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CHAPTER 8.3

They all go for a movie Jaggi goes in first & sits followed by J then Vijay, Unzs, Uday, Manaya & Adi at the end Rohan & Kanika have left. While the movie is on in one of the sence Manaya holds on Uday holds. Uday would usually just fling & push away girls but this time he welcomed her touch not that he realised the reason himself. Movie ends they come out of hall. They all go for dinner at a Chinese restaurant it happens to Manaya's favourite they order food. They have their meal. They go to lounge together. Manaya & Uday are sitting on the sofa others are dancing. Manaya asks) Uday you seem to be nice why were you so mean to me (Uday replies) Manaya I was mean you were one abusing me (Manaya says) you were hurting me & that how you treat girls (Uday says) I might be hurting you but I just came to return this (Uday returns her chain she see the chain & says) this is mine (Uday says) You dropped it (Manaya gets happy hugs him & says) Thank you & sorry for over reacting that day (Uday says) it is just a simple Archies photo pedant (Manaya smiles & says) for you not for me it's special for me (Uday says) I can see that (Manaya says) can I ask you some thing (Uday says) aren't we friends (Manaya says) Ya (Uday says) friends don't need permission (Manaya asks) J said her sister & you were engaged before she was kidnapped weren't you two very small (Uday says) Yes we were engaged & also that we were very small...cant be you didn't believe Choti & J... why does it seem like there is some thing more to that (Manaya says) I know it's personal but you are not even that bad looking that you wouldn't find a girl to marry (Uday say) Hmmm... NOT BAD LOOKING interesting Manaya...Yes Princess is My FIANC BUT BEFORE THAT SHE IS MY BEST FRIEND & SHE IS THE ONLY ONE I LOVE FROM DEPTH OF MY HEART (Manaya says) That is so sweet (Uday say) The fun thing is that either I am high already or I have lost my (Manaya laughs & says) Happens to a lot of boys when they are with BUT you don't seem one of those who will get influenced (Uday says) In this case it holds you innocence is enough to influence any one because it was any one else I would have said that Princess is RAJKUMARI OF DEVGARGH & FUTURE YUVRANI OF DEVGARGH MANAYATA KUMARI BRIJRAJ SINGH (Manaya says) You are good in hiding what's in your heart & I am happy to see you trust me enough to tell me truth you will surely find (Manaya is going towards the dance floor Uday stops her & asks) Manaya how are you related to Rohan Dada (Manaya replies) Rani Ma brought me Rohan Dada, Adi & Jaggi are my brothers (Adi hears & says) Manu RANI MA' mom is not going like this at all (Manaya looks @ him & says) how's going to tell her (Adi says) I will (Manaya says) Off stop your drama more them you mind me saying this (Adi says) You also know why (Manaya says) I am sorry Neelam Mom... now happy (Adi says) Ya a little...come lets dance (Manaya dances with Adi. Eventually Manaya, Adi, Jaggi & Vijay & Uday tell J & Unzs that Manaya is brought up Neelam & Adi & Jaggi are like her brothers)



Pre cap: Adi & Jaggi trying to cut her all connections with both Murali & the chawl. Uday & Manaya come close

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Hey, how you? 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey, sorry for the late reply
Chapter 8.2
was beautifully written
loved every bit, be it the movies of the fact that they went to the chinese restaurant or the part were Manaya and Uday were sitting and talking
Love how Uday told Manaya that Manyata is his fiance but before that she is his best friend and that he loves her
Thanks for the pm 😊

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Originally posted by: humairaa1

Hey, sorry for the late reply

Chapter 8.2
was beautifully written
loved every bit, be it the movies of the fact that they went to the chinese restaurant or the part were Manaya and Uday were sitting and talking
Love how Uday told Manaya that Manyata is his fiance but before that she is his best friend and that he loves her
Thanks for the pm 😊


Thanks for feedback...alway welcome


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: JADEKKD



Thanks for feedback...alway welcome




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CHAPTER 9

Uday a few days latter go Unzs college to pick her. Unzs & J are shocked. He see Manaya talking to a guy. Unzs noticing this says) He is Akash Sharma 2nd year MBA he will will be graduating in few days as you know dada we will be in 2nd year soon (J adds) He proposed Jiji a few days back Jiji said yes (Vijay adds) why are you concerned with that aren't you already engaged to my sister Manayata (Manaya see Vijay & Uday with Akash comes there & says) Hey Vijay Banna & Uday (looking @ Akash smiling says) that Unzs's brother Uday (Akash says) Hi Uday how... (Uday cuts in) Hi Akash I am YUVRAJ UDAY VEER SINGH only friends & family call me Uday you are nither (Manaya adds) This is Vijay Banna (Akash says) Hi Vijay Banna (Vijay says) Akash I would like if you call me Vijayinder Banna (Akash says) Manaya you are coming with me...you needed help (Adi comes there & says) Hey Akash (Akash says) Hey Aditya (Adi asks) Where do you live (Manaya says) Adi he actually (Adi understanding says) Here it Akash we live little away from here you might have heard of Rajgarh Estate in Mumbai you can come there & help her out you spend time her because as per Dada's she can't go anywhere without his permission & you are always welcome to come but don't expect Manu to come there (Akash says) I understand Aditya. Your elder brother must be protective about her... (Aditya cuts in) Manu...my elder brother... (Manaya says) Akash, Rohan Dada is my elder brother too (Akash says) I am sorry Manaya if you need help, do call, I will come (Jaggi comes & says) Help!!! Manu help in what & when I am there why any one else (Looking @ Akash shaking hands) Hello! I am Jagat Singh Rathore whole sole Rathore empire MBA IIM Ahmedabad so she will not need you MR so get lost (Manaya happily hugging says) Jaggi I wasn't expecting you here nice you came to pick me up (Akash leaves. Uday asks) Manaya are you dating him (Manaya replies) we are friends he is sweet (Vijay ask) I thought you were elder then J & Unzs (Jaggi says) Vijay Bhai you are right... she is (Adi adds) She did a BBA.LLB before MBA (Vijay says) that explains why you are here studying with them (They all walk toward college gates. Jaggi says) what help is he giving you which I can't (Manaya replies) just some notes (Uday looking @ Manaya asks) What are you doing tonight Adi & Jaggi (Adi says) nothing (Uday says) join us for dinner @ Devgarh mansion (Adi says) okay me & Jaggi will join (Unzs says) Manaya you also come along (Manaya says) Okay I (Jaggi cuts in) Manaya has plans (Manaya says) PLANS ME (Adi cuts in) Check your mobile (Manaya checks her mobile) Adi (pulling him says) let's go fast (Adi & Jaggi say together) Manu chill HE HERE HE WILL STAY DON'T WORRY (Manaya says) I have to talk to SHER now hurry (Adi says) your notes (Manaya says) LET'S GO NOW (They walk out somebody comes from behind Manaya hugging her cover her eyes. She removes his & hugging him tightly says) SHERA it's just been so long, (asks) how is Choti & Ree & Khush & Pano, why didn't come with Dada, Bhabhi, Adi & Jaggi (playfully hits him) you my gift (Naushera says) for now only me rest at home, I am sorry for not being here before you know Manu, Choti needed me she is fine now, Ree...I hardly had time for her you see I had some one better take care of now let's go home & chill (those two sit in the car. Manaya & Nuashera say together) Adi Jaggi are you both coming...

TO BE CONTINUED...

Pre cap:Uday & Manaya come close

Next chapter will be posted the soon

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Edited by JADEKKD - 10 years ago

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