Kriyansh:-U can never escape from my love(Part 4:-Page 5) - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Sandhirrocks


M rally happy u liked it.
I'll update the next part by today itself after sometime.


Will be waiting...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 3:-
Taani:-Bhai aapne iss Kriya ki wajah seh apni hee behen ko thappad mara.
Swayam:-Haa kyonki iss baar tu galat hai Taani
Taani:-Pyaar karna koi crime toh nahi hai bhai.
Swayam:-Pyaar aur pagalpan mein faraq hota hai Taani.
Taani:-Aap mera pyaar kabhi nahi samajh paenge abb smajh jaaenge.
Sharon:-Taani chodo Kriya ko.
Rey:-I said leave her Taani.
(Taani was so mad at killing Kriya that in this madness she pushed Sharon n Sharon got hurt on her forhead.Swayam n rest of D3 gang ran to Sharon n took her to doctor while Rey was pushing Taani from Kria's hold.)
Rey:-Taani main aakhri baar tumhe warn kar raha hun leave her
Taani:-Main innhe maar daa lungi.
Kria:-Ahh Rey m not able to breathe.
(Rey vigorously pushed Taani from Kriya's hold due to which Taani fell on ground)
Rey:-Kriya ur fine.
Kriya:-Rey paani.
Rey:-Hmm yeh lo.
(This time again Taani tried to attack Kriya but then Swayam came there n warned her not do so.Suddely his phone rang)
Swayam:-Yes doctor Awasthi aap abhi aur issi waqt meri behen ko mental hospital le jaa sakte hain.
Doctor:-Ji hum abhi aate hain.
Swayam:-Ok doctor.
Taani:-Bhai aap mujhe mental hospital kaise bhej sakte ho.
Swayam:-Cauze u need to.
Taani:-Bhai m totally fine.
Rey:-U r not cauze u r mentally ill.
Taani:-Main pagal nahi hoon samajh gaye aap sab.
Swayam:-U r Taani sirf tumhari wajah seh aaj do do logon ko chot pohchi hai.
Taani:-Bhai main toh aapki behen hoon aap mere saath aisa kaise kar sakte ho.
Swayam:-Bilkul waise hee jaise tum Kria aur Sharon ke saath kar sakti ho.
Taani:-Bhai please nahi.
Doctor:-Patient kahan hai
Swayam :-Yahan hai doctor.
Taani:-Nahi main kahin nahi jaaungi.
(With this she started running away from the doctor but somehow Swayam n Rey managed to catch her n handed her to the doc.The doc with his team went away.Swayam started crying n then hugged Rey tightly)
Swayam:-Rey m sorry sabb meri wajah seh hua.
Rey:-Swayam tu khud ko kyu blame kar raha hai that was not ur fault at all.
Swayam:-Meri wajah aaj Kriya aur Sharon ko chit pohchi Rey
Kriya:-Swayam now m totally fine please stop blaming for the thing which u have not even donr.
Rey:-Kriya is right Swayam n tu Sharon ke pass ja she must be searching for u.
Swayam:-But...
Kriya:-Come on Swayam go to her don't stop urself just because of ur guilt.
Rey:-Now go.
Nil:-Swayam jaldi chal Sharon tujhe bula rahi hai.
Rey:-Dekha I told u.
Swayam:-Hmm main usseh dekh kar aata hoo u guyz carry on.
Rey:-Ok abb jaa bhi.
(Swayam went to Sharon but he avoided eye contact from her.Sharon turned his face to hers)
Sharon:-Why r u not looking at me Swayam
Swayam:-I hate myself.
Sharon:-Shut up Swayam galti Taani ki thi not urs.
Swayam:-She hurted u infront of me still I could not do anything.
Sharon :-Shhh...m fine.
(In the other room Kria was just hugging Rey as both were on the same bed)
Rey:-I hope jaldi sab kuch normal ho jaae.
Kriya:-Siwaay mere iss condition ke.
Rey:-Kria I have still hopes ki ur condition will improve.Hum jald hee U.S.A. jaaenge for ur further treatment.
Kriya:-Rey aap aisa nahi kar sakte ho kitne saare fest abhi baaki hain.
Rey:-That is not more important than u.
Kriya:-Aree but Rey...
Rey:-No means no Kriya.
Kriya:-Aap itne stubborn kyon ho.
Rey:-Because ur stubborn thats why tumhare tarike se hee tumhe samhjha raha tha.
Kriya:-Matlab aap meri baat nahi maanoge.
Rey:-No my baatkutter.

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Edited by Sandhirrocks - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
update was awsm
god ye tanni kria ko marne ko try ki evn sharon ko bhi dhaak deee
and swayam pe chilaade
thankgod rey correct time pe usko dhaka dee
and kria back to normall
acha kiya swayam ne that tanni ko mental hospital pe join karkee
and swayam is so gulilty becharaa
and rey kria going to new york woww
continue soon
and pm me :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: ramya.reddy

update was awsm

god ye tanni kria ko marne ko try ki evn sharon ko bhi dhaak deee
and swayam pe chilaade
thankgod rey correct time pe usko dhaka dee
and kria back to normall
acha kiya swayam ne that tanni ko mental hospital pe join karkee
and swayam is so gulilty becharaa
and rey kria going to new york woww
continue soon
and pm me :)


Really overwhelmed by the response of urs.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Superb Update...
Omg Taani tried to kill kriya and sharon too got injured... she is such a pshyco...
but finally rey saved kriya...
swayam ne acha kiya taani ko mental hospital bhej ke...
Kriyansh Convo was cute...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
1st chapter
Nyc
Emmotionl one bt cute
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Pahala update emotional
Dusara update full on action wala
Filmo wali story ho gai hai
Haahahahahahahahahhahaha
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Update next part fast
Waitng for it
Pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
hi,
read all the parts in a go, its interesting track.. and wonderfully described
waiting for the next update please update soon!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
oh no this girl has complete lost it... here swayan tried to explain her the whole situation
and she is try to kill kriya and to save swayan sharon got herself in between and got hurt...
and send to her were she will get proper treat... and here somewhat reyaansh and kriya said
to go and spent time with sharon to swayan and she will not feel bad... and agreed and
here reyaansh is in zidd mode to take kriya for the treatment and not listen to what she is
explain it... do continue soon

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