Broken Soul...A Poem - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
That was so beautiful one...good going
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: BelleAme

Beautiful Beautiful beautiful poem

I luuuv poems...and this one was amazing 👏

Especially the last few paras which says u no longer want to be a broken soul

Beautiful poem 😳


Babe where are you for so long.


Please update karo.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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That was a beautifully written poem,
love the descriptive use of word play ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow !
It's really heart touching poem !
😭
Hope get more 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Very well written and I can feel it because I experimented those kind of darkness in my life, and I can feel for Sanam too, and really good choice of words.
the last part make me feel like I was hearing a accelerated heartbeat, because the sentence were shorter and repetitive. The short sentence always make me feel this.

I really love your poem and you should write more and more, the words know how to face darkness 😉
Edited by radadolcevida - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Light at the end of darkness...so beautiful.
You are really talented.👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17

Thanq...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: BelleAme

Beautiful Beautiful beautiful poem

I luuuv poems...and this one was amazing 👏

Especially the last few paras which says u no longer want to be a broken soul

Beautiful poem 😳


Thanks for your comment...😊
It really means a lot...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: SanKsgian

That was so beautiful one...good going


😊 Thanq will try to write more...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: MissReadingFaye

That was a beautifully written poem,

love the descriptive use of word play ❤️


Thank you for your comment...

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