AarYa FF : Hold Your Heart. Epilogue: Page 131

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I dont know what i am doing. I am already stuck with two stories, but couldnt help to post it also as this story troubling me everyday i am not getting peace till i pen it down And if i wouldnt then there was chance that i could forget and i didnt want to miss any scene. so here it is. Posting a small Prologue.


Prologue




Aarti sat on the Jhula in her balcony. In one hand news paper, and in another hand coffee mug. a pleasant morning of february. Cold breeze was touching her face. She looked up from the newspaper, this weather is not for reading newspaper. Its for feeling and enjoying. Her wet hair playing with the air, disturbing her again and again coming infront of eyes. She moved the lock of hair and looked at the nearby park.
a park is there, just infront of her house. She saw a pregnant woman is walking with her husband. He is holding her hand carefully. Aarti could see the glow and happiness in her face. She smiled looking at them, the love in between them. She looked a little away saw a baby girl running and a man running behind her, must be her father. He caught her, tickled her, she start giggling. Aarti couldnt listen but could see the joy. Could see how much love is there in these two incidents.
she felt her eyes teary for a moment but then a bright smile come to her face, "bingo, i get today's topic. She looked at the clock and got up from the swing, "palak, wake up baby
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INDEX

CHAPTER 1: PAGE 3

CHAPTER 2: PAGE 8

CHAPTER 3: PAGE 11

CHAPTER 4: PAGE 17

CHAPTER 5: PAGE 21

CHAPTER 6 : Page 26

CHAPTER 7: Page 31

CHAPTER 8: Page 35

CHAPTER 9: PAGE 40

CHAPTER 10: PAGE 45

CHAPTER 11: PAGE 49

CHAPTER 12: PAGE 53

CHAPTER 13: Page 56























Edited by jhillyarya - 7 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I'm so sorry for unreserving so late 😭

Coming to this SS...

Wow wow wow, Jhil, you've left me speechless 👏

First of all I LOVED the title 👏

Something tells me that a MU separated AarYa. Yash now has Payal with him, and Aarti has Palak.

And Hansika (loved this name) why do I feel that it's none other than Aarti? 🤔. That's why Yash wants to hear this program as he thinks that Hansika's voice resembles Aarti's. But he doesn't know that Hansika is none other than Aarti.

Oh God, I hope that I'm right
Edited by lovely_nikki - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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congratulation for the new FF we'll wait your update the prolog look so intersting
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Jhil its always pleasure to get new stories on Aarya...

My guess says me tat Palak and Payal r twins...Did Aarya listen to their mind nd not their heart....D conflicts bwn mind and heart positions oneself in a tough spot...Beautiful concept.....

Edited by nirmalac99 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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congratz for new story.. intresting start
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Posted: 10 years ago
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very very interesting plot jhil ...👏 the way u kept us to wrack our brains was 👏... very naughty u r ...
to acheive ur peace u posted the prologue and hamara peace ko cheen liya😉...
m so eagerly waiting for the update ...

My guess is that aarthi and yash got seperated with yash having payal with him and palak with aarthi ... and as nirmala said they might have driven by the thoughts of their brain ...

i m waiting as this plot already held my heart 👏

amazing 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting start
will be waiting for the story to unfold
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice one will be waiting this story is interesting.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Folla

congratulation for the new FF we'll wait your update the prolog look so intersting



thank you folla. I'll update soon

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