*~My Fairytale FF~*pg 4&5newparts updated - Page 4

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Posted: 18 years ago
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dont worry i am going to update it soon actually i am ver busy these days, and writing a FF on such topic is very tough, and i love tough jobs its quite challenging to sketch a plot on old times, but i promise i will update it soon maybe today INSHALLH.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow tat would be a lovely treat 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Continued.... Part(another new part on page 4)

Lucy's eyes filled up with tears, and Kathu comes near to Lucy,Lucy closes her eyes in pain,Kathy wipes her tears, and Lucy looks at her"I know Lucy my pain is nothing in fron tof yours, i know how it feels whenever you look at Prince Ravenous, but you are too brave who can bare that much pain"says Kathy in a said tone,Lucy wipes her tears,"Kathy you are like a sister to me i dont want you to suffer from the same pain i am, when your love betrays you and lefet you away in the middle of the way it feels like you are at a complete loss, please Kathy dont do this to yourself."said Lucy who start crying again,and remebers the day when she first came to the palace and looks at the Prince with alot of pain in her eyes,"Sometimes i wish tht he comes in front me and i will kill him"says Kathy angrily."Stop thinking about me Kathy, forget this love, Ryan cant be yours, from my life i have learnt to be realistic,i want to see you happy thats why i am saying this"."I would never give up on Ryan, and he will never betray me, i know that".says Kathy in a firm tone,"Dont be so selfish kathy you are risking his life too, you know he is the son of the most trust worthy servants of the King, and so as Ryan himself,think about tht one moment.I am going outside, i am suffocated here i need some time alone"Lucy leaves"No Lucy, Ryan will come to see me tonight"says Kathy.

Lucy is stnading in the gallery side of the Royal Garden gallery, she is standing alone, and crying"Why cant i stop myself from thinking about me, why dont you just leave me alone, why i have this feeling that you are watching me all the time, why why??????"says Lucy and burst into tears,"Why i still love you???"Lucy is crying alot, when she feels that someone passes behind her she turns around"Who is it???who is there???"says Lucy and move towards the door of the gallery which is open,"I close the door, how it can be opened???"Lucy is walking in the corridor, when that person runs behind her towards outside the door which open into the backside of the garden, Lucy see tht person,"Stop, who ae you????shouted Lucy and runs behind the person, who did'nt stop, and kept on running while Lucy is chasing the person,but suddenly the person disappear from her sight, Lucy looks everywhere in the garden but there is no one, she leaves, she comes back to the gallery and thinks about tht person"Who was that person???"she was repeating tht question again and again to herself.

At the Roof Top area of Kathy's Room:
Kathy is standing at he thin border of the gallery with her eyes closed, Ryan comes up"Kathy come down what are you doing????"Ryan"she shouted happily and is baout to fall when Ryan quickly holds her and is now standing takin g Kathy in her arms, Kathy folds her hand around Ryan's shoulder and they are completely lost into each others eyes.

"I know my heart can never cheat me about you"says Kathy who is looking at Ryan with love in her eyes".

"You dont give up????wont you?????says Ryan with a grin on his face.

"Never",says kathy and kisses Ryan on his cheek.

Ryan is again lost in Kathy's eyes, he puts her down now,"Kathy i told you that..."kathy puts her hand on his mouth,"Cant this moment be only your's and mine"says Kathy.

Ryan puts her hand gently on Kathy's cheek and she closes her eyes,"I love you to Kathy"says Ryan, and Kathy smiles, she hugs him and Ryan hugs her too.

"Prince seems to be a very good person, he is your best friend, you can talk to him about us, or i can talk tohim too, he loves me alot, but i am inlove with you Ryan"she puts her hand on Ryan's face.

"Kathy"says Ryan lovingly and by taking her hand into his,"We will talk to him, but when the time comes."

"I can understand Ryan, but dont take too much time Ryan that my heart stop beating".

"It will never happen, you trust me???"Ryan holds her face in to his hands.

"Yes i do and wil always trust you,but remeber one thing Ryan , i cant live without you"says kathy wit tears inher eyes.

"And so am i"says Ryan and kisses her hand and leaves,Kathy watches him go.........


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MALEKA
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i am waiting to know the mystery man 😃
i really enjoyed this part infact each and every line
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Posted: 18 years ago
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mindblowing Maleka u rock!! 👏
very beautifuly written ;lucy's scene was very touching.
mysteryman ki mystery kab reveal hogi??i luv d way u balance suspense wid romance . awesom .waitin 4 next.

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