Kriyansh:-U can never escape from my love(Part 4:-Page 5) - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
nice
just read all 3 part
sounds interesting
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 4:-
Doc:-So howz going Miss Ghai.
Kria:-M very well doc afterall my Rey is with me.
Doc:-Oh I see.
Rey:-Doc chuck that n tell me when can I take her home.
Doc:-Today itself Mr.Singhania n don't worry about the discharge papers that has been taken care by ur dad.
Rey:-He's alwaya saviour,thanx dad.
RD:-Sirf thanx seh kaam nahi chalega Rey I need my would be daughter-in-law at home today.
Rey:-Dad?U here,aapki toh aaj meeting thee naa.
RD:-Thii but maine jaise hee Kriya bete ke accident ke baare mein suna maine apni saari meetings cancel kar dee afterall my kids are important to me more than those freeking board meetings.
Kriya:-Thank u so much uncle.
RD:-Excuse me m not ur uncle call me dad or else I'll give u a siviour punishment.
Kriya:-Ok sorry dad.
RD:-Now that's like my good girl.
Rey u take her to the car meanwhile I'll go n sign the discharge papers.
Rey:-Fine dad.
(Rey's dad went away to sign the papers on the other hand Rey packed all the stuffs which he had baught for Kriya n then he took the wheel chair n placed Kriya on that.Then he took her to car,in jiffy he scooped her n then placed her inside the car.In a while the driver along with Rey's dad came there)
RD:-So ready for great suprise Kriya bete.
Kriya:-Suprise.
RD:-Yes a big suprise is waiting for u at ur home sweet home.Rey get in now .
Rey:-Dad what suprise were u talking about.
RD:-Don't get super excited cauze its for my daughter not u.
Rey:-Hww...that's not fair dad.
Kriya:-Haa..haaa...just look at u,ur looking so funny.
Rey:-Miss baatcutter what's so funny in that.
Kriya:-Ur looking like five tear toddler,haaa. haa.
(Rey instantly smiled at Kriya while she was laughing.Now the eye-lock session of Kriyansh started due to which RD started coughing)
RD:-I guess we r in the car kids.
Rey:-What dad ek minute ka bhi romance nahi karne dete ho.
Kriya:-Rey stop it.
Rey:-What?Looks kya de rahi ho romance apni girlfriend ke saath nahi karunga toh aur kis ke saath karunga.
RD:-Romance karne se kisne mana kiya hai per apni aas pass bhi toh dekh liya karo whose there or not .
Kriya:-Koi baat nahi dad agli baar main aisa nahi hone dungi.
(Soon Kriansh n Rey's Dad reached their destination.Rey first took out the wheel chair from the dikkey n then placed Kriya back on the wheelchair.Then finally all of reached at the entrance,Rey rung the bell)
Rey:-Aree light ko kya hogaya.
Kriya:-Rey yeh sab...
Crowd:-Suprise!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Kriya:-Guyz tum sab.
Rey:-O toh yeh tha aapka big suprise dad.
RD:-Yes...
Kriya:-Sharon tumhe toh chot lagi thi naa.
Sharon:-Toh kya hogaya Kriya,suprise apno ko hee karte hain naa.
Swayam:-Aur waise bhi yeh saari planning humne aur uncle ne pehle hee kar rakkhi thi.
Rey:-Aur mujhe bhi nahi bataya.
Swayam:-Tujhe batate naa toh tu do minute ke ander usseh subb kuch bata deta.
Nil:-Aur phir saari planning jaati tel laane.
Vishaakha:-Common dude abb kya darwaaze peh hee rehna hai yaa andar bhi chale.
RD:-U guyz carry on I'll come later.
Kriya:-Ok dad.
Rey:-Kriya u be with them main tumhare liye paani le kar aata hoon.
Kriya:-Yes baba m here only u go.
Sharon:-Aww...so caring boyfriend,haa naa Kriya.
Kriya:-Sharon aap bhi naa.
Swayam:-Sharon lagta hai market ki saare tamaater kisi ne chura liye tabhi toh some one is blushing so hard.
Sharon:-Yaa scene toh kuch aisa hee lagg raha hai.
Rey:-Battcutter lo paani pee loo.
Kriya:-Thanx Rey.
Rey:-Ur always welcome.
D3 gang:-Awwi...cho cuteee!!!!!!!!
Rey:-Hey u monkeys stop teasing my love.
Kriya:-I love u Rey.
Rey:-I love u too love.
Swayam:-Pyaar hume kiss morr peh le aaya,yeh dil kare hayy,hayy koi to bataae kya hoga .
Rey:-Tu chup kar warna agli barr main tujhe itna tease karunga naa ki tu abhi ke abhi washroom mein muh cheepane ke liye bhag jaega.
Sharon:-Rey stop,my Swayam iss so innocent.Woh toh bass gana ga raha tha tujhe kyu mirchi lagg rahi hai.
Rey:-Yeh tere saath reh ke bikul tere jitna bigarr chuka hai.
Kriya:-Enough for today guyz.
Rey:-Sunna tumm sab ne.


Guys please don't throw tamatars on me for being this late.Sorry for beings late peeps.So here's the update for which u guyz have been waiting for.
Edited by Sandhirrocks - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
Ur story is amazing plc write more...update jaldi se. ...do pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
this part is so cute awieee
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
where's my pm???????

*pout*


awesome chapters. i love all.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: PrincessAish

where's my pm???????

*pout*


awesome chapters. i love all.

Sorry nahi kar pai...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
read all in one go
cute story
loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Hey, nice update⭐️
continue soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Cute work

Gang is so much fun

Looking foward

Pm me when u update ur works

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