Alt ending FF: Our RR ~ Th#4~ TH#5 LINK UP! - Page 24

Originally posted by: bhavali4RR

Oh, so sorry to hear Zara that you'd didnt get the job! When one door closes another one opens. So , there's definitly bigger and better waiting for you. Insha'Allah😃

And now to the update - which mother would want to sacrifice the happiness and a beautiful life for her one and only daughter at the cost of ruining someones for the same? Does greediness rank high up above all things beautiful? I guess that's Mohini for us. I am just waiting for that moment when all her scheming will fall flat.Mohini is a very slippery customer. But you're right she will fall on her face in the end.

The little interaction of Myrah with her parents revealed that Myrah is not completely at home at the Ranawat's because part of her heart is still searching for what's called home. I just hope that Sajjan;s words finally hit home with Myrah. Maybe that'll get her thinking and she'll realize that she's being living in a illusion all along. I would like for Myrah to realize that she was never meant for Rudra, rather than Mohini trying to champion that cause. It would seriously not sit well with me. This is exactly what I was trying to show and you are the first to pick it up. Thank you for commenting on it, because it is very important to note these little things. I don't like filler scenes remember, so everything is there for a reason.

Whatever the reasons for Rudra's unexpected visit to Aman's house, it was perfectly timed. Not ony did he have a feel for how loving Aman's family is, better yet he got cues of Paro's wants. Yep Rudra had a perfect view into wha's going on while everyone else hasn't caught up yet. You'll see in the next chapter why Rudra has actually gone to Aman's house, and not just to take a peek at Paro.😆

The entire kite flying scene was so vividly described. Ir brought back memories of my childhood of kite flying during festive seasons. The Singh's family nudging Paro to partake in the activity evoked the hidden memories in her. Saying that everyone was stunned at Paro's actions would be an understatement. Those childhood memories of her's coming crashing through opened the doors for one and all into Paro's life. Hoping that this incident will not be a set-back but a a baby-step towards regaining her memory. Paro's childhood memories weren't really gone into a lot of detail like Rudra's in the original RR, so I thought it'd be nice to see her side of things too. But your definitely right. Tiny little things can trigger the most meaningful of memories. You'll have to see how Paro reacts though to this.

Once again, nicely writtten Zara! Loved it. *hugs* Thnak you so much sis

Originally posted by: custodian75

Is she getting her memory back or not. Waiting to see. Sometimes seemingly ordinary incidents can trigger ur memory than extraordinary events.

Naksh is going to get it from Rudr one day. He keeps touching her in front of Rudr making him jealous.

Whatever happens happens for the good. We don't know it now but it will become clear in the future.

Originally posted by: pree_28

How much Myrah & Rudra's world's are apart...!
In serial they were rushing to end the story on happy note that they rushed things and never focused on why in 1st place Myrah loved Rudra?! She might be attracted towards him for various reasons..but now reading your version of story i can see their is no depth in myrah's love, its like infatuation! she don't understand his heart, mind or behaviour. and i don't think she herself knows.. what she want in life! Oh sis you are so so sooo on the right tracks of this, it's brilliant. The reason why Myrah loves Rudra was never revealed in the series, and this FF helps me show that through. It'll be one of the big twists of this story which slowly gets revealed, but you're not far from the answer sis that's for sure. 😉

Rudra impatient to see paro.. in love rudra always look like lovestruck teenage boy😳 Yep breathless himself and leaving us breathless😆😆

The scene where Aman's dadi said "bring out my kite" was so heart touching.. she knew by seeing hands of Paro that she is a good player.. experienced eyes 😉. her trust, confidence on paro that she can fly kite + she wanted paro to win..to feel the wind, fly and win😃 as that special kite always made her husband win. Yep and this kite will also play a heartwarming part in the next chapter😉

Paro's past story, her childhood was never given importance in the show like they gave to rudra's dark childhood. glad you are showing young paro's happy memories.. this time Rudra too discovering Paro's childhood with her😛. Exactly.😳

Same lines said in past and present but by different person's and for paro to relive her past moments with those lines.. *well described* *pops collar* Thanks.😎
It's good she is remembering her past but how will she feel when she will get to know she has lost her family member's one by one in process.. That is definitely something to see sis.

was this chapter small?! i always want to read more😛 I'll let you in on a little secret. I always try to put in 2/3 scene changes in each chapter, however when there's a mega scene ( usually something big happens/something which needs a lot of detail) the scenes are cut to 1/2 as it takes a lot of writing out of me.😆 I try to balance it though, but I understand when there's less scene changes why everyone feels it's short. 😳

PS- sometime things happen for a good reason.. hope you get good job soon😊 Insha'Allah sis😊

Originally posted by: -Zara-

Awesome update loved it Paro is remembering her past which is awesome cant wait to find out the answers what happened to her? and where was she all this time? n Myrah n Rudra things are going to get more complicated between them N Myrah dad keep pitching the idea of moving to the US n Rudra why is he at Aman house Aw he couldn't keep away loved how he notices all the little details cant wait for Paro to regain her memory wonder what will happen then Aw sorry but the job but wish you luck :) cant wait for the next update thanks for the pm