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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ronitfan

Oh yes..

he felt like he was sinning.. poor shona😳😆

Yes, when all he wanted to do was to look at her. He was mesmerised.

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: poetic

Yes, when all he wanted to do was to look at her. He was mesmerised.

Wat if he is changing and she walks in fuming and then goes my dil goes mmm looking at his sexy bod

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poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RonitPallaviNR

Wat if he is changing and she walks in fuming and then goes my dil goes mmm looking at his sexy bod

works for Ragini, I guess. 😳

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roneeta

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Posted: 10 years ago

We are hopeless..

next you know, he will have to snap his fingers in front of her to bring her back to reality!

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Sam

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Posted: 10 years ago

Man we better get half the stuff we imagine!!

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RonitPallaviNR
Man we better get half the stuff we imagine!!

Sure 😆

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Sam

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ronitfan

Sure😆

Too much to ask for?

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roneeta

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Posted: 10 years ago

wayyy too much :D

Khayaali pulav hi mast hai!

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Sam

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ronitfan
wayyy too much :D
Khayaali pulav hi mast hai!

Areeu yaar!!! Kya tu bhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

Reserved :)

Will come back to this by tomorrow max, promise 😆

- Unres

I'm late. Whoops

😛 Had dinner at 12am... You can just imagine how my day was spent :P

Anywayyy

Coming to the actual OS now

So I was excited after watching the last few episodes of IKNMP. And then I come on the forum just to see you post the OS.

Obviously I had to check it out 😃

Firstly, I don't agree with the cheesy part. I think it was wonderfully penned out; with the right characterization!

I see him becoming this angry; it's perfectly suited to his character.

I think you've done an amazing job showing how perfect Ragini is for him. He seems to be very impulsive, but she makes him want to be better. The end was brilliant!

Was such a wonderful story to read!

Do keep writing! Please :D

Give us readers such amazing stories to read 😃

Will be waiting for more ;)

Ps. is it weird that I just found out your name? 😆

Hoping to read more from you soon!

Take care Rachna! 😳

Love,

Hinal 🤗

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