Kriyansh:-U can never escape from my love(Part 4:-Page 5)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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So the story is basically how Rey protect Kriya from the insecurities she is surrounded when Doctor exclaimed that she would never be able to dancne but theres a twist in the story that Tani would be the devil over here as she still luvs Rey cause fshe broke her engagement.She want Rey back in her life but Rey is determined that he will not let anyone hurt her Kriya.
So tell me guyz should I proceed further with the story.
~~~~~~~Index~~~~~~~~
Part 1:-Page 1
Part 2:-Page 2
Part 3:-Page 3
Part 4:-Page 5
Part 5:-Coming soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey.. Interesting Concept... I would love to Read further... Do PM me when continue...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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WAITING FOR THE UPDATE,
DO PM ME
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome... totally loved the concept...

Continue soon...

Would love to read more...

N do pm me 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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intresting concept
will love to read further
do pm me when u update
and u should continue :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing cs
Something different
update soon do pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 1:-
Kriya:-Rey dekho na doc krh rahe gain that I'll not be able to dance forever.
Rey:-Kriya yahi sacch hai.
Kriya:-No No Rey universe ji mere saath aisa nahi kar sakte ahhh...
(Kriyaansh cried along with each other bitterly; Rey tried his level best to stop Kriya's sobbing but it was increasing so to calm her down he kissed on her forehead''''')
Kriya:-Rey pehle universe ji me mom ko mujhse China then n now dance abb kahin woh tumhe mujhse naa chhin le.
Kriya:-Aisa much nahi hoga main tumhare saath hoon.
Kriya:-Meri kasam.
Rey:-Tumhari kasam.
(Then a nurse came inside holding a bole of soup in her hand;Kriya made faces looking at that)
Nurse:-Yeh patient ke liye hai.
Kriya:-Mujhe nahi pena its very bad
Rey:-Aap mujhe dijiye main isseh pila dunga.
Nurse:-Lijiye.
Kriya:-Rey please main nahi piyungi bahot karwi hoti hai.
Rey:-Kriya please have for me atleast I promise after I'll give ur favourite chocolete .
Kriya:-OK fine
Rey:-That's like my baatcutter.
(Rey feeded her the soup very carefully so that she couldn't drop even a drop of soup)
Kria:-Rey abb aur nahi.
Rey:-Kria bass last sip bacha hai
Kria:-Pakka na
Rey:-Has baba; bass dekho finished.
Kriya:-Now meri favorite chocolates.
Rey:-Here it is.
Kria:-Thank u Rey ;I love u.
(Kriya kissed Rey on his lips n Rey became emotional,he reciprocated back''''')
Rey:-I love u too n ek baat hanesha yaad rakhna chaahe jo ho jaae m always there for u.
Kriya:-I know that aur pata ha aapko Rey mom aaj jahan bhi hogi naa she would be very happy to see her would be shirtless sun-in-law with me.
Rey:-Dekh rahe ho aap auntie abhi seh aapki beti mujhe torture karna suru kar diya hai.
Kriya:-Shut up.

Pleas do give ur comments n likes soon I'll update the next part.

P

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Emotional one...
luv d kr moment...
awh rey feeding kriya that was a sweet scene...
Gud 1 nice update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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emotional update
awsm start loved it
do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting prologue
n 1st chappy i soo cute
rey feeding kriya
loved it

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