Broken Soul...A Poem

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Anisa

@AnnzSageflower7

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Posted: 11 years ago

Lovely words Ammus...

To experience a fragmented mind, where your memories are an unfinished puzzle must be scary.

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sahil333

@sahil333

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Posted: 11 years ago

Beautiful ! 👍🏼

Loved it ❤️

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GitaIyer

@GitaIyer

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

This is beautiful.

And so very apt to Sanam.

Past forgotten, but living the present and dreaming the future.

Yes, just so apt for Sanam this poem is.

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Arpita_Mirage

@Arpita_Mirage

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sageflower7

Lovely words Ammus...

To experience a fragmented mind, where your memories are an unfinished puzzle must be scary.

Thank you so much for your lovely comment...
Its too scary to experience such a situation...
But the courage to face the future should be commented...👏

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Arpita_Mirage

@Arpita_Mirage

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Nikita_Smith
Such a lovely poem! 👏

😊 Thanks for you appreciation...

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Arpita_Mirage

@Arpita_Mirage

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sahil333
Beautiful ! 👍🏼

Loved it ❤️

Thanks for your comment..

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Arpita_Mirage

@Arpita_Mirage

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: GitaIyer
This is beautiful.
And so very apt to Sanam.
Past forgotten, but living the present and dreaming the future.
Yes, just so apt for Sanam this poem is.

😊 Thanks for your comment it really means a lot...
I have written this few months back when this idea came to my mind..
But when Sanam lost her memory I felt the poem is apt for the situation as I was not able to watch last two episodes because of my exams just reading the wu I felt Sanam's dilemma...

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Arpita_Mirage

@Arpita_Mirage

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sylvia99
It's beautiful

Thank you for your comment😊

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Arpita_Mirage

@Arpita_Mirage

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: LaSandy
Lovely Poem👏

😊 Thank you for your comment...

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sara..

@BelleAme

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Beautiful Beautiful beautiful poem

I luuuv poems...and this one was amazing 👏

Especially the last few paras which says u no longer want to be a broken soul

Beautiful poem 😳