AarYa FF : Hold Your Heart. Epilogue: Page 131 - Page 43

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Fandu

An awesome update. Can't wait for the next update. Thank you.



Thank u Fandu,
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Tessaloni

❤️awww read this a couple of times! this was a beautiful update Jhil, making me love this story even more!

wow what a twist!!!! I always assumed that Payal is Arpita's, I thought she may not be Yash's because we know Arpita was not faithful but I never thought that she is not Arpita's either. That said, what a tragedy that little one had to face so early in life, having to lose her whole family... It does prove that Yash was meant to be her father and Aarti although she is in-denial was meant to be her mom.
Poor Aarti is so terrified of the truth coming out and losing Palak; she should give him a chance to tell her what happened so that she realizes he will never do that.
I loved the act, it was cute. Aarti jumping to conclusions and hurting the girls again, especially Payal but at least she apologized and was affectionate to her. aww Yash was moved seeing her with them..
her hidden secret is making her paranoid and hysterical; I hope that these two sort things out and find one-another again.
very eagerly awaiting the next update!!!



at first thanx a lot for my loving my story and not to mention but all your comments making me love my works more.
yeah i know it was a major twist in this story about Payel. Yes she was not anyone of Yash or Arpita but she belongs to Yash only thats why she faced all those at young age. And Yash already proved that he is a great father and the more to go to see that.
your wish will come true soon but still it will take time as you know the current situation. But the next chapter is first step towards your wish.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Hadenikel


Lovely. please update soon



i think you are new here. Welcome and thank you for commenting.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Shashi1984

Hey! It's superb. Love the way Maya Bua is clearing Aarti's doubts. Now just if Aarti listen to Yash then all the misunderstanding will get clear. Payal, Palak and Aarti moment is awesome. Payal is not Yash's daughter then what happened to Arpita. Curious about what happened between Yash and Arpita.


Yeah,if only Aarti will listen then many things can sought out but its not easy for Aarti to give Yash anothet chance. She is just afraid. Givr some time you will get answers. Thank you so much for reading.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Angel369

A very heart touching story. I love every bit of it. The way you are bringing up it, that is really wonderful. Every bond, every relation, emotion perfectly written.I love Hansika and Hridam part here that unknowingly they are helping each other. Bua ji, Paridhi, Payel, Palak everyone playing the cupid role. So eager to read next. Please continue soon. Waiting.


HEY ankita welcome to the world of writting with Aarya. i am glad that some silent readers breaking their silences.
its really special to read such comments/ i am trying to continue soon. thank you..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteariya

jhill where r u? 😭


sorry Manita, i had some reason for the delay. hope you will bear with me..😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jhillyarya



at first thanx a lot for my loving my story and not to mention but all your comments making me love my works more.
yeah i know it was a major twist in this story about Payel. Yes she was not anyone of Yash or Arpita but she belongs to Yash only thats why she faced all those at young age. And Yash already proved that he is a great father and the more to go to see that.
your wish will come true soon but still it will take time as you know the current situation. But the next chapter is first step towards your wish.

aww I can't wait for the update! yes he is an amazing father, and will be for Palak too when given a chance. I wonder how he will react when he finds out. I am so happy you love my comments, they are all heartfelt. take care dear Jhill 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sree and Sandeep are such amazing friends and bossy too, deciding to pack her up so she won't face heart ache; now I am even more intrigued about the past! loved that Yash was so cheerful, confusing Paridhi.
oh no Palak got hurt so bad she's bleeding profusely! I hope she will be okay and this trauma was a good way to bring her parents closer and now I am left absolutely eager!!!!
it was as beautiful Jhill dear and I loved it! will be reading it again!! a big hug thank you!
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