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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Krati🤗

I agree with everything Heytal is saying.
We miss not only the writers but also the readers.
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Due to time constraints we may not be able to reply every reader but we all read your comments so many times!
Infact whenever I feel dejected or can't bring myself to write I read all the comments and that really helps me to continue!

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PLEASE READ THIS NOTE BEFORE THE UPDATE!

A/N : This update marks the end of Hamaari Prem Kahaaani...

Though there are a couple of requests to give some more updates specially Avi (dqno1) and Tanvi Nangia, who is katti with me as she wants more Maaneet and babies moments.

So I'm ending this story here as Season 1 with this update.

Most of you know few months ago I had shifted to a new apartment but due to something or the other hadn't done up our house then but now we are getting it renovated and thats one of main reasons I wanted to finish both my stories.


Earlier the renovation was scheduled in mid April but now due to certain issues it is pre-poned so for some days all my connections will be pulled off so won't be able to update but will get back and give couple of updates with just Maaneet and cuties.

Will start my new story too once I'm back!


Hoping that you guys will be interested in the stories by the time I'm back

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PS : I'm taking creative liberty regarding the medical procedures!




Season Finale

HOSPITAL [Dehradun]

[Maan's POV]

This night has been the longest and most darkest of my life!

Standing by glass window I gazed into the darkness which had enveloped my Geet ... my babies ... my family ... my whole world in it!


Its been a couple of hours Geet has been in the operation theatre, the Drs are trying their best ... nurses running to n fro refuse to divulge anything about the situation inside. It was all my fault to have chalked out such a plan and risked their lives. Knowing Geet and her sixth sense specially when it concerns me ... I went ahead with the strategy not once thinking what if it backfires!

Shocked would have been the understatement!! ... When I saw Geet struggling there ... in Vikram's clutches. I knew that Geet would sense my absence back in Aashiana but hadn't expected her to be here. Her pain was clearly evident on her face ... she was gasping for breath. I was seething in rage seeing her suffer while I stood there helpless!


I would have killed Vikram there n then for tormenting my Geet had not Dev arrived with his family on the right time. Thankfully his mother freed Geet off his clutches otherwise ...

And that Brij he had practically ruined our life when he fired ... The thought itself scares the hell out of me! ... I owe Dev's Mom for saving Geet and my babies. All my hatred n anger for her vanished that very moment. She had once triggered the destruction of my family but yesterday she had saved my whole world from being destroyed!

But still the damage was done!

Geet went in labour due to stress and exertion. I blasted the guards and the ladies back at Aashiana for being so careless around Geet and leaving her alone in our room. If they would have kept a watch on Geet she would have been safe at home.

Even then I was the main culprit! I had risked the life of Geet and my babies. They were struggling for their life inside only because I ... in my overconfidence created such a big blunder ... They were paying for my mistake!

I closed my eyes in regret and prayed to Babaji to keep all my angels safe!!!

At the crack of dawn, the first ray of light cut through the darkness illuminating the world! ... It brought back the memory of our wedding day when Geet and I stood welcoming the new day for our life ahead!

"Uss nayi subah ka swagat humne milkar kiya tha Geet ... lekin aaj main yahan akela khada hoon ... Kya tum aaj mera saath nahi dogi!" I rued as a tear slipped down my cheek.

A screeching sound of operation theatre door broke my reverie and I glanced in that direction to see the Dr heading out. I rushed to her to inquire about my angels. She smiled at me and announced.

"Congratulations Mr Khurana! ... Aap ki wife ne judwa beton ko janam diya hain! ... Aur Mrs Khurana aur dono bacche safe hain. "

I cried in joy and loooked towards the window where the last traces of darkness seemed to vanish in the glory of sunlight! Geet had fulfilled her promise to be my side in every moment and every aspect of our life!

Today we welcomed our angels together in this world! ... Like the mighty Sun my cuties entered the world destroying every trace of darkness, pain, fear and negativity of our lives!

The Dr told us we can meet Geet once she gains her consciousness while the babies were shifted in the incubator. Though it was a premature delivery but Dr was surprised that our babies were quite healthy and if all the reports seem fine we can shift them back to Delhi soon. The gloomy atmosphere in the hospital turned to a mini celebration as every body was relieved and overjoyed with arrival of our darlings!

HOSPITAL [New Delhi]

[Dadaji's POV]

I was sitting besides the unconscious Sukhdev. He had a massive heart attack, hearing the news about Rajinder's death. The fact that he himself has ruined the entire Handa family in his greed and obsession for name, fame and wealth! Finally he had realized how wrong he has been all his life and today his evil deeds has landed them in state. Rajinder is no more and Brij too is hospitalized owing to his head injury.

Sukhdev was stable now but was not responding to the treatment. Drs informed us that probably he had lost all hope to live!

Mohinder entered the room and sat on the couch, his face tired and eyes lost. I know they had caused him too much pain yet he was worried for his father and sad for his brother. Teji and Arjun were completing the necessary legal procedures to acquire Rajinder's dead body so that we could perform his last rites.

So much had changed in matter of few hours! ... Today Ranveer and Preeti must have felt vindicated! ... Their culprit had met his end and that too on the same place where years ago they breathed their last probably ... This is Karmic Justice!!

I was worried sick for Geet and the babies since the time Vicky had informed us about the happenings back at Dehradun. Maan had planned it all perfectly with the sole motive to end all this mess before the arrival of all our babies so that they can have a safe and secured life! We hadn't expected that the whole plan will take such a drastic and dangerous turn!

Everybody had been praying to God so all three of them are safe! I so wanted to back to go back there but sometimes certain responsibilities weigh you down! He was my best friend ... my family at one point of time, but today though our relations had severed but he was alone and ill so I had to be here for him. And all I could do sitting here was to pray for Geet and the babies!

A beaming Rajiv barged in the room and announced that Geet had delivered two bonny boys! A sense of relief settled in hearing this amazing news! We all got up at once congratulating and hugging each other. Rajiv and Mohinder were overjoyed as they were grandfathers now while I was proud of being a great grand father!!

But the most surprising or shocking reaction was from Sukhdev. All of a sudden he started moving his hand, the machines started beeping to life and finally he opened his eyes.

HOSPITAL [Dehradun]

[Maan's POV]

Geet was shifted to the private room she was still unconscious but I had pleaded to the Dr to allow me in and thankfully they did allow me. All the others had returned home as they were all here since last night. Resting my back against the headboard I sat besides her caressing her head and gazing at her serene face.

She was glowing! ... Her face exuding the glow of motherhood!

Gazing at her lovely features, sleep took over and I slept holding her to me. Only when I heard faint voice calling out to me I opened my eyes and saw Geet smiling at me. I smiled back at her and then realized where n why were we here. I at once squeezed her in my arms taking care not to put any pressure on her stomach or her stitches.

But the fact that I had nearly lost them had shaken up my entire being!

Like understanding my state of mind breaking our hug she assured.

"Maan ... main theek hoon"

Her statement broke the last strand of my control.

"Tumhe ehsaas bhi hain ke inn kuch ghanto mein mujhpe kya biti hain! ... Kya zaroorat thi tumhe wahan aane ki ... Mujhpe bharosa nahi tha kya ... kyun khatre mein daali apni aur hamaare babies ki jaan ... Agar tum logon ko kuch ho jaata toh main mar jaata!" I burst out.

Placing her palm on my lips she nodded a no ... her eyes teared up.

"Yeh ek ek pal maine kaise bitaya hain yeh main hi jaanto hoon! ... Har pal mara hoon main .. Geet har pal! ... Kyun kiya aise ... Kyun?"

"Main bahot darr gayi thi!" She revealed.

"Main bhi! ... Bahot darr gaya tha! ... Aisa laga ke ek pal mein meri saari duniya hi uzad (destroyed) gayi hain!" I cried hugging her again.

"Vaada karo mujhse ab tum kabhi impulsive ho kar aisa koi kadam nahi uthaogi!" Not breaking the hug I forwarded my hand for her to promise and she readily agreed.

"Main dobara kabhi aisa nahi karungi ... I promise!"

Our moment was broken when the Dr walked in to check on Geet. She smiled at us and informed Geet and both the babies were doing good. My babies though had a premature birth but were quite healthy and thankfully had no health issue so they didn't even need an incubator and will be transferred here soon. Before we could react to this happy news the door opened again and two nurses walked in with our darlings.

The feeling was unexplainable ... heavenly! ... when we held them in our hands for the very first time!

{Thanks for this awesome edit Kavya Kaushi}


Tears of joy trickled down our faces and like understanding our frame of mind the Dr and the nurses left, letting us live this moment to the fullest!

They were so tiny .. bundled up in soft blanket and tiny little cotton cap to keep them warm. Their skin evenly blended in shades of white and pink. They would open and close their eyes every few moments. A instant feeling of protectiveness and possessiveness developed in me. They were mine and I will give them the best!



I turned to look at Geet who was looking at them in adoration! One of the baby kicked the blanket freeing his leg off it. We both laughed at his act and Geet bent forward and kissed his leg. Soon the other one who felt left behind freed his hand out.I couldn't hold on anymore and kissed both my darlings on their forehead and they blessed me with their divine smile!

But our joy for spending some quality time together was short lived as soon our family was here to meet the new entrants in our family. And all I could do was crib to have them back to me! Finally Babaji fulfilled my wish and it was time to feed the babies and all were asked to leave, the head nurse urged me to stay while she guided Geet how to feed the babies.

Something stirred deep within me and I was overwhelmed at the sight of My Geet nursing my babies!


Finally after months of worry, planning and implementing strategies to ward off our enemies ... now our lives were back to normal!

Daarji had gained conscious but wasn't recovering much ... Dev's mom was fine and thankfully Dev had forgiven his Mom and the distance between them ended ... Vikram went back home with his family but not before apologizing to all of us specially Geet for causing her pain in his madness to seek revenge!

Brij had lost his mental balance and was shifted to a mental asylum private ward as he was very violent and kept blabbering 'badla loonga ... khandaan ki izzat ... nahi chodunga' etc



Taayiji rued that this were the words that were instilled in his mind since childhood and today he has forgotten his own identity but only remembers and chants these words.

'As you sow shall you reap!!!'

And now coming over to me, my Geet and our cuties!


Few days later Geet was discharged and we were too head back to Delhi but Geet wished to visit Ashiana once with our cuties and I reluctantly agreed. Mom did the Grih-Pravesh of the babies in Ashiana. ... As it was an auspicious day I family priest suggested we name our kids today itself. So it was mutually decided we will just do a small puja here and name the children followed by a grand celebration in Delhi.

The names of my kids had become a major issue in our house all wanted to name them according to their choice. It had become a reason of another clash between the boys and girls but Dadimaa came to our rescue and declared only parents have the right to name the children. But before I could rejoice over Dadimaa declaration. My Meeshti poured cold water on my plan!


Geet's sudden announcement that the names were already decided caught me off guard! ... Everybody assumed that we both must have decided and gave in leaving me with no other but to agree.

I looked at her accusingly and sat their cribbing while Geet gave a victorious smile! Geet told Annie the names who inturn whispered them in the kids ears respectively and then announced their names loudly (In many communities Bua performs this ritual. First she whispers the name in the child's ears and then announces it loudly to all). Everybody loved their names but ...


I was astonished and overjoyed!



My Meeshti had again surprised me with her selfless love! ...She had named our babies Garv (pride) and Shaurya (valour). Both these names someway or the other were related to my name Maan!

No wonder she was so adamant to have it her way!

Ashiana again became witness to one of our precious moment! ... Coincidentally all the important moments of our life were associated with Ashiana ... And today one more added up!


Once back in Delhi our house was beaming with happiness! Dadaji, Dad and Papaji were eagerly waiting to welcome the angels. The servants, staffs, and security were waiting for their youngest owners! I was awed with the love they showered over my babies!

Seeking a right opportunity after a mini celebration Dadaji informed me about Daarji's wish to meet Geet and the babies once. I had bluntly refused but Dadaji urged me to agree as he was ailing. Not wanting to refuse Dadaji's request I gave in.

We went to meet him, though Geet was feeling very uncomfortable but tried to mask her state I held her close to me assuring her that all would be fine. Daarji was genuinely happy to meet his first great grandchildren. He gestured Papaji who inturn gave him two ancestral gold chains for our babies.



Holding both the babies in his weak arms he made them wear the chains and for the first time in my life I saw that man cry! He apologized to Geet and me for all the pain and grief that his family caused us. And then kissing our angels on their forehead he whole heartedly blessed us for our happy future.

That night Daarji passed away!

Dadaji said he was at peace in his last moments and also revealed that Beeji (Darji's wife) had come to take him ... She wasn't laughing, mocking or taunting him this time but was genuinely happy that finally Daarji had realized and repented for his deeds. This birth he didn't get a chance to make amends but probably next birth Babaji will help him out!

Teji performed his last rites as it was Daarji's last wish! Finally he had accepted Teji as his grandson.

Things had settled down in all our lives ... Teji had taken over the entire Handa group while Papaji was busy with his dream restaurant ... NT and Pammi were due anytime ... Dev was busy with his life. The marriages were again postponed as all were busy in taking care of the darlings!

And here our mansion had become very eventful! ... The cuties had turned our world around! ... The cuties had their own peculiar habits and ways to keep everybody busy. Specially Geet she would be exhausted feeding them, cleaning them, putting them to sleep etc. Though I was all the time with her but still her task was taxing! ... As they were identical they would wake up, be hungry, cry, do potty etc at the same time making it quite difficult sometimes for us.


I would make sure Geet rested well while Dadimaa, Mom and Maa were very particular about her diet. Along with the kids she too looked adorable with the little fat that she gained post pregnancy.

There were some amazing moments in the early hours of the day when only Geet and I would spend time with my babies! They would be wide awake then after their beauty sleep and would play around with each other pulling each others blankets or pulling each others hands or kicking each other. Geet and I would lovingly gaze at their natural acts. They would bless us with their innocent, unadulterated smiles when we would coo to them!

These moments were just priceless!!

They were a couple of months old so they had started to recognize everybody and also had different ways to irk and impress people around them. Like they would pull the girls hair or their long earrings ... they would pee on Vicky and Yash most of the times. With elders they would be calm and at ease! While they would be naughty with the youngsters. The servants too would look for reasons to come to our room just to get a glimpse of them.

Garv and Shaurya would go to all whom they recognized but after sometime they would make sure that they were back to us! They had visited every nook and corner of this mansion but when hungry or sleepy they would be back to our ... their room! ... Their cot ... their cradle ...their toys and to US! They would only sleep when either Geet or I were around. If we leave them in the room they would immediately wake up like they would sense our absence. Generally they were happy babies but when something irks them then their loud wails would echo in the whole mansion and both would cry together driving us all mad! ... Only when they get their way out would they calm down!

As Geet says typical Khurana attitude!

But all these cute little moments had brightened up our life!

Garv and Shaurya hamaare pyaar ki nishaani hain aur unke aane se Hamaari Prem Kahaaani koi naye maayne mil gaye!

"Jo kahaani meri aur Geet ki pehli mulaakaat se shuru hui thi ...woh har uttar-chadaav (ups and downs) ko paar kar ke aaj iss mukaam (spot or place) tak pohuch gayi hain! ... Hum dono ne apna bachpan khul kar nahi jeeya tha lekin ... ab ek naye sire se hum unke zariye hum apne bachpan ko dobara jee rahe hain!"







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Heytal


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Edited by heytal - 10 years ago
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A heartfelt Thank -you to all of you for supporting me

Being here with me even when I wasn't being able to update

I love you all

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Edited by heytal - 10 years ago
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U know i dont know how many times i read this story. when Maan met Geet with a bag and divorce papers. remembering their past. then the distance between him and his parents. Dadaji getting well. and Maneet making appearance together in award ceremony-(the pic was just damn perfect)
The background stories be it dev, ayesha, pari, teji and others. i completely loved it. everything in this story.

Thank u heytal for writing it.

( I cant write big comments, sorry for tat. )

Come back soon after renovations.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mannu_minnie

U know i dont know how many times i read this story. when Maan met Geet with a bag and divorce papers. remembering their past. then the distance between him and his parents. Dadaji getting well. and Maneet making appearance together in award ceremony-(the pic was just damn perfect)

The background stories be it dev, ayesha, pari, teji and others. i completely loved it. everything in this story.

Thank u heytal for writing it.

( I cant write big comments, sorry for tat. )

Come back soon after renovations.


I love you Mannu

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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful update
Maaneet had to 2 baby boys
The story was superb
Will be waiting for ur come back
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi hetyal
love the update ..this will be small to say for this story and ending ..it was perfect ..the way u showed maneet reaction and feelings for each other ..two babies were superb ..they filled maneet's life with happiness..last all things were fine ..happy to see them happy ..love the names sauraya and garv ...


thank u so such for wonderful writing ..
i wish many readers read this story ..its simply amazing ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
awsemm update maneet with there twin sons fabb
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A fantastic story and travel you took us through maaneet...loved each and every moment be it an up or a down...you made us laugh, cry, sad and happy at the same time...brilliant piece of writing...keep it up. Am going to miss this story so much. Thank you...alls well that ends well...

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