Broken Soul...A Poem

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Arpita_Mirage

@Arpita_Mirage

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Gisel
No more a broken soul...
This poem is about breaking the chains. I would have preferred a more positive title.
Nevertheless, the poem is awesome!
Good work!
Keep writing!

Thank you for your comment...😊

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Arpita_Mirage

@Arpita_Mirage

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Linsie
Fantastic... ❤️ 👏
thanks for the pm...

😊Thanx

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Arpita_Mirage

@Arpita_Mirage

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: suearmaniac
wow!!!
it is wonderful!!!!
totally love it
its so connecting but as they say never to loose hope
and hence the circumstance is to be coped

ur a gud writer
do write more and
thanks 4 the pm😉

😊 Thanx..
will try to write more...😊

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priyadarshini13

@priyadarshini13

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Wow, nice poem. i like the way it ends :)

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Arpita_Mirage

@Arpita_Mirage

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: priyadarshini13
Wow, nice poem. i like the way it ends :)

Thanq for the comment

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Arpita_Mirage

@Arpita_Mirage

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: swapno
wow!! so lovely 😳

😊 Thanq for your comment..

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Thanks for PM.

I'm sorry for ale comment actually i'm busy in writing exams,Please Forgive me...😭

It was So Beautiful Poem,I Loves it.😊

The Line were so lovely explained.😊

Please Write like this.😊

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(MISSING ASAD(KSG) and ASYA(KABHI) Very Much)

PriyaCherry

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--Sumi--

@--Sumi--

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

hi arpita
nice poem😆
write more

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Arpita_Mirage

@Arpita_Mirage

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: PriyaCherry
Thanks for PM.
I'm sorry for ale comment actually i'm busy in writing exams,Please Forgive me...😭
It was So Beautiful Poem,I Loves it.😊
The Line were so lovely explained.😊
Please Write like this.😊
___________________________________
(MISSING ASAD(KSG) and ASYA(KABHI) Very Much)
PriyaCherry

thanq..
@bold will surely do...