OS : A Chance ... - Page 7

Originally posted by: basket_101

Reserved :)

Will come back to this by tomorrow max, promise 😆

- Unres

I'm late. Whoops

😛 Had dinner at 12am... You can just imagine how my day was spent :P

Anywayyy

Coming to the actual OS now

So I was excited after watching the last few episodes of IKNMP. And then I come on the forum just to see you post the OS.

Obviously I had to check it out 😃

Firstly, I don't agree with the cheesy part. I think it was wonderfully penned out; with the right characterization!

I see him becoming this angry; it's perfectly suited to his character.

I think you've done an amazing job showing how perfect Ragini is for him. He seems to be very impulsive, but she makes him want to be better. The end was brilliant!

Was such a wonderful story to read!

Do keep writing! Please :D

Give us readers such amazing stories to read 😃

Will be waiting for more ;)

Ps. is it weird that I just found out your name? 😆

Hoping to read more from you soon!

Take care Rachna! 😳

Love,

Hinal 🤗

Same here.. It's all in my head.. But hate typing..

That was quite an amazing portrayal of sudden jealousy and the preceding guilt of Neil..

Loved how Ragini silently bears it all and their love just engulfs the whole bitterness in a moment..

Sorry, realised I'm quite late to read this.. pls do continue😳

Originally posted by: ronitfan

Same here.. It's all in my head.. But hate typing..

But you must type. Atleast wo hurt wala!!

OMG...I really cried reading it!
You described the pain which they were going through so well!
Ending was the bessst.

Originally posted by: Saabi45

That was quite an amazing portrayal of sudden jealousy and the preceding guilt of Neil..

Loved how Ragini silently bears it all and their love just engulfs the whole bitterness in a moment..

Sorry, realised I'm quite late to read this.. pls do continue😳

Originally posted by: -Spriha-

OMG...I really cried reading it!
You described the pain which they were going through so well!
Ending was the bessst.

im reading first OS of NeiRa

and Its Sinfully Beautiful

wish to read more frm u :-)

Brilliant OS.

Originally posted by: thejazzgal

im reading first OS of NeiRa

and Its Sinfully Beautiful

wish to read more frm u :-)