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_nakshi_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#271

good good congratulations both and all d best to both...

nw before u both wanna leave i am leaving if today onlyyy

byeee

sonal u r r8 and be happy with ur decision dont change it okeiii

stay happy both 😊

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#272

Byyy all my short nd hpy journey end now...bbyy sonal pranu nd my frds...I quite d froms now...

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Pragati-naksh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#273

omg.. its really superb.. slowly slowly naksh become fall over each other.. love their caring for each other.. waiting for next part

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#274

Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh
omg.. its really superb.. slowly slowly naksh become fall over each other.. love their caring for each other.. waiting for next part

Thanku pragati for ur sweet comments. ..yaa I will update soon..

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#275

Part-13

Here akshi woke up nd thought previous night

Ak-ye natik ka hand kaisa hoga ab mai jaldi se ready ho jati hu clg jake natik Se mil lungi ...buduu apna khayal bhi nahi than heard some voice

Na-akshi Mujhe bhuddu bola tumne

Ak-Shocked kyaa tum yha than she goes Where natik stoodup ...Touch his face...pls tum yha kaise aaye aur yha kya kar rahe ho ..confused

Na-apne dil se puchiye sare jawab mil jayge

Ak-what tum ye sab aur tumhara hand kaisa hai took hand in her hand nd throw some air from her mouth

Than she saw upar but no one is there

Ak-natik ye mujhe kya ..tum kaha gaye ...ye mai mujhe kya ho gaya hai jab se mai uthi hu bas usi ke bare mai soch rahi hu ...mai ready ho jati hu ..

Than she took shower nd came in kitchen to make breakfast

Ak-jaldi se nasta bana leti hu warna late ho jaygi ...than thought natik k liye bhi lunch le jati hu use ghar ki bhut yad aati hai ...nd thought fight ...itna ladti thi mai usse aaj dekho...she made chapati nd working in blank plante ...than in imagination. ..she saw natik

Na-are are akshi tum ye kya bana rahi ho

Ak-kya tum phir aa gaye ...

Na-mai bar bar aata rahuga

Ak-mai tumse koi bat nahi karugi bar bar kaha chale jate ho tum

Na-mai to yahi tha tumne dekha hi nahi than he said lunch mere liye khali plate mai

Akshi saw that plate is khali both laughs same time..mai pagal ho gai hu ruko aata abhi nikalti hu ..

Natik gave smile she saw natik natik put on upar she stood up on table try to nikalofy flour but she only saw natik nd her face nd gave smile to natik than she sudden falls on floor nd all aata girofy on akshi hair face 😆

Ak-aaa ye pura aata sab natik tumhari wajah se hua hai mujhe bachaya bhi nahi phir nahana padega than she saw natik is not there ...mai ye sab kyu ho raha hai mere sath ..she again take bath nd came in room ..dry her hair with towel ..

Ye kya ho gya mujhe than some hand touches her hair yes yes this is natik he is doing ..he took wait hair Nd doing piche with this touch akshi just close her eyes..

Ak-natik pls ye sab

Na-shhh

Ak-par tum yha pls.

Na-natik hold her hand nd doing back nd came close so close to her his breath touch to akshi ..

Na-tum bhut beatifull ho tumhare bhige bhige hair usse bhi jayada .

Ak-pls natik koi aa jayga mujhe chodo

Na-shhh low voice tum itna bolti kyo ho ..nd came near to her just little distance on both lips ...she completely lost dont know that natik is not here ...she felt that natik is so close to her ...than both r just kissing positions but door ball rings ..she open her eyes nd took her duppata ...saw dudhwala on door .she took dud make lunch than she make veg ...nd she chalofy veg..again she felt someone touch her hand than she saw natik...

Ak-nahi tum nahi ho bar bar mai tumhe hi dekh rahi hu is bar nahi ho pakka

Na-nahi tum mujhe thoda sa touch karke dekho

She touch him nd said are tum to sach mai ho smile nd told isme masala dat du ..than she is dalofy masala than natik said aache se she saw natik nd all chilly put on veg.. .ak-chalo mai tumhe nasta deti hu

Than she took chapati nd veg in plate ...said ruko tumhe mai kilati hu tumhare hand mai pain ho raha hai na

Than feed ho him he ate nd she also ate ..she thought somthing happens in food but she complete lost in natik nd gave food to him bas tears came on her eyes ... again she ate this time her hand touch with glass nd glass gira floor par she turn under on table than came back but here is not natik she thought confused mere sath essa kyo ho raha hai mai pagal ho jaugi esse to nd ate vegetable. ...she chillyofy...aaa😆mirchi bacchao mujhe ...than she drink water ...felt some relex. ..mujhe ye kya ho gaya hai kya sach mai ...tu pagal mat ho akshra ..bas ab bhut ho gya mai clg ja rahi hu ...

More parts coming soon..

Edited by ruchigarg - 10 years ago

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#276

She made lunch packed Tiffin ...nd went clg in class room

Akshi reached in class room meet her frds naman is there but natik is not than she goes to naman wo natik kaha hai..than rituraj said pata nahi aaya nahi abhi tak motu ..ata hoga akshi listen this nd felt vry bad somuch in anger

Ak--kya samjhte ho bhut patle ho tum u r also fatty more than natik he is so perfect ..tumse bhi bhut aacha

Ritu-aacha mujhse aacha koi nahi ho sakta hai tum din bhar natik puran se bor nahi hoti agal bagal mai bhut log hai udar bhi dekho tum jaisi betaufull ko to koi bhi mil jayga ..najar guma k dekho bas saxy girl..

Ak-gave tight slap to him every body saw this bhut ho gya batmiz kahi ke pata nahi natik ne tumhe apna frd kaise bana liya tum wo insan ho jo girls ki ijat karna to chodo frdship bhi nahi rakh paye tum jaise boys se koi umid bhi nahi ki ja sakti mujhe jo bola hai wo to mai bardast krna chahti bhi hu par natik k bare mai kuch bhi ulta sidha bola na tumhara muh tod dungi..aajk bad kisi b girls k kuch bola na yad rakhana Clg se bahar kar dungi teacher ko bol k...nd went ...

Akshi cryed varsa came nd hug to her

Ak-maine thik kiya na usne mujhe aur natik dono ko bura bola nd cry

Varsa-bas chup chup tund bhut aacha kiya esse ladko ko sabak milna hi chahiye ...

Than natik came nd naman told eveything natik is so much in anger went near rituraj nd took corler nd said teri himat kaise hui akshi ko ye sab bolne ki

Ri-galt kya bola jo sachi hai wo hi to bola

Ak-ye word tere muh se nikala kaise mujhe jo bolna hai bol akshi k bare mai kuch bola to muh thod dunga tera mai ..tujhe dost banana sabsebadi falt thi meri ..

Ri-mujhe bhi koi sok nahi hai

Than akshi came saw natik is in so much anger nd run

Ak-pls natik chodo usse maro mat mai janti hu tum esse logo k muh nahi lagte

Natik hit rituraj face nd he falls on floor akshi so scared ..

Natik dont listen this again took corler akshi try to shot out this but natik so much in anger ..akshi said ruko tumkomeri kasam

Natik stops nd chodofy akshi said chalo yaha se mohit camend all frds also said ho gaya natik stop

Na-to rituraj aaj k bad mera tumhara koi rishta nahi just remember. .

Ri-mujhe bhi koi shok nahi

Natik leave nd sit alone so much in anger ...

Than akshi came

Ak-amm tum thik ho na I mean maine tumhari itne salo ki frdship tudwa di

Na-felt some relex mai usse itni bat nahi karta tha wo bas hamafi gang mai samil hogaya tha ..suru se hi bas girls yesab

Ak-to jise tum frd nahi mante uski ek bhuddu si jiska koi matlab nahi usse kyo dil se laga rahe

Na-mujhe kuch bole thik par tumhe kaise u r my best frd na

Ak-mujhe bhi because u r my best frd nd hold his hand then eyeslook both saw each other natik hold her hand

Na-abhi bhi koi problem ho mujhe bolna

Ak-haa tum hamesha rahoge na meri help keliye

Na-wada hamesha rahuga dil se dil ka bandhan hai ye

Than heard some voice break thier eyelok than akshi said

Ak-wo mai lunch lai thi tumhare liye but tumhara hand to bikkul hi koi ni mai kila deti hu..

Na-gave smile are tumko itni taklif karne ki jarurat nahi thi

Ak-shh roj laugi khana b padega nd laugh warna mirchi ki charori laugi phir khana

Na-phir tumhe kila di to tum to gussa karogi mujhe

Both laugh same time than akshi feed to natik natik ate

Na-tum bhi khao na ruko mai kilta hu

Than swly swly he tried but his hand position is vry bad capofy but akshi hold this nd ate ...

Ak-tqq mera sath hamesha dene k liye nd feed to natik

Na-smile tum esse hi help mangna mai karta rahuga ..

Both gave smile to each other

Sehna saw this?????,?,?

So gys sry for late update .. hope u all r liking this part I m waiting pls gaveyr review story thik ja rahi hai nd pls do comments all frds ...nd press like button if u all r liking this part than I will update next part..

Sry for mistakes.

. Precap-both felt shy to saw each other nd natik teach akshi uthelo. ...

Edited by ruchigarg - 10 years ago

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_nakshi_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#277

Well done sweetu very nice part...

bechari akshi and her imagination chilli scene was😆

and ha naksh angry on rj was gud and finally akshi knew original face of rj...

and khilofying each other was 😳

update next part soon...

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#278

Originally posted by: --pranu--
Well done sweetu very nice part...
bechari akshi and her imagination chilli scene was😆
and ha naksh angry on rj was gud and finally akshi knew original face of rj...
and khilofying each other was 😳
update next part soon...

Tqq princess for liking it nd gave comments. ..so u liked story