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poetic

@poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: sparkleamina
Brilliant OS.
Very emotional...loved it.

The hug at the end to make things right and Nachiket apologising...awww!

Look forward to mor NeiRa OS's from you.

Thanks a lot Amina 😊 Hoping that's your name.

I just thought this was something that happened with couples sometimes, unfortunately. Though it shouldn't happen.

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#72

This was a very nice and simple piece. :)

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poetic

@poetic

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: hope.
Beautifully written OS :)

Thanks Hope 😃

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poetic

@poetic

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: AESSOP
Wow, beautifully written

Thanks Aessop. 😛

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columbia

@columbia

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#75

What was that?????

Totally to die for!!!!

Write more please

You have some serious hot writing in you

Write more

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poetic

@poetic

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: columbia
What was that?????
Totally to die for!!!!
Write more please

You have some serious hot writing in you
Write more

He he, now I want you to contain ue your story ASAP.

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@metoyou

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#77

*runs away*

*shouts* YES, I had already read this one!

Again, I just left this one without a comment. How cruel, I tell you!

This one was damn good, again! A very nice written piece and example of how jealousy can play such an important role in a relationship and how it can make or break it. For a change, it was the other way around here; Neil being the jealous husband.

Loved the way he ended up saying sorry by hugging her and holding her close to his heart, exactly where she belongs...

Thank you 😊

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poetic

@poetic

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: metoyou
*runs away*

*shouts* YES, I had already read this one!

Again, I just left this one without a comment. How cruel, I tell you!

This one was damn good, again! A very nice written piece and example of how jealousy can play such an important role in a relationship and how it can make or break it. For a change, it was the other way around here; Neil being the jealous husband.

Loved the way he ended up saying sorry by hugging her and holding her close to his heart, exactly where she belongs...

Thank you 😊

Thanks a lot. 😆 You don't have to comment in every post.

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@metoyou

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: poetic

Thanks a lot. 😆 You don't have to comment in every post.

Yes, I have to! Because a writer needs that motivation from the readers, whether it is feedback to improve or just to say how wonderful/amazing/awesome she is as a writer.

It keeps you and other writers going. Good work should be recognized and acknowledged 👍🏼

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