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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you all. Will reply aferwards. Abhi updating in a hurry. 😳
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Chapter 52 Let the Silence Reign

Paarth waiting for Panchi to arrive. For some reason, he knew she would bring with her, his happiness and joy. She was the soul reason why he would smile even in the most difficult situations. After Madhav, Draupadi was the one who could make him believe in the beauty of life. Life is all about living it happily. You may face problems, but facing them along with someone who is always there for you is the greatest happiness one can get.


When she got his silence, would she be happy? If he expected her to be with him in every situation, good or bad, how could he stay silent when all she needed was his words. Never would she be happy with what happened. But their love was too strong to get affected by such storms of fate. He believed, she would accept him, it was not the only option which her heart would choose but was the only option their love would make her choose. They were soulmates, meant to be together.


Finally, Panchi came. And with her came a hope. They were tied in a complex relationship by destiny. A relation which could not be expressed in words. Too harsh to be called a easy. And too soft to be called love. They were one at heart but this entangling of hearts had paved way for pain and nothing else. They were united by a sacred union of marriage but it was complex. Both of them had multiple spouse. Thus, Arjun could never be Draupadi's - completely. Nor could Draupadi be Arjun's - completely. There was no sorrow in their relationship but there was not happiness either. They only contentment which was received was by heart. Their hearts were the one who actually got what they wanted - love!


"Panchi..." Paarth was completing when Panchi kept her finger on his lips.

Why did she do it? What did she want to tell him by that? A thousand questions arose in a second and tossed out of his head, too fast to be thought upon.


In answer to all those unasked questions, Panchi shook her head and smiled.


Paarth looked into her eyes and got his answer.


Silence, which had earlier destroyed their relation, was today the one which was uniting them. Their love was too pure to be expressed by voice. Eyes were enough to talk and to reciprocate the feelings of heart. As Govind said, words fail to express the true desires of heart, eyes don't.


No matter how far they were physically but they were always one at heart. They love was too strong to fade away that easily.

Dil se dil ka rishta juda

Pal do pal mein mitta nahi

Bandhan dilon ka tootta nahi

Bandhan dilon ka tootta nahi...

They were both together forever. Love, was there forever. Their hearts were one since long but their bodies were not ready to listen to their hearts. Today, in this fight of body and heart, hearts won and love reigned. His aim was to take away any sorrow which approached her. He could lose any fight to win her love.

Tere dil ka mere dil se

Rishta purana hai...

In aankhon se har aansoo

Mujhko churana hai

Mujhko churana hai

Mujhko churana hai...

Tere dil ka mere dil se

Rishta purana hai...

He held her hand and placed it on his heart. He wanted to tell her how close she was. She was in his heart and heart can never be separated.


He knew every hurdle which their love had crossed. He was aware to all the sorrow she had borne and all the pain which he had given to her. But they together, can still overcome every sorrow and leave any kind of pain behind because love for them was much greater than sorrows.

Teri bechaini ka, teri tanhayi ka

Ehsaas hai mujhko sun...

Main jo saath tere hoon

Phir tujhe hai kaisa gham

Dard baant lenge hum sun...

He had to take away any pain she had now and replace it with dreams of a wonderful future. They were together. Could any sorrow affect them now? Their relationship had crossed many .. many.. sorrows and reached a new high. From where, no matter how hard fate tried, they will always remain together, forever.

In palkon mein khushiyon ka

Sapna sajana hai

Tere dil ka mere dil se

Rishta purana hai

A tear escaped her eye. Their reunion was again forcing her to cry. But Paarth, too determined to let that happen, wiped it. He could not see a single tear now, she had cried enough. Now, he would fill her life with every possible happiness and only smiles would reign. Tears ended with the dark and nightly phase of their love now a new morning and a new start to their love would bring joy.

Kaise main bataaoon yeh,

Tera is tarah rona,

Dekha nahi jaata hai sun...

Shaam jab dhalti hai,

Subah muskurati hai,

Khushbuyein lutati hai sun...

Now no matter how hard it was to smile, they would together smile forever. His heart was the reason she smiled and her heart was the reason he could believe in love.

They were both trapped in a cage of togetherness and could not escape out of it no matter how hard they tried. They were meant to be caged.

Udaasi ke lamhon mein,

Hamein muskurana hai...

Tere dil ka mere dil se,

Rishta purana hai...

In aankhon se har aansoo,

Mujhko churana hai...

Too tired of sorrows, she rested her head on his chest as he embraced her into the custody of his arms. Today, every question was answered and every problem was solved.

Paarth wanted to ask her something, "Panchi.."

But he was stopped again by her, "Ssshhh...Let the silence reign".

Silence which had earlier destroyed their love, was today reuniting them.


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Finally. ArDi reunio. Happy?


Do reply if you liked it.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Angiee!
It has been so long, thank god these people threatened you to update.
We had been missing this FF. I hadn't been on IF since a long time but then luckily when I opened my mail, I had one for your FF and I couldn't resist myself to see what was in store for us.
This chapter, today, was definitely one of the best you've ever written. I absolutely loved it.
And especially because you know I love everything related to my ArDi, all of us do.
Beautifully written, and the way you have expressed their silent love and the significance of silence in their relationship is wonderful. The beauty of their relationship is that it had bloomed even after the constant phases of 'silence' it has been subjected to.
I really liked the song you have chosen, and the paragraphs that you have so poignantly incorporated between it.
Great chapter, and I hope to read more updates soon.
Now, bye, work's calling. Can't stay long.😊
Edited by 8520NK - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Gtr update..👏 tnx for the pm... I was a great update... Always silence prevailed in them... Sometimes their silence make us angry, and sometimes we get absorbed in the purity of their silence... And u described it in a great way...👍🏼 keep going, angela!
Btw, u can call me aanvi, aavi, anything!😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
Wow! Loved the update! It was quite romantic! Love the way you emphasized on silence!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome Chapter Angela😃
I am so happy that Parth and Panchali finally got together
When there is true love, there is no need for words❤️
Edited by Nonie12345 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ah a very romantic update with beautiful lyrics to go with it. 😊

on another note. I like your icon 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: 8520NK

Hi Angiee!

It has been so long, thank god these people threatened you to update.
We had been missing this FF. I hadn't been on IF since a long time but then luckily when I opened my mail, I had one for your FF and I couldn't resist myself to see what was in store for us.
This chapter, today, was definitely one of the best you've ever written. I absolutely loved it.
And especially because you know I love everything related to my ArDi, all of us do.
Beautifully written, and the way you have expressed their silent love and the significance of silence in their relationship is wonderful. The beauty of their relationship is that it had bloomed even after the constant phases of 'silence' it has been subjected to.
I really liked the song you have chosen, and the paragraphs that you have so poignantly incorporated between it.
Great chapter, and I hope to read more updates soon.
Now, bye, work's calling. Can't stay long.😊

Hmm... I know it has been a long time.
Thank you dear. This was surprising the chapter I took a lot of time to write. I thought the song would go well with the moment. And truly, ArDi were based and separated only because of silence.


Catch you soon then.😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: naturelover33

Gtr update..👏 tnx for the pm... I was a great update... Always silence prevailed in them... Sometimes their silence make us angry, and sometimes we get absorbed in the purity of their silence... And u described it in a great way...👍🏼 keep going, angela!

Btw, u can call me aanvi, aavi, anything!😉

Thanks Aavi. 😃 I am really happy you like the chapter.

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