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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 52:
Pari is sad, shocked and hurt after seeing what she had done.. She falls for suraj trap n make nt comes to warehouse where suraj was waiting for her.. Suraj tries to hurt nt but luckily dev comes there in time n save nt n fight with suraj after few bullets were fired on bullet stuck the acid barrel and suraj got seriously burn.. After police took the situation under control.. Dev left with police for further procedures.. After coming to know about it all dadi goes to console nt w/c helps a lot... After seeing nt condition through skype call... Dev goes to nt home n spend the night taking care of her..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 53:
dev n nt are in mumbai and enjoyng their time there.. They goes to ayesha house to have dinner.. When ayesha ask that if he had proposed nt yet.. In answer of this, dev start making proposal stealing lines from famoun movies and nt is so shy with his proposal.. They reach home and gets invited for match with a group of foreigners boys and girls... Nt is jealous seeing all girls drooling over hm.. Slowly the days went by, and its time for them to leave to dehli and there thirty days deal, dev send a package to nt and ask her to dress in a bridal costume.. When she comes all dressed dev sweetly and simply propose her when nt teases him he left to outside.. Nt goes behind him and confess her love to him... Now i want to see wat happen next.. Thnkz for pm..::)
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Posted: 10 years ago
chapter 46
maan was planning to propose...but didn't know fate has other plans to make his life more interesting..😉
dhadima's concern for maan was very nice to see..
sona mam's scene is totally unexpected one..but very nicely written..
being college students both maan and geet were unaware of anything but helping sona mam in all possible way they could..very logical thinking..
and geet saying" hamare bachhe "was very cute..maan's feeling was beautifully displayed here..


Edited by kalabhas - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
chapter 47
mind blowing update..
a cute romance inside the auto ...and back in the college..
very very romantic what else i can say..?
geet in maan's shirt and maan with no shirt..what else required to set the atmosphere on fire 😉
(am i sounding despo?😆)

i like the phrase "maan thud"..even i could feel that thud along with geet..😳😳

the ambiance was best for their passion to unfold..u have written it so much of passion yet in control..
liked it so much..
"Surely when Adam and Eve were in the Garden of Eden, Adam must be wearing a black vest. "
what a thinking ..i really enjoyed this line..
exchanging of the locket and om pendant was very nice..
oh it was geet's birthday..maan had given her a best birthday gift even without knowing himself..
She tastes of chocolate and coffee. I love both.
omg !i am blushing here..😳😳
how could u write such lines?i am still wondering ..
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Posted: 10 years ago
chapter 48
is he our maan ?who was being shy even to open his mouth and say HI to geet..?
he has become very bold now..and even did "WO"(courtesy from CL)😉😃
good development maan..😆😆

and when he was about to openup his heart..there again fate played its role perfectly..in the form of Ms.Iyer..what a timing mam?😲


geet's missing maan..and rain reminding her of maan and their intimate moments ..
her pain and longing were beautifully written down in ur effective words..
i can visualize each and every scene..
so finally we got to know what happened at the farewell day and what misunderstanding they had..
very nice plot..
looking forward to read the present eagerly...

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Posted: 10 years ago
chapter 49
back to dev and NT
dev was giving tough time NT with his hotness..such a naughty fellow..really liked his pranks..
and NT selecting awesome combination of dress and Dev's reaction for that so cute..and funny😆😆

though NT was acting nonchalantly from outside..her innerself was enjoying all the attention and caring given by Dev..Dev is on the way of success... huraayyy...
now he gave new name to I-star.."galaxy"how many names he is giving to her..but i have to admit it..all the names are cute..😃
this dev is so cute and a charmer in every sense..loved him so much...
in mid of his mission seducing his sweet heart too he didn't forget his duty as a brother for geet..
so now kabir is geet's driver..i am really relived now..

NT getting mad (actually she was sad)on dev for not showing up for dinner.
but when dev came ..she was tormenting him wearing that nighty..
sometimes she seems more naive than geet especially in this matter..😆poor Dev i really pitty him..she didn't even had a clue of his state until he say it in his words..OMG..such a lovely part..
even in the state of fighting with his urges too his naughty self didn't change..how he was explaining about his fantasies to NT..i was laughing out loud..
this part full of dev..dev and dev..i loved it to the core..
There was only so much of Dev Khurana a girl could take.😆😆😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
chapter 50
maan's letter..
though i can't understand few lines..i could feel the intensity of the words well.
it was not written with decorative words but coming straight from the heart..that only we can expect from our maan..he is straight forward and truthful..
thank god ...
sameera is not a competitor ..glad to see dave and sameera as couple..
as i expected avi didn't disappoint me...😃

maan's heart came back to life after hearing the truth from adhi..
thats a great..relief..
what if one MU was sorted out..there is another one is lined up..(according to ur prologue)
can't wait to see Maaneet meeting again...
precap
so now dev also aware of Maaneet's love..interesting turn..now definitely he would be planning something naughty to tease maaneet..
i have started smiling now itself..😃😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

Chapters 54-58
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Posted: 10 years ago

🤗THANK YOU FOR ALL THE FABULOUS COMMENTS AND LIKES

I ENJOY READING ALL YOUR COMMENTS😃
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wow 5 parts thnx u so much

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