AarYa FF : Hold Your Heart. Epilogue: Page 131 - Page 29

Originally posted by: caller123

A very good part Jhil. I love this story a lot.

It's really interesting now.

I really can understand how Aarthi feels. Yup I feel so angry with Yash. He didn't want to cheat Arpitha then what about the thing he did with Aarthi and her feelings?

Who is responsible for innocent Palak?

I can't wait for the next update Jhil.

This is one of your wonderful stories.

Thanks for updating..

Originally posted by: Tessaloni

A treat to read! Suspense is killing me; eagerly awaiting the next update!

Originally posted by: Shashi1984

Fabulous update. Poor Aarti she loved Yash so much. Even gave him treat as because of him she got the place to stay and the job. But Yash did very wrong with her. He really broke her trust. And what about Palak what's her fault. Even though she have a father but still she is craving for father's love. He does all as the bet, he really make Aarti fall in love with him. And then he left her. How Aarti will feel when she got to know about Sree and Paridhi's plan of her marriage with Yash.

Curious to know, update soon...

Originally posted by: Tessaloni

Let me briefly introduce myself as I am new here, although I have been a silent reader for a few months.

I am Tessaloni, I am from Namibia, an African state in the south west of the continent. I love Punar Vivah although for us the English speaking audience it was titled Married Again. It was aired on Zee World Africa from February'15 to July'15. they edited out a lot of scenes but thanks to YouTube and your discussions on this forum I was able to follow the Hindi version also - challenging but great! I even know a few Hindi phrases now; I do love languages!

I have read all of your fanfictions and I love them all. I think Hold Your Heart is you best work to date.

I can't wait for the AarYa confrontation. Yash has a lot to atone for, not only with Aartie but also with Palak. He is so shocked upon finding Aartie again that it has not sunk in that Palak is his child; when he does get around to doing the math eventually. That is a sensitive issue; aside from the girls finding out that they are sisters, Palak will wonder why her father abandoned them. I am sure you will handle it great though, excited to see how you pen it out!

It will be a shocker when they find out that the girls want them to be a family. I think Yash will be secretly glad. He was too foolish to realize he actually fell in love with her before. He is even creating a mini Aartie in Payal, imparting Aartie's views to her; his way of having a piece of Aartie with him always. It was destiny that the girls chose each other as friends from the off set; also that Aartie loved Payal as her own. That and her love for Yash are his saving grace for winning her back, piecing back the heart which he scattered and healing it.

I am eagerly awaiting your next update! THANK YOU for keeping AarYa alive for those of u who love them.

Originally posted by: cuteariya

jill plz update 😭

Originally posted by: jhillyarya

Hi Tessaloni. At first war welcome to you here.
You know how much we feel happy when get some new reader and mostly some silent reader break their silence and comment. It make us feel like we really doing something good, and same i felt here.

i am so sorry to know that they edited the scenes there. Even here Zee anmol they did something like that i felt so angry after watching real episodes also. And as well glad to know here you are getting the feel. This place is Like this only. You will come to know if you come here more.

Coming to your comment about it. Till now it is one of the best complement i get and so much thanx for it. HYH is my close to heart. It is treat to read that someone explains so beautifully about my work. And yes you are the one who catch the complete thing properly.

Yash have to go many more for what he did. Not even Aarti he cheated the unborn Palak too. Where they had no fault. But what can be more punishment than this being a father also he dont know about his own daughter.
Yes he is repenting and you said it right, he was so fool that he couldnt understand that he has fallen in love with her. He didnt do all that for the bet but he did because in his heart there already was a deep place for Aarti, and at one time he couldnt held his feelings but he couldnt accept that also on time. And now he is creating Payel like Aarti like i said in first few parts and thanx a lot for understanding this matter, which i wanted my readers to understand


Yes, it will be strange when they will come to know about the girl's wish and shocking too. Yash is still confused, and the all he need to talk with Aarti clearly to get over from the confussions. He loved her but he was so coward to accept that, now its matter to see what he will do. And the girls reaction will come latter

And thank you so much keep faith on me. I hope i'll able to keep that. Thank you once again.

Hi Jhill,

It's good to know that I was not the only one getting angry when a scene had been slashed! they removed almost all of AarYa's romantic sequences; especially the musical ones from what they chose to air. it was truly frustrating and disappointing.

You are right I have come to love this forum a lot in the short time that I have been here.

I am delighted that I was able to analyse the story how you intended it. Poor Yash will have to suffer a lot? 😕 awww I feel for him but it is necessary for him to grasp the magnitude of consequences from his foolish choices in the past. He has to win back the trust of Aarti and of Palak too; maybe even Payal will be hurt when she finds out.

I love that you finish most of your stories; there are a lot of incomplete stories here, some as far back as 2012. You on the other hand have completed a bulk of your work which shows your dedication and love for your stories.

Be With Me was pregnant with emotion! it had me crying so much especially when Ansh died😭. I love how Palak is her mother's daughter; there to support her just like she was on the show, even when she herself was mourning her brother's loss. Chupke Chupke was serene and sweet; a tale of love at first sight, a love so profound that knowing names is inconsequential. The Rapid Fire Game was naughty and passionate😳. Our Yash does have a one-track mind 😆.

Coming back to HYH I can't wait for your next update, please do it soon! I would love to see how it unfolds; indeed am very eager for it 😊

Originally posted by: Tessaloni