baat maine aap ko nahl bathapaayi,.. pata nahi chala ki mai aap ko kitna takleef derahi hu,.galathi meri hai,..aap ki nahi . kabhi isa math kahna ,.. mai sunnahi sakthi hu aur bardaash nahi karsakthi hu.

Maan:- phir,.. kya waja thi kit hum baath mujhese bhi nahi karsakthi? kya hai Geet?

She trying to control herself , still muffling and with chocked voice with great difficult,. hugged him back nuzzling her face in his neck and face venting out her heart,...

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Edited by anuradha.nandam - 10 years ago

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