MB FF - On the Quest : Thread 2 ||Mega update-Pg13||

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Mahabharat Fan Fiction :
On The Quest

The journey goes on as the team continues its quest to search the five precious gems spread throughout the Earth's surface. Some mistake hinder their success, will they be able to mend them? Will the team gain success in their mission?

How will a group of diverse adults make their way through dangerous adventures?


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Special Thanks to...


The readers ... All my readers who helped me reach this thread. It is a heart warming moment for any writer to have such wonderful readers who take out time to comment and encourage me to write better.


Cortana ... My friend who has helped me evolve as a writer. She helped me realize that how important it is to balance the importance of every character of the story and it makes the plot richer and the story interesting. No wonder, she is a wonderful writer herself.


Yagyaseni ... Another wonderful friend who has help me a lot with song sequence. Her work (ArDi FF : Subh Punah Milan) which features various song sequence helped me realize how important music is to evolve emotions in a story.


All other who have been encouraging me throughout the journey of this work.

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From the Writer...

When Mahabharat FF had originally started, it had to be a short story of hardly 30 updates because I have never written a a story longer than that back then! But as I updated chapters, and received appreciation, it forced me to extend it.

And today, I am here, inaugurating the second thread of this fan fiction of mine. From time to time, its readership decreased and increased but I kept updating regardless of that because when a writer writes something he writes it because he likes to do that. Now, when we are here, I can happily say that this work will go on and you will enjoy reading it because I enjoy writing it.

This celebration is not just because we have reached second thread or because the FF has completed 50 updates or because this work of mine has received 57,000 views on the last thread but it is a celebration of the ever-lasting joy I find in writing this work of mine and the relation of us as a writer and readers.

Hope that this relation goes a long way.

Angela_Grokes

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Index

Thread 1
Prolouge
Page 3
Page 5
Page 7
Page 9
Page 10
Page 13
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Part 3 : The Altar of Sacrifice

Paarth was worried. Panchi had called him on the terrace. For all the while he was waiting for her to talk to him. Even if she would shout, hit and slap him, he was ready to accept it all with a smile. But she never did any of that. Now, she wanted to talk to him. Was it something related to their relationship? What was her decision? Will his love ever be able to take place in her life? His head rang up with a thousand questions.

NAZRE BICHHAAI HAI UNHIKE INTEZAAR MEIN
YE DIL UNHE TOHFE MEIN DIYA ISS ISHQ KI INTEHAAN MEIN

He knew that their love had caused only misery. Love which turned into a commitment to be separated every time when they met. Love which turned into distance eventhough they were close at heart.

MERE DIL KO JAANTI HAI WOH
MUJHE BHI PEHCHAANTI HAI WOH
MERE LIYE BOHOT KHAAS HAI KEHTI HAI DUUR HAI
PAR MERA DIL JAANTAA HAI K WOH MERE BOHOT PAAS HAI

Govind, who was the protector of the whole universe, even he knew about the complexity of their love. Their love which had always survived even in the toughest of circumstances. Even if they did not talk for years, their love for one another increased.

YAHAA SABKO KHABAR HAI
MERE ISHQ, MERA JUNOON AUR MERI ISS IBAADAT KI

But all his heart wanted was her acceptance. It wanted her to accept his love amid this game of fate. He wanted the past to be past and a new foundation for their love in the present.

PAR MAIN KAR RAHAA HU INTEZAAR
SHAAYAD WOH BHI KABHI NA KABHI HO JAAYE MUJHPAR MEHERBAAN
AUR MUJHSE AAKE KAHE K USSE MUJHSE HI HAI PYAAR!

While Paarth's heart cried in the memory of his beloved, Panchi was sitting in the wonderfully decorated temple of Radha-Krishna in their house. She simply smiled at the beauty of the couple. They were an example of true love for lovers. Their love was so pure that it did not need physical presence of one another to be felt. In every second, Krishna approached a bit closer to Radha's soul while Radha, she was herself Krishna's. Radha and Krishna were meant to be together even if they were away from each other.

For Panchi, Paarth was her love. She could not deny the fact no matter how hard she tried. Her heart accepted the fact easily even if she never asked it to.

MAANAA MAINE K WOH MERA ISHQ MERI MOHHABAT KA SUROOR HAI
MERE DIL MEIN BASAA HUA ISS DIL KA HUZOOR HAI
MERI ISS KABHI JALTI KABHI BUJHTI ZINDAGI KA NOOR HAI

Every time she tried to tell her heart that he was the cause of all the pain she got, it would tell her that she still loved her. Why did she ever think that she did not love him? Was it love? How can she love someone who did not did not utter a word when she needed it? But, every time the warrior smiled at her, accepted his defeat in the game of love that they were playing and tried to make her smile, he won her heart again.

KAHAA THA USNE K MAIN USKE LIYE SAB SE BADHKAR HU
SARR JHUKAYA THHA USNE
YE KEHKAR K MAIN HU USKI SACHHI MOHHABAT
DIL YE SOCHKAR BOHOT KHUSH HOTA HAI
K MAIN KISIKE LIYE USKE MUSKURAANE KI WAJAH HU

But, the play of fate had always given her endless pain along with unending love. If she got his love, she got mockery from the world. Even if she got his company, she got disrobed of her self-respect. Even if he loved her immensely, all she got was his silence when she needed his words. Why did this love exist?

PARR MERE USS HUZOOR K LIYE YE JANNAA HAI ZARURI
K SHAAYAD MAIN UNKE LIYE UTNI BHI ZARURI NAHI
PAR MERE LIYE UNSE BADHKAR
MERA SWAABHIMAAN HAI

She had to meet him at the terrace today and put an end to all answers and every question. Today, their love story would either start again or end forever. In this round of their love, even if she wins, she loses her love. And if she loses, she wins her love. In every sense thus, she loses.

Will her heart take the right decision?


TBC...😲


Credits for wonderful poem - Poorva22

Edited by Angela_Grokes - 10 years ago
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This is the update for today. I have tried to bring it the essence of the poignant love story of Arjun-Draupadi. But I have no idea whether it was good or not. Since, everyone is known that i am not really good when it comes to romance and heart-break update, please forgive if you find it bad to be bad or wrong.


Also, pleasae do leave your review on it. Good or bad, reviews are always welcomed. If you found something inappropriate then please post about it or Pm me about it.

Again, this if a pure work of fiction. Anything written or posted is a creation of the writer's mind. I have not intention of mock or disrespect anyone's beliefs, thought or ideas.

Hope you liked it.

Update coming soon.

Angela

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Yayiee, I am first!🥳
First of all, a biggg hugg, congratulations Angiee on the second thread of this FF!🤗


Wooww! Finally, an all ArDi prologue! I loved it so much, really I can't wait for more!
And on top of everything, you gave us a song update, that was beautifully penned down by you. I like the Yagya influence here because it was so poignant!
Really enjoyed reading it! Continue soon, I am waiting!😃
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Congratulations! 👏 let's celebrate good times come on 🥳(a song sequence of my own 😛) and here is the dance sequence (aren't I an amazing dancer? 😆)
so it's awesome that you are on your second thread. may you get more if possible or demanded by the story. ⭐️however as nice as the dedication was I will always maintain that your evolution as a writer was more your own hard work (which I know you put into this) and you were a great writer to start with! 😊 (don't argue on this matter my friend, it will be an epic in itself 😆 but I wanted to say it 😊)
now onto the update. hmmm. the real question has cropped up. what is the reply? what is the consequence? let's see how it all unfolds 😉
so we start with new beginnings and I wish you a thread full of likes and comments as we continur on his quest. yay.
Oh and banner is fabulous!👍🏼
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Congrats for the second thread Angela
Amazing prologue😳
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Congratulations for the second thread! Hope you'll have many more!
The update today was very poignant and breathtaking! And you must have guessed what's my favorite part, obviously, where you spoke about Raadha-Krishna's love, I'm simply floored by it!

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