Kriyansh:-U can never escape from my love(Part 4:-Page 5)

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radhika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Nycc start

1st chappy ws emotional n sweet

Will b waiting for nxt update

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Shivi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Nice start.. 1st part was emotional and cute... Rey feeding kriya...

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Diksha Singh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Part 2:-

D3:-Guys hum bhi hain koi hume bhi toh notice karo.

Kriya:-Aree aap sab;aao na baitho .

Rey:-Tum sab Kria ke saath raho till then main much khane ke liye lata hoon hum msab ke liye.

Kria:-Rey aap sabb kal seh hi bhukhe ho.

Rey:-Kria woh...

Bharat:-Toh tujhe kya lagta haa hum akkhi Mumbai ko bula ke party karte.

Swayam:-Aur humse zyaada stress mein toh Rey aa gaya tha khaana toh dur ki baat hai woh to kuch pi tak nahi raha tha.

Sharon:-Rey relly loves u madly.

Rinni:-Kria when u were going through all this woh pain uske face pe dikh raha tha .

Simmi:-Hum toh already scared thee but he was beyond scared.

Vicky:-Tumne isseh bigad diya hai Kria.

Kriya :Rey app sacch mein pagal ho kya.

Rey:-I didn't wanted to loose u.

Kriya:-Aur iske liye ansan par utar gay app sab.

D3 :-Yes!!!!!!!

Kria:-Aap sab ke sab bikul stubborn ho.

(Suddenly from no where Tani came into the room crying n hugged Rey)

Taani:-Rey aap theek toh hai na.

Rey:-Tani what u r doing aur tumhaari toh engagement ho gayi thi na.

Taani:-Haa par abb woh toot chuki hai aur abb main waapis aa chuki hoon aap ke paas aur mujhe sharon ki mom ne bataya ki aap hospital mein haa to main dauri chali aai.

Sharon:-M not gonna spare her.

Rey:-Listen Taani jo bhi ho lekin abb humaare beech aisa kuch nahi hai.

Taani:-Kyon Rey?

Swayam:-Kyonki abb Kria aa chuki haa waapis uski life mein .

Taani:-Par yeh toh...m

Rey:-Khabardar usseh haath lagaya toh.

Kriya:-Rey please aap shaant ho jaao.

Taani:-Pehle Rey seh pyaar ka natak kiya aur abb dobara unhein torture karne aa gayi.Chal toh think sehb sakti nahin aur chali unpey apna haq jamane.

Rey:-Tumhaari himmat bhi kaise hui aaisa bolne ki.

Taani:-Bhai dehiye na Kria kaise Rey ko...

(Soon she got a tight slap from Swayam n Taani was beyond shock)

Swayam:-Kaash yeh thappad main tujhe pejle de deta.

Kriya:-Swayam please stop it.

Swayam:-Kria kabhi kabhi jab chote galtiyan kartein haain toh issi tarah unhein samjhaya jaa sakta hai.

Hufff...finally compleated 2nd part ,next part will be updated soon.

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shakz_KR

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

chottu update pout
but
what a twice
like it
wauh... yeah taani got a slap... that too from swayam yupi
nice update

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khushboo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

awesome
loved gang frndship
rey is so sweet
that naniii😡
got a tight slap
that too from swayam😊

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Ramya sree

@ramya.reddy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

awsm update
really loved ittt
tanni got a slap lolll
that too from swayam double lolll
update next part soon and pm me

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darshita

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

this is fabulous concept and chapters read ... kriyaansh...

the gang is mad for go to hunger strike for that kriya is hell angry on everybody and

tell them to break it and eat it the person return and say that she is in love but this

time her brothers stop her to speak further... do continue soon

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Diksha Singh

@Sandhirrocks

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: sweetydiyafrien
this is fabulous concept and chapters read ... kriyaansh...
the gang is mad for go to hunger strike for that kriya is hell angry on everybody and
tell them to break it and eat it the person return and say that she is in love but this
time her brothers stop her to speak further... do continue soon

Ya thank u so much for likeing the concept of my story.

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Shivi

@shivi_17

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Awesome Update
loved gang's frndship
rey is so sweet & caring
that Taani...😡
Good she got a tight slap & that too from swayam 😊

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Diksha Singh

@Sandhirrocks

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Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: shivi_17
Awesome Update
loved gang's frndship
rey is so sweet & caring
that Taani...😡
Good she got a tight slap & that too from swayam 😊

M rally happy u liked it.

I'll update the next part by today itself after sometime.

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