Broken Soul...A Poem - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: asyakabhidreamy

Wow !
It's really heart touching poem !
😭
Hope get more 😃


Thank you for comment😊
Will try to write more..
Actually I have written some more but this one is truly special as it is from my heart...❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: radadolcevida

Very well written and I can feel it because I experimented those kind of darkness in my life, and I can feel for Sanam too, and really good choice of words.

the last part make me feel like I was hearing a accelerated heartbeat, because the sentence were shorter and repetitive. The short sentence always make me feel this.

I really love your poem and you should write more and more, the words know how to face darkness 😉


😊 Thanks for your comment...
Will try to write more...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: teddy25

Light at the end of darkness...so beautiful.

You are really talented.👍🏼


Thanks for your lovely comment...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Awesome poem dear love it lot 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: surbhisha

Awesome poem dear love it lot 👏


Thanks for your comment..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
Awesome poem!

Just loved it!


- Sushma
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
No more a broken soul...
This poem is about breaking the chains. I would have preferred a more positive title.
Nevertheless, the poem is awesome!
Good work!
Keep writing!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Fantastic... ❤️ 👏
thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
wow!!!
it is wonderful!!!!
totally love it
its so connecting but as they say never to loose hope
and hence the circumstance is to be coped

ur a gud writer
do write more and
thanks 4 the pm😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: -Sushma-

Awesome poem!


Just loved it!


- Sushma


Thanx...😊

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